Sunrise Over Britain

I have gone through DA, SC, and both of these stories, and all i have to say is that i have really enjoyed all of your stories. I think you two are very good authors, and i hope if i ever write a story it will be good too!

P.S.--I also enjoy your disclaimers...but some of them made me just shiver in my chair! lol

have not left a review in a bit. I would squee about how much I enjoyed (in a twisted, adrenaline junkie sort of way) the Battle scene at Hogwarts. I was very interested and approved (like you care, i know) that you managed to not bang up Harry too much and walloped the other brotherhood members. I suppose my only weird moment was Luna staying when she portkeyed back. A battle of good and evil was raging and she stayed in Haven. Why? You told us Draco would be fine...why stay since she is so powerful. I know that there is the love thing, but it just rankled a little. a tiny wee bit. I do like the choice of hurt ginny - she tends to get off scot free to trot about like a red-headed veela in lots of fics. Nice to see her dealing with a bit of hurt (well written hurt as well).

I enjoyed the story. The plotting and action are superb. Your creativity with your OCs was wonderful. Melinda is lovely and so are your elves. I will recommend this to others readers that enjoy the AU possiblities. Thank you for the entertainment.

A GREAT novel. Thank you. I couldn't turn off the computer until I finished reading them both.

I really hope you consider this for a future story;

-A Harry/Harmione/Luna story

-Set the summer after the 5th year

-Luna jions the Trio in the Hurux hunt, and both her and hermione develop feelings for Harry.

-Ron can be an Ass then finds redempton!

-The Weasley Twins hookup with the Patil Twins!

plus whatever you want!

Hope you can do it!

dennisud

i just have to ask, why dose harry not wear a leg brace. it seems like it would be perfect for him.

Is Charles going to become king? I still cotton to the rumor that the Queen will skip a generation and that William will be the next king (Yes, I don't like Charles -- Frankly, I think the royalty in general is a ungainly dinosaur draining funds that be better spent on much more worthy projects).

Only one complaint. "I'm giving up magic and taking up something simple, like potato farming in Idaho.” But potato farming is not all that simple.

Your story has been an emotional rollercoaster for me. I have been reading it for the past few days and have now caught up. I just want to say great job and I look forward to reading more from you both.

Very very Good work to the both of you. I must say that you two compliment each other quite well in your writing styles. BRAVO! As for your Latin, it wasn't to bad. Actually you did pretty well with it. Wish you the best Alyx and Bob,
Ailish Mckechnie (My first name is Irish Gaelic just for the record). Sounds like I-Leash.

brilliant brilliant set of stories. much appreciated, certainly helped out the procrastination effort during exams :)

I've finally finished reading the whole thing (both stories) and i wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to the conclsion of this epic tale.

amazing story no other word for it, ingenuitive and enthralling, without a doubt one of the top five harry fics ive ever read, and ive read a lot

So i just read the whole story from start to (almost)finish, and wow....

I was really pissed that i had to go to work today, cause i was just starting with chapter 31 ( I got up realllllllly early this morning to finish 30)

It's really great, there are some of these stories out there that makes you want to think "keep writing, i will read it no matter what" this is absolutely one of them. i don't really know what to say, except wow......

(sorry for my english, i'm not a native speaker as you've probably noticed)

i am new to this "place" but i spent last few days reading...it took me three days to read it all and since it is not yet finished i hope to read a chapter or few more ^.~!

p.s i am not an english speaker so sorry for my mistakes in spelling!

I loved this chapter. Its been a long journey and it feels like its coming to a well deserved end. I have loved every moment of what you have written and look forward to the mayhem you can create in anafi (hope I spelt it right) and during the hogwarts rebuilding.. perhaps we might see a flash forward (like those tv series that end) that might show who ends up where.. Arthur and Melinda's wedding perhaps? Hermione and Harry's kids? So many things to look forward to in the future now that Hogwarts and Hogsmeade are back in friendly hands.

just to let you know, the different language track is a nice little touch from you guys. if there is a mistake, i just assume that it was the author of the spell and not the author of the fic.

and FYI. i speak klingon. my parents were Trekkies and they used that when they wanted to try and hide information from me and my sister. so the two of us learned it in self defence after the 8th time going to the dentist in one semester

Gloriously written, a joy to read.

I've been at home for a week after a wisdom teeth removal and this story has made the time fly by.

I found myself giggling madly one minute, on the verge of tears the next due to your expressive language... the gooseflesh was almost always there as your writing made the world come alive and the pictures form the way they should.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this wondeful fiction

I've loved it!!!

I've been having a blast reading your fics for the past two weeks. They were recommended in a H/Hr LJ community and I'm glad I followed the link.
I liked the pace of your writing, the length of your chapters and the weaving of your plot threads. Most of those were very believable within your universe, although I have to say that Dumbledore's insanity seemed a bit way out there (though it had its comical effect). I don't know if Ron's character needed to be butchered in such a way to make this story work, but I suppose that you didn't do anything worse than JKR herself (I'm not a Ron lover and I'm hoping JKR does something worthy to his character in DH).
It was nice to see that you paid great attention to the War details without forgetting to develop the characters' feelings. Often times, action-driven stories don't make the heroes ponder on their actions and the consequences to them.
I guess that there's one more chapter to come, wrapping up some of the lose threads.
Thank you for making the wait for Deathly Hallows more endurable, you have a gift for writing and I hope you two keep at it even after the series is done. I'm sure there will be some things in the last that we won't like, so I'm counting on fic writers like you two to fix them for me, :)

More typo fun.
He ran a hand through his hear, messing it up even worse than before.

A great story, Thanks again.

I just recently found your stories and have read all the way through until now. I love them, and will continue to wait for the next chapters. I appreciate the effort you've into this story and hope you keep it up!