Sunrise Over Britain
By Bobmin
Something just occurred to me that I hadn't thought of before. There are muggles in Haven, right? Where are their children going to school?
Normally i woldnt review in a story already completed but when you announced that "the Father" is back being updated i was wondering, do you have the link of where its being updated? im always looking for some good fanfiction, and a story being recommended by Bob and Alyx is definately worth reading in my opinion! i love your guys work!(especially the rather...intersting? A/Ns and such[the insaner the better!]) anyway if you have the new site please let me know the link. thanks for ur time -BookWyrm2.0
Luna has afternoon tea is Wonderland with Alice Liddel doesn't she? Half the things she describe sound wonderladish... She's like the Cheshire cat
Has Dumbledors Nickname something to do with radgast the brown, one of gandalf the greys friends? :P Dumbledore, old, brown mantel, that nickname...
Good work!
your story is just great. i like it so much that i don't want to stop reading.if i don't review a lot , it's because i want to continue without interuptions.it is one of the best no,it is the best.
Heya,
Ok for this chapter people are still going to obsess over the Charlie/Dumbledore spy thing till the story ends that I get. But in this chapter he (Dumbles) did get into Haven under a false alias
right? He IS this 'Rufus Radagast' ? Why does that name sound familier?
Oh btw, my mentioning of vague references to other storylines and such will discontine from here on in till I remember the story's title and/or the Author's name. I don't feel right about mentioning
at least the writers name to the idea. It's just not right. The writer could have worked their butts off trying to get that idea to either paper or data bits before posting on various sites. They
deserve the credit for their ideas. *shrugs* So when I do mention a story plot bit I'll give the author credit at the very minimum.
Thanks again for the story ideas for future readings.
Excellent use of details. Not too many and not too few.
Nice nod to Tolkien with Radagast, but Dumbles doesn't seem the nature loving type. Great chapter!
Darn! *g* I decided that the Weasley Twins should invent portable holes of various sizes before I read this. You know... oubliette size, pocketbook size... (It'd be a nice change from a bottomless bag) Then there's the handy escape kind for Aurors who've been captured... simply throw it against a wall and walk through the hole...
Hi, First, I want too say that I am greatly enjoying your works. Second, I'd like to make a general editorial comment on somethoing which I have seen consistently through the SC and Sunset/rise
story arcs; "to" indicates direction 'go to' 'speak to' etc. "too" means either 1)indicates quantity as in "too much" "too little" "too hard" etc. OR 2)it can have the derivitave meaning of "also",
"as well" as in "me too"
- remember too has too many 'o's
I have observed that you consistently use "to" in place of "too."
- Your friendly neighborhood grammar geek,
Fyrecat
Love the story, and nice LotR reference there by having Dumbledore take the name Radagast. Especially since he was in brown robes :)
Probably not the first to mention, but love the story and am very sorry I did not start reading this sooner.
Nice story so far, I downloaded the story when this chapter was the last written one, intending on reading it when i was going to travel a long way by train, but i forgot all abouth it back then.
I found it on my computer a couple of weeks ago and have been reading it since... I have to say it's one of the better ones out there and you guys have done a incredible job:)
Best hollydays wishes from Norway
Yet??? you give us hope that Dumbledore may just turn completely evil before long!!!!
""and you and I both..." how about simply "..you and I recieved a lesson in patience"
That scence was painfully funny! Thanks.
NTP
I've been enjoying this so much and I just wanted to pause and cackle at the Monty Python rabbit being Dan's patronus. Your plot is excellent and I'm truly intrigued by what you're going to do with Dumbledore. Apologies - I would review more often but I'm continually distracted by the sheer tension of this. Every time I finish one chapter I find myself in need of the next.
From the way you first described dark auras, I would have thought willing abandoning a child to abuse, overseeing that abuse, robbing him, having Sirius spend time in Azkaban and then arranging
his murder, and all the other crimes you've had him do and oversee and approve of would have darkened Dumbledore's aura far more than most of the unmarked recruits (they can't ALL be murderers, but,
it is your story. . . . Still, you could have at least made him take a Tums!
"T"
I love your story. It's great but you have made a fault : Tai Chi is written like this not Ti Chi.
I just had an idea.... why doesn't harry draw lines of death around hogwarts and other such places? he could even draw one around Voldy so he can't move!? He could also draw them when they track down a nest of death munchers... that way they cant escape etc. My other idea for Q Dept is to make the flying snapes I mean faires invisible.... or explosive ...yeah blood and gore!! :)
The Authors' notes - I actually find them rather funny and oddly enlightening. About the blood and gore and raping and pillaging - seems about right. If they are at war, they are not going to hex eachother with the jelly-legs or rictumsepra, now are they? I admit that I did stop for a moment at the mention of rape, for some reason it did not occure to me that Moldimort et al would be on that power trip as well. However, it does follow the burn and pillage rout to conquering the nation.
Still a thoroughly enjoyable story.
I actually find myself far more interesting in the learning process that your brotherhood redux is going through, the fluffy bits leave me impatient though I do see how helping Harry to be more complete would be helpful in the long run.