Sunrise Over Britain
By Bobmin
Poor Cho... Though, the way she treated Harry, maybe she deserved some of it. Goodness, I love these stories. Thank you!
I actually was rooting for ... say Rith Davis or Daphne Snodgrass as the girl. I think Cho's been si used and abused in amny harry Potter Fan fics, I guess she desrves a break somewhere.
Still I'll reserve a long review when I'm done with this Epic!
dennisud
AHH!!!! The Girl was Cho!!!
I absolutely loved that plot line.... Until her identity was revealed, she absolutely smacked of Mrs. Lovett in my opinion.
Ahh, Sweeney Todd references... :]
Your stories are incredible, and I can't wait to read the rest!
O.M.G
That I did not see coming at all! Oh man, if I didn't feel so bad for Cho I would say good job. Yes, great job in giving her the pleasure of killing Snape, but I sincerely hoped that she would live.
That was real sad. Great twist, but so sad at the same time.
I only have ONE question for this chapter.
'Why didn't Umtuba ever meet Eocho while he was in Padfoot?' You mentioned in the previous chapter that Umtuba was also a 'Maglios'? Wouldn't Eocho sense his presence and chat with him? I guess it
wasn't relevent to this storyline at the moment.
Oh...btw, you had me laughing soo hard till I had hiccups with the effects that you all gave to the 'Portkey' group! That was the funniest yet. Gred and Feorge would have been proud of Hermione and
Luna.
Just what exactly caused Mr. Lovegood to need a metal plate in his head? I’m curious.
Voldemort should have studied history more…rulers have been taken down for such cavalier attitudes about the lowest level people.
"Her husband taking a mistress wouldn't be all the unusual in her mind. After all, Lucius had his other women, as did most of the pure-blood men in her social circle." Yes, but I’m sure in
Narcissa’s case it was a welcome relief. After all, Lucius is definitely not a caring lover like Harry.
I know I haven't commented on any chapters yet. But I couldn't help the feral grin that came over me at the end of this chapter. As clever as I claim to be, I never once thought that Cho was the slave girl. I absolutely loved it.
Very good.
gunny
Fantastic chapter, guys!
Sadly, I'm finally all caught up and will now have to WAIT for updates. Oh, well. Such is life.
And your chapters are always worth the wait.
I loved the chapter, can't wait to read the next one.
hi i started reading sunset a few days ago and just couldnt stop, amazing job,kudos and all, please update as soon as you can
WOW WOW WOW WOW...This is an amazing story!! I have been reading both this one and Sunset for the last few days straight!! We moved in the middle of me reading Sunrise, and I was driving everyone nuts, trying to get the computer set up and back on the net, so I could get back to reading. I can not wait to read the next update. I am torn. I want it to be long, but I want to see how it ends as well. Thank you for writing duch a wonderful tale.
The next opponent of Harry's will be... (pulls paper out of top-hat).. A Weasley-haired Ahmar with insane cheek twitches of Dumbledore! And this one has an extra phallus. See what happens when
people open up dimensional rifts, crazy demons from fan fic hell come up and cause plot bunnies to randomly explode!
And on that note, I've forgotten the other question. And the first one. Goodbye!
Whoo-hoo!!!! Snape's finally dead! I could kiss Cho, if she weren't such a mess!
Otherwise, I have nothing of any import to say, but to wish that you please carry on with this fine and entertaining story.
Why does Hermione always fall asleep later than Harry but always awakes earlier?
Wow! (is stunned by the greatness) I just recently stumbled across Sunset & Sunrise and have taken the past several days to read through both stories. (tips hat & bows low) There are so
many things about both stories that are so wonderful that it's hard to list them all. Intricate plot, fascinating new magic, international political manuvering, delightful original characters, house
elves, Harry/Hermione romance, a truly evil Voldemort & snoracks!
And this last scene... OMG, Cho!
(waits breathlessly for more)
Dilly the super-powered elf was fantastic. What was even better was Cho finally being allowed to off Snape and then herself. I liked the irony of her beating him to death with his own cauldron. Excellent chapter. I can't wait for more. Hoorary for Harry getting Dilly off though I doubt she would have minded a holiday in America if she could have taken Melinda and Arthur with her.
Great story, excellent chapter. To continue the SOB theme into future chapters perhaps you could write a sickly sweet piece called "Sunshine over Britain" or even a dark and twisted piece about Harry losing the plot and going on a killing spree called "Supernova over Britain"
Finally!!!
After having all of my own issues with computers and connectivity ... I have finally caught up in the story.
I realize that Hermione is Lady Potter but doesn't Luna have a title as well? I sort of remember Draco making comment about somebody I thought was Luna had somesort of title like Viscountess or
something...
Next ... The way you can get around the Disclaimers on every chapter ... place ONE on the first of the story and then that would cover the entire story. If you are truly anal about it you can
reference it as Disclaimer: See Chapter 1
and with that you have covered your arse!
I love this story ... It's been extrememly entertaining and I'm enjoying it (much more than HBP)
Keep up the great work ... Have some \_/ \_/ whisky on me
It's a great 18 year old single malt !
Take care - As Always,
Muirnin
Loved this chapter. It was very very fitting that Pet AKA Cho got to kill Snape and destroy everything he had worked on!!! Poor Moldy Voldy!!! He'll have to have someone start from scratch!!!