Sunrise Over Britain
By Bobmin
I know this does not belong on the no update list but their is Lorrdwar's The Summer of Change which he should make a sequel for. That story along started the hole Honks craze that everyone is trying to mimic but are falling short. Just thought i would pop that one up their. Now on to your story I like it. Its starting to drag on a little bit with nothing new happening, but i want to keep reading it to find out what happens next.
I have one for your updateless questions and answers by sbar it's a great story but she has not up dated it in a year!!!!!!!!
I don't know if you guys are still interested, but Harry Potter and the Mind Mage, which you list as being updateless and abandoned, is actually completed. It's posted on a site called wizardtales.net. It's a good story, but I like yours better.
Just a silly note - it says Chatper 7????
Dadscooking
i have to ask, is the power amping ritual valdemort is using the same as the one brought up by snape and dumbeldore in the first story. because if so didn't you say that the subjects whos power is stolen must be a virgin, i dare say that Penelope is no longer one if her physical discription has any truth to it.
Greetings, oh wonderful...erm...writers of wonderfulness! *Snaps off a salute he stole from Dobby*
Normally I don't review a story until the end, but I just had to review this chapter...for obvious reasons! Now I know what people were talking about when they reviewed HPMM and mentioned "Bobmin's
List"...
In case you're remotely interested, HPMM is on the go again (5 years after the fact...it's got to be some sort of record, wot?), although not on ff.net. It's only being published at WizardTales now
(www.wizardtales.net), under the same name.
Now, I'm sure I could wax lyrical about your magnificent story, but I'm sure it would be just repeating what you've already heard from countless other stories. Oh, and I agree with Bob about the last
2 books. Sad, sad state of affairs. I mean, really, where the bloody blue blazes did the Deathly Hallows come from? Side swiped, much?
Ahem. On with the story! *Grins, salutes, and Disapparates to the next chapter*
Picking up garbage for being too rowdy...excellent punishment.
Dumbledore's got Charlie wrapped up in a conspiracy mentality; anything evidence he comes across against Dumbly just serves to reinforce it. I wonder if Charlie is going to be rescued.
'Even the water was watered down' -- another line I shouldn't like, but do.
'The man looked about as dangerous as a neighborhood girl scout selling cookies' -- but don't you know the girl scouts are actually martial arts experts trained by the house of Flying Daggers
Another great chappie. Thanks again
I'm just wondering how long it will take for that exceptionally brilliant (although danger-loving) red headed dragon handler to realize the bull crap that old fart has been feeding him. Oh yes, he will come to the realization that he's been fed a lie and will most likely crawl back to his family begging forgiveness, BUT WHEN???
You're right the story called Harry Potter and the Mind Mage had been discontinued on FFnet.
Good chapter.
gunny
"The spell would give him nearly all of his old mobility back, enabling him to duel without the possibility of the leg going lame. But with the good, came the bad. The downside of the spell,
according to Eocho, was that when the spell wore off, the disability of his leg would be increased, permanently. With repeated uses of the spell, it was possible for the leg to become a useless
appendage, unable to sustain his weight for even short distances. The pain would be chronic, and permanent as well."
I smell narsty foreshadowing here, a la Chekov's gun on the mantle.
I know you hate Snape, but you aren't going to give him Bitchy-Molly-Prewitt as a roomie are you? That's going beyond the pale!
Another amazing chapter with a twisted disclaimer.
I'm just glad you've given a pretty solid indication Charlie is going to live to find out that Dumbledore is crooked. I just didn't want Charlie to realize he's gone bad moments before he dies.
The Weasley family interaction is so well written.
God, I love your stuff! Just please dome a favor, almost every story I've read (Probably about 15 after Dumbledore's Army and it's Sequel) have yet to do the battle between Harry and Voldemort justice. I have been surprised to read these stories that the authors have spent so much time on, only to spend a paragraph or two on the actual battle - please this is such a good story- Make the battle Epic! You guys can easily do it! -Erik
This is my first review after reading all of Sunset and this much of Sunrise. The story has really been wonderful (I love Super!Harry and H/Hr), but the pace is starting to bog down in all the preparations for war. Though the detail is great, there have been seven chapters of preparation. It is time for Harry and crew to go on the offensive! Keep up the great work!
By the way, I know a story which is worth to be a part of your updateless list (in my opinion)!^^
So if you're interested take a look at this story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1155341/1/
It's called "An Alternate Adventure: Goblet of Fire". It's well-written, but the author hasn't updated for nearly 2 years! -.-"""
You don't have to like it, it's only a proposal!^-^
So keep up the great work! =o)
So long,
Schokki
Argh!!!!
Bloody cliffhanger!!!!!! -.-"""" ;-)
But a great chapter!^^
Hey, been awhile, been out of town! bummer couldnt figure out how to drag this big ole desktop with me in the pickup!
anyway see ya got 3 updates, great story by the way, I personally think that no matter what your author notes say in the end it going to be charlie with the wool over his eyes is going to after harry
defeats voldie do something stupid to us but great for his way of thinking and drag harry off to be killed by dumby so dumby can so he thinks still be declared the saviour of the world before the
that same world turns and kills both charlie and dumby!
as far as the updateless winners, I would have to say the father was very good and cleansed power was outstanding and sadly they like all great fanfiction, which sadly seems to be most of the great
stories go the way of the abandonment. I know its a great sickness that falls on great writers that have great stories, it all happens I think cause they have a story that is so great that if it was
in book form people would line up in the rain or snow to buy it, also another way to tell is they have anywhere from 800 to couple thousand reviews, no or very few flames.
You see the ones that mostley get finihsed are people that have authors notes at the bottom of each chapter saying if you dont get me so many reviews for this chapter then I will not update! but then
again that is another sickness! oh well I guess if a author with so many reviews and such a great story decides to abandon it I guess we will have to start calling it the Jeconais factor or the
RossWrock sickness, what do you think!


Another little gem for your "Updateless List".
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1984912/1/Stone_Angels
Something happens during the summer after sixth year leaving Hermione a shadow of her former self. Can she move on with a little help or will the halls of Hogwarts be haunted forever by stone angels. HGSS, HPDM, RWLL, and GWNL.
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 102,384 - Reviews: 437 - Updated: 12-4-07 - Published: 7-28-04 - - Hermione G./Severus S