Canon Derailed
By Bobmin
ruth =)
An interesting take on how Harry's life would hvae been different. I like it. Could have been longer - I would have liked it if it had been. But all in all, an excellent read.
Wonderful!! I love that Harry "thumbed his nose" at Dumbly......
I can't believe that I missed reading this when you posted this. My eyes must have been looking at the screen and your web page waiting for a Mutant Storm chapter and never noticed this. A sad day in my life that I had missed this. A happy day to day that it gave me something to read while awaiting for the next chapter of Mutant storm, Wizards fall or anything that you post.
A job well-done!
No more word could express my feeling while reading this story.
Thanks for sharing, I enjoy reading very much.
Interesting starting point. It makes a lot of sense that Harry would have heard the Dursleys complain about Dumbledore dropping him on their doorstep.
Voldemort's a paperweight!! *Perfect!
Beyond that, an interesting alternative.
Short, sweet, and brutally to the point. XD I love it.
That was awesome. Great way to summarize an alternate route to Harry Potter. My only wish is that you somehow make this into a full-blown story, but perhaps that is wishing too much.
Oh well. Thank you for a greatly entertaining piece of writing.
The best to you in all your future endeavors.
Very funny! I really like the differences you've incorporated in the story. It really kills me when an author writes an AU but then includes everything that happened in the books.
Nice divergence!
That was great and the ending hilarious. Canon derailed indeed.
This one is promising, but honestly is weaker than most of your other works. It's a good idea, but not good execution. You're breaking one of the major rules of writing: you tell a lot more than
you show.
The last half of the work - the "The Years That Followed" would be far better served with showing scenes rather than just telling what happens. I've found that a good substitute for telling the rest
is to give the story in a 'vignette' format - write scattered scenes from throughout the time frame represented.
