Sunrise Over Britain
By Bobmin
What's a boffin?
Even if you aren't modeling them after Stargates, it's not a bad idea. Besides, a large scale evacuation portal is a good idea. If the Death Eaters swarm Haven, the town residents could flee to Fiji, or any other normally too distant place.
Ok I haven't finished this chapter. To be Honenest I've just gotten to the party about the oprha, but I went to school in NYC and would like to thank you for bringing up the WTC. When I was 9 I stood on the top of the roof of the north tower and I remember how little the world looked. i never thought that the building would someday be destoyed. I've read a lot of Hp fanfiction and in every story i've read when Harry goes to NY he is either ignores the buildings or mentions their collapse. I know it's just one line or two in your story, but I love the WTC not b/c of what it later came to represent, but because of what it made me see when I was younger. I do enjoy all your stories and i'll try to become a faithful reviewer
I was going to ask what boffins were but I read on and found out.
Wonderful chapter especially Arthur ‘s confession.
Great chapter! I like the new role of Mad-Eye.
Help. Chapter 15 looks corrupted.
Weird text starts a few lines below the section "Dinner with Ragnok and company...".
Another fine chapter.
gunny
Well after yet another computer crash and an installation of Windows XP Professional otherwise known as I HATE SPAM!!!! I have finally caught up with the story again!
I can't wait for the next chapter in the story! Boy howdy! that was def a cliffy for the Duke and Duchess of Disclaimers and Destruction ... yes I the Queen Mum of the Royal Family of Cliffies have
gifted you with a title... you SHOULD feel honoured...
Even Kinsfire has a Knighthood He's Sir Kinsfire...
So welcome finally to the Royal Family!
Just so you know, the little tornado that came through Provo earlier last week did quite a bit of damage to our apartment complex uprooting really big trees and cutting out power (and here I had just
signed my unpaid Internship with Americorp *Vista to represent the Apartment Community the day before!) We had been told by Provo Power that we would be without power for up to 4 days... we got it
back by 7pm that night ... Anyway... Great chapter Loved the bonding with the Angels... Loved Arthur's Rant to his family! That was just priceless...
Take care, and hope to read more real soon...
As Always,
Muirnin - Queen Mum et al.
PS. This review was interupted 5 times by spam pop ups!
i was wondering if i could could copy the ur gyes fic and put on my pda, so i can reas wherever i go.
Hmm, nice chapter. Some things did raise some questions however. Sadly I can only remember one of them. About the Wizengamot, I'm wondering if they actually have power at the moment. You say
they're like the muggle parlement. But the parlement does not have power when not in their country. And Haven is not Britain. The Wizengamot holds power over Britain not Haven. Maybe they could try
to arrest Voldemort?
Oohh!! Romania :D
Do you know how funny Gisca pe varza sounds? :D Aaanyway, it's Gasca :)
Goose on cabbage. I mean, really. *snickersnicker*
Nice chapter, you two :)
Chris
Poor mouse. Stupid underfed cat... lol
On a side note wonderful chapter.
Great chapter, nothing else to say but keep up the wonderful work and update soon!
-Jake
This is very very cool. Angels mating was a tad strange but the creation of them was very good! I have to say that your evil for your cliffie's!!
Will you take the Dumbledore thing all the way to the final battle, or will you clear up that sub-plot before hand?
The piss take of Arthur Weasley was brilliant, you knew straight away that she hadn't told them but you still did that scene very well.
Keep updating please!!
Monkey
Hi,
Great story/chapter/fanfic/plot and that rot. :)) Where do you get the inspiratioN?? Just wondering, does harry and Hermione's love bickerings are the same as you and Alyx's bickerings?? lol
j/k
Anywaz, here are a few questions/suggestions for you:
1. Will fawkes be making an appearance? It will be good if he comes along and joins harry at his side
2. How about the animals in the forbidden forest? Centaurs/mermaids for example, surely harry should be contacting them
By the way, great story all round!
Are we gona see the technicolor Penguins?
And have you visited the lovely lakes? But be carefull moose bites are quite nasty.
I am also still wondering how that new creature creation mojo work? And shame on you for the cliffie!
Great, as usual! Update soon! :)
Hey! I just realized something...
Harry may not be able to die as everyone keeps reminding me, but the cat could. Or Harry could... but a Harry story without harry is just hairy. Sorry!
Lots could still happen. Maybe lose a leg for a bit or show up somewhere strange or hularious.
CRUEL CLIFFY!!!
SO CRUEL!!!!!!!
why must you do this to me??? =)
Love ya's!
Good work
I love this story! X Saida