Sunrise Over Britain
By Bobmin
maybe i wasn't paying close enough attention, but when did O'Dalley stop being Irish? he keeps saying it's the Irish' problem, but he came into this story as the Irish liaison to Haven, and even though he is a citizen of Haven, i don't remember that he ever stopped being Irish.
Normally I only leave a review in the last chapter, but I'd forget about the JR comment if I did that, so bravo. But the quote is, more correctly, "Who shot JR?"
When you are a teacher (a good caring one) then the students are yours. I offer to Minerva my well wishes on a speedy recovery.
“Behave yourself or I'll trade you in on a puppy.” Funny
I'm SOOOO glad you didn't kill off Peeves. And I very much look forward to reading about what he and his new friends get up to at Hogwarts...This is just so much fun!!!
"The bus vanished again, leaving a red smear on the stage.
“You can't do that! You killed JR!” screamed Alyx.
“Too late, I just did it,” replied Bob smugly."
.And now we know who killed JR.
Awesome story that has kept me spellbound for almost a week (between the 2 stories)
I hope there is a messy comeupance(sp?) for Mr De Lion coming. He really yanked my chain.
Thank you very much for writing and I eagerly await the next installment.
FINALLY J.K. GETTING KILLED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O I LOVE IT
otherwise the chapter was good :)
Bob,
Couldn't find you e-mail address, so I am leaving you a blooper I found in a review. The story is called, We, in Faith, by Elagabalus. Chapter URL is http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2392328/7/. About
halfway down it says “Dress robes will born,”.
Enjoy,
Hesuse
I know that the Holiday season makes it hard as Real Life interfers, but could you sneak another Chapter in before the year ends, as a Christmas Present to all your fans?
It's been some time, since I last had the time to read and enjoy your fanfiction. (This little inconvenience named Real Life really likes to mess with that.)
Enough of that. Kudos for your marvellous work! It's a real pleasure to read your story, to follow the development of the different characters and I like the fact, that you work with such a variety
of point of views (Is that the correct phrase?).
Regards from Germany,
Grey-Wings
....I have no idea where to start. This story is just so magnificent that it's overwhelming to even think that I could possibly let you
know how much I love it in one review.
I've deliberately held off on reviewing this story until I caught up with it, because I wanted to be able to give you guys a whole review.
Let me start off with -- OH. MY. LORD. -is dead- Your descriptive power that you've harnessed in writing this story is just...phenomenal. There has never been a time when I've questioned 'what does
that mean, exactly?', when normally, I do.
Secondly, I applaud you on flexing your writing muscle in writing a ship that you don't support. That in itself is incredibly admirable.
Third, the characters -- You've managed to make the characters your own, while at the same time managing to keep them the same 'people' we know and love. You've brought some that we don't normally
see into play, and molded them into dynamic, '3-D' characters, and it's simply incredible.
And last, the plot. Which happens to be incredible. The slow [and steady -- it's at the perfect pace, trust me] progression of this has just left my jaw on the floor as I continue to read this.
Extraordinary job.
Some of the things I found wonderful [whether disturbing or happy]:
-Dumbledore giggling...very, very graphic. Dumbledore's fall in general was written wonderfully.
-The Matura Magicus back in Sunset. Who else could have thought of that? Certainly not me. And it was such a wonderful plot device to make Harry powerful enough to handle Ol' Voldie.
-The ships. I'm a HHr person myself, but I love ALL the ships in this story. Which is rare, I assure you. Normally I don't care about the rest of the characters. In this story, I do.
-Amhar. You've created such a wonderful plot device with this character -- one that we all love to hate. While he's not my favorite character, I do adore him...in a twisted way. Not that I don't want
him to die, mind you.
-The Dementor blade. Genius. No one else could have thought up such a thing.
-Luna's being Child of Gaea (Gaia?). Again, another wonderful creation. As well as with Ginny's power.
...and I've exhausted everything that I can think of right now. But trust me, there's plenty more.
And now, like every bad reviewer, I demand answers out of you!
1) Will we ever read more into Hermione's lineage?
2) When will Susan's baby be born?
3) I realize you've got quite a stretch to go, what with Harry is no where [I think] close to battling Voldemort, but I was wondering if you had any idea of how long where this story was going to go.
Say, would you give us a length epilogue of the Brotherhood's children playing together, or will it just end shortly after The Battle? Of course, I realize you don't want to spoil us, so I have no
idea why I'm asking this really....
I hope you realize that you've converted me to thinking that your story is canon, lol. Now, whenever I read the 6th and 7th books, I'm going to have to say that 'It's all wrong! Half of the story is
missing! What's this Horcrux business?'
But I wouldn't have it any other way. I prefer these stories to the road that JKR is taking, personally.
Again, incredible job. I certainly look forward to reading your next installment [and my next adventure].
Thanks that Minerva is still alive. But how many others draggers are there out? More that two?.
And poor Voldy indeed, our Peeves was a force but with severals Poltergeist there he would had any moment of peace, I do hope so.
Would you killed Coeur de Lion in the next time?.
Regards and waiting for another update like always.
Great chapter! In my not so humble opinion, this and Sunset are far better in quality and depth than any of JKR's books. As far as I'm concerned (and particularly because I **loathe** HBP
and refuse to acknowledge it for the garbage that it is) this has become my favorite continuation of her work and will, for me at least, be the official continuation.
BTW, have you considered posting this and Sunset on other sites like Portkey and Fanfiction.net? I really think this deserves far greater recognition than what I believe it to be currently
receiving.
Thank you for keeping Minerva around for a while longer --- she's greatly needed. And yes, I'm even glad Peeves decided to come back - and bringing more with him --- Old Snake Face won't know what
hit him.
Waiting patiently (not) for your next update.
Wonderful chapter. Bloody scary at the first scenes and wonderfully amusing at others. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Great chap. Great story over all, actually.
I hope you(so) are having as much fun writing it as we readers do reading it.
So very true about book six...there were just too many good stories out there that HBP just read like some wonky fanfiction. Glad someone else thought so too.
There were clues about the dagger dammit! Ah well, I got caught up in the drama and the horror of a dead/dismembered/distraughtintoinsanity Minerva. the both of you are still evil authors in the best of senses.
I do like what you've done with Neville. Neville is one of my favourites so, any good treatment, especially when it could sort of be that way makes it all the better. That was a lovely confusing sentence. neville - pureblood- stern grandmother - last of his line = probably did learn quite a bit about wizarding tradition and politics. Nice touch. Sends cyber krispy kremes for the Neville love.