Sunrise Over Britain
By Bobmin
OK, I'm only to the part before the raid, but even I can see the flaw in the planing. If the camp is warded against portkeys and apparation,fighting an entrenched enemy on their own ground is the
last thing they should do. If it were me, I'd send in elves with flash-bangs and satchel charges for the guard barracks and the towers. I'd Flood the camp with wand interdictors and use breaching
charges to make entry in the walls. I'd come hard, and unlike the last time (inset Draco getting grabbed by a prisoner) I'd stun EVERYONE to keep the prisoners under control. I'd attack at night when
3/4 of the enemy are asleep in their beds, and I'd outfit my people with night-vision, muggle 1911's and 20mil grenade launchers for entrenched positions. When it was all over, I'd rig the place to
blow once enough death eater reinforcements arrived.
Great Story! and though again this is umimportant and irrelevant because you've finished this fanfiction but because Mr and Mrs Granger are actually each respectively a wizard and witch shouldn't
Hermione be considered at least a half blood more likely a full blood? Just a thought keep up the great work. Just want to personally thank you for giving me fanfiction reading material to last until
I'm 40.
I'm really getting to hate your louthsome characters and that is good. You have the feffect you wanted here.
Can't wait to see what come up next!
dennisud
“Lord Potter's role is unique. He is an anachronism; the very ideal of what we want our heroes to be; modest, humble and noble. Yet he hates his fame and his titles. He wants nothing more
than to be just Harry Potter.”
Simply excellent.
No offense intended Alyx, but isn't Fanfic author one of the definitions of insanity?
All in all I've greatly enjoyed both Sunset and Sunrise, to this point. Thank you both.
I am wondering about the Owl and the prisoners remaining in the Azkaban prision itself. Does that eventually get resolved?
Hehehehe. Ernst Stavro Blofeld makes it to the Potterverse. I love it. It's been forever since I read On Her Majesty's Secret Service. Tell me, Mr. Bond, does he have earlobes? :-)
Cheers, and keep up the great work,
Pete
Very good story.
gunny
Didn't catch the Blofeld reference last time I read this. Nice little Bond reference for the uninitiated. My god this whole Wizengamot thing is going to drive me crazy. Politicans are one of the
biggest problems in the world, racist power mongering politicans are the biggest problem. You can trace a lot of bad things back to politicans and their horrible decisions. Please update soon!
Matt
I love your writing skills, it's just so refreshing sometimes to read a fanfic where i actually understand what is written. Keep up the good work and i'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Great writing, as always.
Just a quick question:
What would the soundtrack be during Wizengamot and their comitee's scenes?
SailorAlgol
I have read all of your stories so far and they have taken me a bit of time to read including the one's on Fanfiction.net and they are hot!! One of the things I like most is the way you portray
harry you dont make me unrealistic which is what some authors do. But anyways off topic....Great work....LOVE IT!!
PheonixX
Thanks for great chapter, where was my e-mail letting me know it was in? I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Agean welldone. your story has great cliffies and flow; I love it.
great update looking forward to the next.
I've spent the last few days getting caught up through this series and your other on FF. I've enjoyed the series overall, so I just wanted to thank you both for keeping the story coming so
quickly.
Best wishes to you both feeling better soon.
So, I hear you guys are going to have words, sentences and paragraphs in your next chapter. I don't think it can be done!
There's absolutely no way you can put all three in one chapter.
And, if you are able to, i'll allow you to use me in your disclaimers.
(yes that was me trying to be sneaky using reverse psychology to get in a disclaimer)
I rather like the effect of the Wizengamot on proceedings as it makes sure the war is being fought on more fronts than one. Moody helping out the British army is also extremely fun. More please. Excellent chapter. And finally, ouch! Poor Neville!
Firstly, I think I should thank my lucky stars that I have never met anyone like Amhar. What an absolutely horrible human being!
I'm loving the story so far, although I would definitely like to see more of the pranks that are going on at hogwarts.
How good would an enounter between Peeves and Lucius be? and surely the hogwarts ghosts could do something particularly humiliating to Snape as well while they're at it? I'm not nearly creative
enough to come up with a good suggestion, but I'm sure between the two of you he could be sufficiently punished! Perhaps in the leadup to the missions to the two prisoner of war camps, the ghosts
could steal all of the DEs clothes or something.. have them all turn up in the nude to defend the camps. Would give the aurors and harry's friends some interesting targets if nothing else..
Amhar needs to die, painfully. I personally think it would be a hoot to have a Royal Navy Sea King land outside of Haven with two individuals on board...King Charles III and the Duke of York (aka
Prince Andrew) who would then visit and dissolve the Wizgemont (or however the heck it's spelled)
I hope you have a scene where Harry & co are taken to see the massed armada at sea --- proud names, Ark Royal, Invincible, Enterprise, Wasp, Hornet, et al...and a scene where the pure bloods get
the total crap scared out of them by the opening of the air bridge into Ireland.

