Sunrise Over Britain
By Bobmin
-xxx- Malou
I just wanted to let you know something...
For school, we have to log our reading time, and I'm pretty sure that they have to be published books. Well, I for one disagree with this, and have decided to "screw the rules" as one of my friends
put it and log the time it takes for me to read about 2-3 chapters of Sunset/Sunrise a night. So far, I've gotten about 500 minutes a week, and we only need 150. But basically, my other reason for
logging this is that I didn't feel like finishing Breaking Dawn for a second time. *eyeroll*
Oh great story mates, I love how the story is going and I can't wait to see what it goes, I love what Harry has done for the children. Keep up the great work.
*Huh* What a chapter. No Peeves for the moment. Ok.
As for this chapter, well I have to say that most if not a majority of HP fanfic writers end up getting Hermione her due in the SPEW aspect at one time or another for multichaptered storylines.
The one thing that I usually look forward to is Ron's reaction once he finds out she has House Elf/House Elves bound to her. Usually it always ends up being Binky and Dobby to Harry. In another
storyline Draco as the last Malfoy in his Will gave Hermione ALL of the Malfoy HouseElves! (He considered it as a last say on Granger Hee Hee.) Poor Harry had quiet a time calming her down and Ron
wasn't helping in ANY way. I still find that one to be rather funny.
As for the HP Plot Bunnies are you sure Harry didn't send them your way? He could have used that spell you mentioned in the other story where he taught the Grangers the multi-Bunny thingy. Speaking
of Bunnies...*blinks* *blinks again* There goes a Black bunny outside my backyard!! What's with the Bunnies!? It's extending outside the realm of Fanfictions! @@
Awesome chapter. Olga and Sven are such wonderful characters.
I wouldn't touch your disclaimer with a . . . (oh, but you already used that, drats).
'to relax and trip to Stonewall Lane' -- are they tripping? Don't you mean 'to relax, and a trip ...'
'You fell out of bed, Harry. But that’s not important!' -- that was priceless.
If you're talking about the country (United Kingdom of Great Britain), you forgot Northern Ireland.
Ho, by the way (sorry I forgot), Really good story.
Heartwarming about the orphans. In a sense, Mrs. Johansen is the traditional 'Molly Weasley' type we see in most H P fics. I like the type; what would we do without a little doting.
I am curious about how you handle the faith issues.
Just excellent all around.
Makes me wonder if the "line of death" also affects other things like vampires and whatnot when they cross it. Just how well will the house elves work with the attack force? I wonder why the other Outcast doesn't like their 15 minutes of fame. Did Hermione actually derailed SPEW? Just make me wonder how scary Mrs Johnson is when she's in battle mode.
Wow! Great chapter as usual. I loved the bit with winky bonding to hermione...excellent bit of work there. Damn that dumbledore and his dumb ideas. Excellent job on the rescues also!
Keep up the wonderful work. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter when I'm more awake. (It's almost 1AM in Silicon Valley right now!) I also look forward to reading chapter 4 when it comes out. Oh, I'm so glad to finaly be caught up. It was getting pretty horrible to know I was six chapters behind... on the previous story. I'm rambling now. I should go to bed. G'nite! Thanks again!
so are Nerfherder's merely one legged, or truly one footed? i.e. two legs, but only one foot?
lol! Great work!
i love your stories, all of them, but whats happened to the "pet peeves" i thought they were brilliant! keep up the good work
good chapter, only thing i spotted for your beta readers was a typo in the extraction scene. In the last paragraph, personal should probably be personell
I know it's for the story, but I can't believe that there are still dummies agreeing to work for Voldemort! You'd think they wouldn't since he's some physcopathic, spelt that wrong, weirdo! But noo...but, I digress. THe Johansens are really funny, and I just noticed something, they named their son Johan...so he's Johan Johansen, and "sen" I'm sure is another language for "son." So he's Johan Johan's son? Or maybe I'm reading too much into it. Oh well
great fic!!! keep up with the good work!!
-xxx- Malou