Sunrise Over Britain

This chapter really illustrated a catchphrase used often in the DragonLance saga:
"Evil turns upon itself; Good redeems its own"

Nice work.

Your forte, as a writer, seems to be battle scenes, and you do a bang-up job of it. Great job on this one.

Amen! Fuck politics, politicians and those goddamn French sonsofbitches! Oh, and very nice battle scene, i loved this chapter

I like the bloopers, however I'm not too fussed on the battle.

Good chapter. Very readable. Kept my attention (unlike the Amhar plot line -- doesn't he seem a bit unreal? I know there are idiots out there who ignore the nose on their face [just read up about Ensign Francis Schlosser and Ft. St. Joseph during the Pontiac uprising], but they are incompetents who end up falling flat on the nose they're ignoring, aren't they? I suppose you've got something similar for Amhar up your sleeve. I'll try and be patient. But the man is a bit trying.).

I've gotta hand it to you...You two have THE best disclaimers out there on the market...uh...net. Especially helpful to those needing a laugh over here in Iraq. Thanks.

Brilliant as usual!
Only problem is you say that they portkey to the south of england, and leeds ain't in the south. It may be when the elves leave u say it.

Monkey

Hi,
Me again, third review in 2 weeks for this chapter. just sending you a blooper, but Whydoyouneedtoknow's dangerverse

This from Sirius “I will never kiss a girl in public” Black. (Lupin)

When did he say that? (Danger)

Fifth year. James asked him if that meant he’d kiss a boy in public. I’m not sure he ever found all his teeth (Lupin)

hmmm, is Sirius Gay???

I hate to double post but I have a quick message for everyone about the little obnoxious guy that pops up around Luna .... THAT IS A CRUMPLE HORNED SNORKACK!!!

sorry... please continue

oh yea btw... i was wondering if u guys have read the psychic serpent by barb as well as its two sequels... its a really good story i got hooked almost as fast as i did with your stories... its taken me a ton of time to recommend them because i was trying to decide if it really was a good story, the first one got some sort of really good award or something... anywho

http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/barb/HPATPS.html

http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/barb/HPATTOGI.html

http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/barb/HPATTP.html

hope u enjoy

I can not even put into words how incredible this story line has been.

I read Sunset in two days. I read Sunrise in three (up to chapter 19) and now I am going through withdrawals.

Your plot line and character development are exceptional.

Please keep up the good work.

BTW, per JKR, she is planning on killing off two of the main characters. She gave a brief interview while speaking about fighting with customs to carry her hand-written manuscript with her on a flight! She was afraid that it would be stolen.

great story so ar. can't wait for the update.

First off I love the Story.

as far as Amhar Coeur de Lion and a few of the other Wizengamot members goes I think someone needs to snap them back to reality. They have no real power and will not have any for quite a while, Even after they get back to England, several key points for this.
1) Haven is an IRISH Town, Regardless of who owns it or who lives there.
2) What punishment can they possible hand out, There is no Prison and Harry is the only one with money.
3) Going back to England is not as simple as just winning the War, rebuilding is going to take years. First the treaty between the Goblins and Britsh Ministry of Magic will have to be renegotiated since without money nothing else is going to happen. Then the actual rebuilding can begin, and lets not forget what requirements the King, the Prime Minister and all the other involved govements are going to impose to ensure that this doesn't happen again.
4) They are still going to have to convince all people to move back. Most people cannot afford and are not willing to start all over again.

Here's one for your bloopers :) It's in The New World of Bellerophon30. He/She/it? is a great writer, but even the greatest make mistakes.

“A bit too much, yeah. Until Hogwarts I’d never been out of England, let alone the country.”

Fanfiction.net The brave new world


I love your stories. Please don't ever stop writing :)

Amhar Coeur de Lion has seriously got to die soon

Great chapter. Are we going to see Dumbledore any time soon? I really want to see a Dumbledore and Harry showdown.

Very nice chapter, Loved the huge battle. You two have a nice descriptive way of writing that allows the imagination to picture detail to the very degree of reality.

For the comment about the Union Jack/Union Flag thing, It would be the Union Jack on display, for it is a rallying point for more countries than just Britain. I'm an Aussie, so i'd know about it. :P

Also, good to hear some inclusion of an Australian Magical Community. Many people forget, when writing fics, that we are a large enough country to have our own community, and enough unused space that it wouldn't even be necessary to hide it from muggle view. Kudos to you for your remembrance.

On another Aussie note, are the twigs on the Excalibur arranged into the standard Green and Gold display, or at least the lettering imprinted on it? If not i shall Incendio your clothes, with you still wearing them.

Very good action, you do battles well. I love it when the bad guys get their asses kicked.

gunny

Great story so far!!

Sorry to keep asking about soundtracks, but what about entrance music for Amhar? I'm thinking lighthearted comic-relief... :D

Keep it up!

SailorAlgol

Great story.

Here is a good blooper I ran across today.

“Well, I expect you would too if the fat of the free world rested on your shoulders,” muttered Ron testily, jumping to Harry’s defence before he even realised it.

This is from the story Marked by Rosie5

The URL is http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2557032/33/Marked chapter 33