Sunrise Over Britain

Lovely story (as was its prequel, of course). One little question though: what is a "dinning" room, and what's happening there to make it so noisy? ;)

Nice chapter. I'm surprised though that Hermione is seen at fault. What did she do wrong?
She saw Harry in emotional turmoil, rage, apparate away and close of the link completely. She found a letter that was clearly a trap and brought that letter to the authorities. She literally told Miles that she did not know where Harry is. He could be at Surrey, he could be somewhere else.
If indeed Harry went to Surrey alone there is a great chance that he would have been injured, as he was now, but captured by the enemy which would have meant Voldemort had won.
So what did she do wrong? Nothing. There are only two people at fault here and that is Miles and to a lesser extent Harry.

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Hmmm how many chapters will this story be? Frankly, Scarlet, I haven't a clue. Our chapters have been getting longer and I still can't really say how many chapters there will be. This chapter is a prime example. In our plot file the visit to see the rescued contained three whole plot points. The actuality of that section was 10 pages of scene. So the answer is, the story will contain as many chapters as necessary to get to the end. Helpful, eh?

i`d say 33 chapters :D will do proper thank you at the end

You get better and get out of bed, and you can't reread your fic at near as fast a pace. Nope, doesn't matter, every time I read the story I'm in awe at your wonderful story weaving. Pace, characters, plot..you got it all, baby!!
I was starting to feel a little cranky at Remus, and Hermione's treatment last chapter, but I thought you explained it perfectly, and that Tonks shouldn't let Remus walk around wearing the butt plug for awhile, as someone who should know better, and is allegedly more adult than the kids. But you know, it's a personal 'hey Remus, why are you walking funny and acting like an arse?' comment, not a criticism. Excelsior, y'all!!

Ok, with this chapter I have a comment to make. Turn away if you don't really feel like reading it.

The thing that's happened with the Harry-Hermione-Miles problem well my first thought when I read it was 'you authors are really picking on Hermione alot' when you wrote of her situation. With Harry...well it's almost a given that he'd go off some sort of deep end. He'd also be true to the fact he'd NOT Talk of it to anyone in the Manor. To me, that part was very spot on. With Miles...*shrugs* now that he's hospilalized makes sense that he'd be such a Guy and NOT admit to being Sick till he FALLS OVER! (Unless of course he's in some type of close enough relationship that said partner would Drag them kicking and cursing to the doctor's appointment.)

So by the way things are going with Remus and Hermione they seem to be getting along again despite what happened. As for the press confrence, I guess all governments are all the same world-wide. Inept at times. Sooo we're going to have to deal with 'Mad-Eyes' need for 'Constant Vigilance' in an upcomming chapter huh? DO say you will, there could be lots of fun with his character in Haven or in Hogwarts!

Moody may be an old warhorse but I’d rather he was working for me than against me.
"Thou art a gem among a field of dull stones and thy brilliance doth dazzle the eye and taketh away the breath!” Actual Shakespeare or just the flavor?

Yay, more Moody! I like the dynamic between him and Dumbledore; I know you've said he won't be a big part of the story, but I'm still hoping to see more of him!

Very good story.

gunny

*sigh* You were doing so well too...

I must have been a beta in my past life... I wasn't aware buns could flap, in a breeze or otherwise. :)

Now onto the next chapter! You guys have been in a frenzy, lately... you're just about matching your original posting schedule!

Very nice chapter. I liked Moody and Albus's conversation and the way you had Harry and Hermionie work stuff out, you didn't mention a whole list of people who share the blame for the abortion of a rescue mission but there were enough to show that it was no one person's fault.
This chapter also fixed the problem of their forces seeming too well orgenized by making it clear they'd allowed Miles to become a point failure for the entire system.

One thing, sooner or later you're going to have to have some of the good guys whom we've gotten to know die. It is a war and having only unnamed grunts die will sooner or later become unbelivable.

The Unicorn

Very well.... i hope the story will continue soon. very soon!!!!

mfg

Wow. Amazing work on the last 7 chapters, I was way behind on reading and reviews and caughtup the other day on a slow weekend. Amazing work on the continued development of the plot especialyl nutso dumbledore, the small issues hermione has had with doing things with out more thinking, etc and harry's smaller issues. The raid on Azkahban was awesome as was the angel's luna created. Truly awesome. twisted work with riddle and such also and his ritual of power stealing...suprised the ghosts haven't reported the new trend yet either. Great job with all the dialogue and sub-bits that are going, hope to see more moody also! Cheers and all! Also I love the list of shame! :)

Great chapter...it took me a bit to get to it but I thoroughly enjoyed. My thinking of Miles' decision on sending in the attack team without scouting was the simple fear of something happening to potter. Even though it turned out a mistake, he paniced and did his best to get support for Harry (even though he never went back Surrey). Just my thought...the fault lies at Harry's feet for not flaming the note from Lucious.

A lot of updates recently huh? Yay!!!! Three cheers for Alyx lol Bob's a woman abuser so he doesn't get anything. It'll be interesting to see what Voldy does now since hes going on the defensive now with the recent attack on Azkaban and the morale boost the world got out of it.

Very well done chaps! I haven't really got the time to reply to the fullest but i willl try.

I have read all of your storys to their so far completed potenial and I must say "good show!"
Please keep up the good work. It is marvoulous work so far and i wish to see it continue,
Ailish

I love your work, I always feel giddy after finishing one of your chapters; I especially love your attention to detail and staying with the plot! I do have one request...could you post everyone ages in the brotherhood? I can't seem to find it, if it was there, and I feel a bit muddled at times trying to picture everyone. Thanks you guys are brilliant!

Alyx here.  This seemed the quickest way of answering your question. The following are the ages of the Brotherhood members.

Harry - 17, Hermione 18 (As of Chapter 15 - Upcoming)
Draco - 17, Luna - 16
Neville - 17, Ginny - 16
Terry - 17, Susan - 17
Remus - 38, Tonks - 24
Dan - 41, Emma - 40

Hope this helps clear up the confusion for you!

For the past month or so I have been trying to find the time to actually sit down and read more than one paragraph. I finally managed the time and got to read the last three chapters, and I must say they are some of the best chapters I have read in the story. It was interesting to see that even though Harry has super powers, he can still be injured under the wrong circumstances. The discussion between Harry and Hermione in the aftermath was well written, and I can see how it will help both of them grow up. I'm sorry to see Miles have to step down, but ulcers are a nasty business. I like how in your stories, magic can't cure everything, kind of brings home the point magic can't do everything. Looking forward to your next chapter next month.

Dave

Well, at least somebody else sees Dumbledore as a phycho (my hats off to Moody!) Good chapter, folks, and I'm now realizing why Hermione and Miles did in the last chapter. DUH ME! Anyways, good chappie, and update soon!

YAY!! I was hoping for Ragnok and some of the goblins to come over for dinner at some point. I think its really cool that Harry made the offer. You've done a great job with Harry as a character in this story, everything is very realistic. Harry suffers casualties and even Hermione makes mistakes.

Will the goblins be offering any support to Harry? You would think that even though they don't necessarily have armies they would have some trained as guards and whatnot. But maybe I'm just expecting too much to come from this dinner with the goblins?

Perhaps when Oliver Wood recovers he could head up a squad of broom fighters or scouts or something? Just a suggestion...