Sunrise Over Britain

Not sure if it was a typo or words are missing so I'm just letting you know.

Excerpt:

He walked over to Amelia. “We need to talk about responses to this,” he said tensely.

She looked at him sharply, but. “I know. I've been wondering about it myself. What do you have in mind?”

She looked at him sharply, but.

The entire French wizarding population cannot all be evil, can they? Maybe just their government then?
Nice Chapter. I enjoyed the frightened/worried Brotherhood waiting at the manor while a rescue operation was mounted and executed. Gave a touch of reality to the situation and saved Harry from personally recusing yet another person. I cannot help but feel rather sorry for poor Orla.

It's a falcon, sitting on a thrown with a crown in its beak

It's a falcon, sitting on a throne, with a crown in it's beak.

Spot the differences....<G>

Talk about bloopers!

"It's a falcon, sitting on a thrown with a crown in its beak." I wonder what was thrown.

Excellent story, so far.

Regards,

cwejr

wow, you two really hate the french, don't you? oh well, I happen to agree, they are a bunch of snotty, arrogant bastards.

I'm loving the story so far, especially lines like this.

Ginny climbed off his lap and stood up, hands on her hips, giving him a mock glare. It would have been more impressive if she weren't dressed in her bra and panties , and trying to hide a smile.

Note the part in bold. Of course it would have been more impressive! She'd be naked if she weren't dressed in her bra and panties. lol.

And what red blooded male wouldn't find a spunky red head impressive in that state?

Love your work and I'm going to go back to reading it now

Just a note on your use of 'tong' to refer to Asian organizations. The term only refers to secret societies among chinese immigrants. Secret societies in China (which the tongs were modeled after) would be referred to as 'triads'.
'the evacuation of the Dutch Jews in World War II' -- less than one-fourth of Dutch Jews survived the Nazi oppression!
Why would a diplomatic mission being staying elsewhere than the embassy (beside needing them in a hotel for plot purposes)?
Oh, the ski pole and oar were marvelous. And Remus and co. thought they were pranking Ginny.

I always thought they should have a class called Wizard Studies, too complement Muggle Studies

Favorite line: “But no one steals me away from my Colonel.”

What's a thrown and how does one sit on it? You've thrown me for a loop with that one. Otherwise, sounds like an attractive family crest.

Glad he's dead. Idiot deserved it.

I like Amhar's end, personally. He's not worth Harry's time. Good show, there.
Congratulations on another excellent chapter!

Hi, Just want to say that i find your story great. but i think i have found a small mistake...not that I really mind, but thought you wanted to know. You wrote in this chapter that almost all of the Dutch Jews had been saved overnight, i have never heard of that, but a lot of Americans make the mistake thinking that people from Denmark are Dutch (they are not, they are Danish). As a dane my-self (someone from Denmark), I experienced it a few times while I was in the states as an exchange students. Not that the fact really matters to the story line or anything, I just wanted to let you know.
once again I want to say what a great story I think you are writing.
Best regards from Sarah (the dane)ssb85@dbs.dk

Given the emergency items Ginny had packed for her, I'm surprised one of the three men wasn't decapitated by Hogwarts: a History ;)

Luv it still. its been what? four weeks since i started reading this? Wow. Update soon please!

OK Guys,

Thanks for the pre-Christmas update, but what have you done for us lately?

"Siriusly", I hope that Peeves' brothers smacked Chung down so hard into that stone wall that he died of cerebral hemorage! Can you tell I just don't like the dude?

WHat works better with you folks, threats or grovelling?

Ple-e-e-e-e-se another Chapter, we wants it, we wants it.

I am an avid reader for sites like FF.net and SIYE. However, the stories on this site are, in my opinion, far better. this one, in particular, I absolutely enjoy. I cannot wait for the next installment.

An acme disclaimer! That really made me chuckle.
Good chapter, liked the "good wizard bad wizard" bit on LaRoche that Harry and Remus used. I admit I would have expected Harry to play the bad wizard bit.

Really loved Luna's comment about the "first recorded flight of a Kneazle in..."

Multiplying Poltergeists is a great idea, love it. Although, who came up with the names? Bit weird they are.

Harry sneezing and pulling a plane down was great. Really liked flying carpet that responds like a surf board!

Keep writing please!

Monkey

Ok...i was bored and looked on fanfiction and found your DA and SC stories and absolutely loved them. I was extrodinarily happy when I realized you had more stories on a different website. You guys are two of the best writers that I have ever read. The only complaint I have is that you completely ruined J.K. Rowlings books for me! Make sure you keep writing, your stories are amazing (and your disclaimers are hilarious).

Azumi

I love your story guys, absolutly brilliant:) Keep up the exellent work and grace us with a update soon:)

I kind of like this whole war thing, it's well written and interesting the whole way through... The only thing I realy can't seem to understand is the way you paint hermione and ginny, they have a temper and a ego I haven't seen for a looooong time, if ever, in a character that is a good guy that the reader is suppose to like.... Strange.... I also think that you were on the edge with the pranking from the twins, I know it's fun to play with them, and they do make the story for fun. But you nearly let them get out of hand:) Though the last chapters have reversev that a little:)

I feel that it may be important to tell you that I'm sorry for my poor english, I haven't had english in school for nearly 5 years, and when you live in Norway it's not so easy to keep your second languages in shape....:/

Well, once again, thank you very much for writting such a fantastic story, it's truly brilliant:)

Best regards
Vidar (my name, hehe)

ps. please, a comback from a nice Ron would make this story the best ever;)

Yet again, a well written chapteer. I salute you.
I thoough thte diplomaic mission was a bad idea, but I've never understood the convolutd logic of the dark side...erm, I mean, diplomacy. I believe Kahn Noonien Singh, stated it best. "Diplomacy is warfare, concealed."
Ginny handled herself well in combat, as to be expected from a member of the brotherhood, especially given her temperment.
I hate the waiting. Having been a soldier for a substantial portion of my life, I know full well, that it's the waiting that drives soldiers mad. Although it sounds cruel, let us hope the security team is in fact, dead, and not being reprogrammed into weapons against Haven.(See Dudley Dursley.)
Amhar's death was an ignoble one, entirely suiting the man. Yes, it's a shame Harry didn't get to slice and dice him with his trusty lightsaber...erm, I mean reducto his in-bred arse through a stone wall, but as Richard Longshanks said: "Just as good."
As always, I eagerly await the next chapter of 'Sunrise'. Alorkin