Content Harry Potter
 
Back to: Harry Potter » Sunrise Over Britain » Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark

Sunrise Over Britain

By Bobmin

Previous Next
Name: Jdnokc
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Saturday 27th February 2010 1:40pm
I'm a little confused, anyone who was that willing and able to so easily kill would have a black aura. So how did he or she get past those supposed wards?
Name: kinkade0001
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Saturday 16th May 2009 1:05pm

OK, I'm only to the part before the raid, but even I can see the flaw in the planing. If the camp is warded against portkeys and apparation,fighting an entrenched enemy on their own ground is the last thing they should do. If it were me, I'd send in elves with flash-bangs and satchel charges for the guard barracks and the towers. I'd Flood the camp with wand interdictors and use breaching charges to make entry in the walls. I'd come hard, and unlike the last time (inset Draco getting grabbed by a prisoner) I'd stun EVERYONE to keep the prisoners under control. I'd attack at night when 3/4 of the enemy are asleep in their beds, and I'd outfit my people with night-vision, muggle 1911's and 20mil grenade launchers for entrenched positions. When it was all over, I'd rig the place to blow once enough death eater reinforcements arrived.

Name: Graham V
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Tuesday 19th February 2008 5:05pm

Great Story! and though again this is umimportant and irrelevant because you've finished this fanfiction but because Mr and Mrs Granger are actually each respectively a wizard and witch shouldn't Hermione be considered at least a half blood more likely a full blood? Just a thought keep up the great work. Just want to personally thank you for giving me fanfiction reading material to last until I'm 40.

Name: dennisud
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Sunday 16th December 2007 2:19pm

I'm really getting to hate your louthsome characters and that is good. You have the feffect you wanted here.

Can't wait to see what come up next!

dennisud

Name: Selma Flamel
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Wednesday 6th June 2007 3:05am

“Lord Potter's role is unique. He is an anachronism; the very ideal of what we want our heroes to be; modest, humble and noble. Yet he hates his fame and his titles. He wants nothing more than to be just Harry Potter.”

Simply excellent.

Name: IamNotawriter
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Sunday 29th April 2007 2:07am

No offense intended Alyx, but isn't Fanfic author one of the definitions of insanity?

All in all I've greatly enjoyed both Sunset and Sunrise, to this point. Thank you both.

I am wondering about the Owl and the prisoners remaining in the Azkaban prision itself. Does that eventually get resolved?

Name: Pete
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Friday 15th September 2006 10:22pm

Hehehehe. Ernst Stavro Blofeld makes it to the Potterverse. I love it. It's been forever since I read On Her Majesty's Secret Service. Tell me, Mr. Bond, does he have earlobes? :-)

Cheers, and keep up the great work,
Pete

Name: TxA_GunFighter
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Wednesday 6th September 2006 7:33am

Very good story.

gunny

Name: mathiasgranger
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Saturday 2nd September 2006 11:30am

Didn't catch the Blofeld reference last time I read this. Nice little Bond reference for the uninitiated. My god this whole Wizengamot thing is going to drive me crazy. Politicans are one of the biggest problems in the world, racist power mongering politicans are the biggest problem. You can trace a lot of bad things back to politicans and their horrible decisions. Please update soon!

Matt

Name: azureguy86
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Wednesday 30th August 2006 2:26pm

I love your writing skills, it's just so refreshing sometimes to read a fanfic where i actually understand what is written. Keep up the good work and i'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Name: SailorAlgol
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Tuesday 29th August 2006 2:57am

Great writing, as always.

Just a quick question:
What would the soundtrack be during Wizengamot and their comitee's scenes?

SailorAlgol

Name: pheonixX
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Thursday 24th August 2006 11:02pm

I have read all of your stories so far and they have taken me a bit of time to read including the one's on Fanfiction.net and they are hot!! One of the things I like most is the way you portray harry you dont make me unrealistic which is what some authors do. But anyways off topic....Great work....LOVE IT!!
PheonixX

Name: Erik Wiggins
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Thursday 24th August 2006 8:04am

Thanks for great chapter, where was my e-mail letting me know it was in? I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Name: Donald McLeod
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Thursday 24th August 2006 3:29am

Agean welldone. your story has great cliffies and flow; I love it.

Name: erin_colien
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Wednesday 23rd August 2006 4:25am

great update looking forward to the next.

Name: xandrian
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Tuesday 22nd August 2006 6:21am

I've spent the last few days getting caught up through this series and your other on FF. I've enjoyed the series overall, so I just wanted to thank you both for keeping the story coming so quickly.

Best wishes to you both feeling better soon.

Name: Lang
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Tuesday 22nd August 2006 4:51am

So, I hear you guys are going to have words, sentences and paragraphs in your next chapter. I don't think it can be done!

There's absolutely no way you can put all three in one chapter.

And, if you are able to, i'll allow you to use me in your disclaimers.

(yes that was me trying to be sneaky using reverse psychology to get in a disclaimer)

Name: Rebel Goddess
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Tuesday 22nd August 2006 3:09am

I rather like the effect of the Wizengamot on proceedings as it makes sure the war is being fought on more fronts than one. Moody helping out the British army is also extremely fun. More please. Excellent chapter. And finally, ouch! Poor Neville!

Name: Mel Evans
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Monday 21st August 2006 11:21am

Firstly, I think I should thank my lucky stars that I have never met anyone like Amhar. What an absolutely horrible human being!

I'm loving the story so far, although I would definitely like to see more of the pranks that are going on at hogwarts.

How good would an enounter between Peeves and Lucius be? and surely the hogwarts ghosts could do something particularly humiliating to Snape as well while they're at it? I'm not nearly creative enough to come up with a good suggestion, but I'm sure between the two of you he could be sufficiently punished! Perhaps in the leadup to the missions to the two prisoner of war camps, the ghosts could steal all of the DEs clothes or something.. have them all turn up in the nude to defend the camps. Would give the aurors and harry's friends some interesting targets if nothing else..


Name: vl100butch
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Whispers in the dark
Posted On: Monday 21st August 2006 4:02am

Amhar needs to die, painfully. I personally think it would be a hoot to have a Royal Navy Sea King land outside of Haven with two individuals on board...King Charles III and the Duke of York (aka Prince Andrew) who would then visit and dissolve the Wizgemont (or however the heck it's spelled)

I hope you have a scene where Harry & co are taken to see the massed armada at sea --- proud names, Ark Royal, Invincible, Enterprise, Wasp, Hornet, et al...and a scene where the pure bloods get the total crap scared out of them by the opening of the air bridge into Ireland.

Displaying 1 to 20 of 58. 1 | 2 | 3 | Next »
Previous Next
bottom left