Sunrise Over Britain

Im a little confused here as well. In the early chapters when they took the town public you specifically stated that the Fidelius would NOT be dropped around the Manor but first you had your Amhar character and now Dumbedore and his mercs able to see and approach the house???

I LOVE FUZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!
That is all. I started this series along with almost all of your other ones about six months ago. I suppose I should blame college for taking so long to get this far, but I'm soooo happy I've got the chance to continue!!
But yes, I love Fuzz, I want one. XDD

Small goof.

Reaching out, he caressed her check lightly, his eyes bright. “Important? To who?”

Check should be cheek.

Good job keeping Harry from being SUPER. I mean not being able to handle something that other wizards learn to deal with on a semi-regular basis.

I know Voldemort is the overall bad guy, but Dumbledore is beginning to seem like a really big problem to me. There are few things scarier than an insane man who thinks he is doing good and that he is the only one who deserves to decide who should be in charge.

“The Office is important, not the man. If something happened to me, there are now several qualified people who would be able to fill my role and continue with the work.” If only more elected officials felt that way

Harry gives great presents…I’m a bit jealous of Linda’s dragon. I wish I could find one.

Could the Arch’s curse have anything to do with fire and brimstone raining down on you…after all they went through and then came the firebreathing camels? Just a thought.

Much as I hate to say it, Mione owes Luna an apology...

Loved the warm canines quip.

Thanks for writing long chapters.

well, that curse that you mentioned abouth the arch must have some use, so i'm guesing this isn't the last we see of that old fool....

Hey you two. Don't know where you're getting all the bloopers from. These were picked out of this chapter.

“Alright, we'll all here,” Amelia said tensely. -- Don't know about what "we will all here" means, but I'm sure you meant "we're all here"

Harry waved his hand dismissively. “No, Dobby, your family and family helps each other. I got you something for you to give your sweetheart,” he said, handing him a small, velvet box. -- your is used frequently when you mean "you're" or you are as in this statement about Dobby. "No, Dobby, you're family and family helps each other."

It's the little things, but I do love this story --- you write a fight scene unlike most I've seen before.

I have been following your series for awhile and I'd like to say this by far the best story I read over the net..

To all those people who complain about it being canon or too ooc tell them to write their own stories.

Very good, love the good times parts.
Make the bad guys really pay.

gunny

Its been a while since I last reviewed, but the story is still brilliant as ever.

when is the next update commin ??????????????????????????????????????/

good chapter update soon

Killing house-elves is horrible. Mulciber's using his daughter as a concubine is too foul. Warm canines was such a funny line. Tiny criticism - Dilly seems to say "do" an awful lot. You write Dobby perfectly though. The final part with Dumbledore and the Snorkack was great. I love the way you used it. More please. Great chapter. Lobstering a butt is too horrible to think about.

Wow! Awesome chapter guys!!
The fact that all the X-mas stuff can get a little soppy doesn't matter so much when you end it with the end of a story line like that. Dumbledore needed to die, I liked the way you did it too. As I wasn't sure if I should be happy he died or sad. He was barmy by the end and that earns him a little sympathy.

I kind of find Harry and Hermione's speech to the elves, after finding out about Voldemort's starting to kill them all, a little goody goody. I know its right and I'd want elf rights but it just seemed that it could have gone unsaid.

I really like the line from Arthur, about "warm canines"! So perfectly Arthur Weasley.

Monkey

So I know you're not going to take the time edit and post DA/SC and I agree with your reasons (not that my assent means much of anything) ... oh bugger, now I'm rambling and that wasn't supposed to happen.

What I meant to say was that I've been using the times between SOB postings to read DA and now SC and it suddenly occured to me that you're using real place names. I didn't have time to check every chapter of every story you've ever posted, but a spot check of 5 random chapters from the DA, SC and the two SOBs didn't turn up a single made up muggle location. All of which is by way of asking if you:

A) Do loads of research to make the geography work out

B) Lived in the UK for a spell

or

C) have ye olde moste excellent Brit-pickers?

thank you for your wonderful contribution to Fannon,

bimalc

Oh Gawd what a torturous time I had rereading this story from the beginning... not that it was bad... I love this story! Earthlink FUTZED up my system real bad with 2600+ virus's and all they can say is oops sorry...

Anyway, Finally, I have caught up ... but before I review this chapter I wanted to make sure that you guys were alright. I heard that there was some tornado's in Idaho yesterday but of course they didn't say WHERE (us poor Utah folk don't get told anything) and they generally give us the gentler, kinder weather like Oh it was a Super-cell or a Microcluster Ah excuse me but those are alternate terms for an F-1 tornado! When we had one come through here at the Boulders and the Airport (Taking out the Air Tower) they called it a Supercell like it would be less damaging!

Anyway, this was a great bunch of chapters (it took me a while to catch up - I have been without Internet since August 3rd.

I tried to send you donuts to

Bob & Alyx
c/o Bobmin
Northern Idaho

but the package came back empty with a love letter from USPS saying Package undeliverable but thanks for the Donuts they were delicious ... Send milk next time.

Blame the Postal Service ...

*GRIN*

I love the addition of your typos now ... some of the ones I have read have made me cringe when I read. I've actually gotten to the point where I edit as I read *rolls eyes*

Hmmm... perhaps for your disclaimers you can have Peeves create some havoc ... between him and the Bloody Baron I'm sure they could do some real interesting stuff to 'amuse' your audience. Or Live from Hogwarts ... It's Saturday Night! Starring Lord Voldemort!

Sorry, I'm rambling, It' nearing that NaNoWriMo time of year and I HAD to reread your work to get my Disclaimer fixes in (need to also read a few others) so that I can get my word count up this year 2K just won't cut it... I won't ask if you both are insane enough for NaNo because WE NEED MORE SUNRISE *GRIN*

I'm stocking up on Coffee, and all my essentials so I will be ready to go come November 1st.

Miss you guys Hope all is well Keep writing and stay well!

As Always,
Muirnin - who really will send you donuts if I have an accurate address that the USPS won't hijack!

I really love this story. I usually don't read stories that aren't complete, but I read the first one not knowing there was a sequel and I couldn't not read what was up of the sequel (i think it was up to chapter 13 at that point) I check my email inbox constantly to see if there are any updates. Keep up the good work.

And i'm glad Dumbledore died in this chapter, he was starting to get annoying!!

How about crabbing a breast

I love Fuzz I love Fuzz I love Fuzz.
Ok, I said this so I better stoped right now.
Albus is dead? high time for him to bide the grass. Interesting fact you wrote about the Arch. I has divine power and ought not to be used lightly? Does that meant that Albus -mad- on- the-block would suffered in his afterlife?.Perhaps some kind of deity would be quite angrier that the one that ought to help Harry was the one helping him the least.
Voldy is acting like himself but Im intrigued but Snape pet, the woman he used as servant. I do hope that she would be able to come free even she would have problem to cope with the dealing of her imprissoment.
And poor Houseelves but they arent that poor compared to the muggles they have still magic and would fleed from the country.
Eh it meant that the muggle would be used as servant because the Deatheater would not spent their time cleaning and making food in the kitchen. And last where are the Hogwarts gohsts??. Will we see them again?.
Waiting for another update in two to 3 weeks,
May the muse be with you
Cheers

Bloody brilliant!
I've read "Sunset" and the first 21 chapters of "Sunrise" over the last three days. You are wonderful writers.
I will continue to follow this as new chapters are posted.