Sunset Over Britain

Harry monologuing, and saying Hermione would be great "despite" Muggle parents?

Ginny likes Yogi Berra. Cool.

Your pet peeve is repetitive of one already made. It must really be peevish.

Why is this entire chapter is in bold?

"The students names are being withheld pending notification of the Nott, Goyle, Crabbe, Parkinson and Goldstein families. "
This is one of the funniest lines ever, even including your Disclaimers and Author's Notes!

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Get's more interessting, now, burning to read :)
Great! Thanks!

I'm glad to see your reasoning for the use of those Author's names, although I was pretty sure it was something along those lines. Either that, or a private joke you and the AUthors were sharing. I will also state that I agree with your opinion about each of those authors. As for this story, I am loving every second of it, even though there are times when I would like to strangle some of the characters, or even you. But I still love it.

You gave a HUGE clue as to Voldies 'spy' of the Order...but I must say I'm still clueless as to who it may be. I only know of three characters who are Black in the HP universe. Shack, Lee Jordon and Dean Thomas. Any could be him. As I stated earlier, I have not read any of the books. But I still love the fanfiction. The fact that the net is so easy to access sites that talk of the books helps alot as well.

As for this storyline, you really are starting to get things in motion for Voldermonts takeover. The Brits Wizarding Community is just plain idiotic. Known DE's elected into government. *Heavy Sigh* Just great. Hopefully the 'Brotherhood' can all come out of HW safe very soon. But you won't tell until you want to! *grins* PS: most of your PP's do have merit.

'The students names are being withheld pending notification of the Nott, Goyle, Crabbe, Parkinson and Goldstein families' Quite worthy of a Lovegood lunacy.
Is it proper to refer to a Scottish town as being on the Scottish border? I would've expected an English town to be on the Scottish border (it is San Diego or Tijuana that is on the Mexican border? and which is on the U.S. border?)
Yeah, I kind of was expecting Ron on the tower, but I wasn't particularly surprised -- now if it had been Snape, I would have been surprised. As for Ron, well, I'm thinking he gets it when Hogwarts falls, unless you're going to have an aboutface when he realizes the true color of Dumbledore -- almost anything is possible.
'petty an undeserving' -- petty and undeserving (spell check? beta?)

Damn but you both are good. I'm really scared and I don't live in England and I KNOW this is only a story. 8|

Gray Lord...Cool and logical.

So it was Nott Jr… with Crabbe, Goyle, Pansy, and someone named Anthony Goldstein, were attacking Harry’s friends. I like it that Harry turned the five in Muggles, nice done. And going himself the Gray Lord, the world really needs one.

:D Dumbledore found out that some people like Nott Jr, Crabbe, Goyle and Pansy, can’t redeemed.

I like that Draco explained to Hermione that a free house-elf would go insane and then die.

Harry truly has managed to do what the Dark Lord could not; He’s chased both Snape and Dumbledore out of Hogwarts.

So Flitwick is helping Harry to make a staff.

Oh boy, Archibald Richfiel, as Interim Minister of Magic… that isn’t good.

I doubt Sidewinders would lock onto a broom, not enough heat signature. You'll simply have to use the 20mm cannon.

Odd note: This whole chapter appears in bold. Harry being a grey Lord (I guess I should have paid more attention to his grey aura before) is fabulous.

Do you think they'll let me have a couple war heads for my birthday?? XD

Good story.

gunny

Uh, the chapter's all in bold.

Still loving the story, althought I have to admit that I laughed when Harry made that comment about being "a Grey Lord" *mighty background music* xP sorry.
But the story is really good, and I had to re-read the books twice to convince myself that Dumbledore in the books is a good person. In other words: this is working as the sixth book, instead of a fanfic based on the characters of the book. Thank you!

The Tower punishment was clever. Using it to fell Dumbledore was even more so. Delicious.

I would love to see Harry slice Dolohov to shreds, but Hermione doing it casually woul dbe even better.

Fine fic.

The changes in the Ministry are not good. Not good at all. Wonder what will happen to Amelia, and the investigation on Dumbledore, now that Dolohov has taken her place.

Well, I guess Harry could always go, kill them and come back to Hogwarts. This is war, after all. So one has to take down the enemies in war.

Ohhh..the Quibbler's article on the DE Captured Hogwarts was fun. Especially how the students named was not to be known till their family were informed.

Regarding the Board of Governors, in a previous meeting, a Augusta Longbottom was mention, then in this chapter a Constance Longbottom was mention, are there two Longbottom in the Board, or was it a mistake of some sort?

Hmm... based on what is happening to the outside world so far, will the Brotherhood have to bring forward their date of departure? Heehee, will be fun though, for the Bumblebee to return to a almost empty school.

Love your stories. Even when they aren't the best, they are still updated frequently and one can tell that you care about your stories and your readers. Please, please, make sure Snape is killed. The sooner the better. Don't let him wise up, just kill him. Dead. Doornail.