Sunset Over Britain
By Bobmin
I love your story, it is very well written. However, I must point out one mistake. Hermione actually saw Harry naked in Chapter 1, the Matura Magicus
:)
Great!
Thanks!
Sorry to bother, but I noticed that you said Filch didn't have any family, and I remember that Arabella Figg is his widowed sister.
'Two assistants, Kathy and Jean and' -- assistants, Kathy and Jean,
This just keeps getting better and better (d'oh, there I go again).
Bob and Alyx, I reviewed mostly to say that I love your author notes (hehe). Strange? I thought so too.
"The butt hole is a poor source of inspiration."
Well, that statement struck me as particularly caustic and hilarious.
So keep comments like that coming! Love em!
Amazing chapter. Your portrayal of Queen Elizabeth was awesome. What is going to happen to Mrs. Norris?
::Mrs. Norris creeps into the Headmaster's Room. No one is around. She gleefully begins destroying his precious sock collection. Argus will be avenged.
What another great chapter;
So the Royal Family is going on a grand tour, to show off the Crown Jewels… whilst but the Duke and the Queen stay behind. So they can escape the country, without causing a panic. Whilst the
Prime Minister stays behind, to try and keep the country safe.
I’m happy that Dan and Emma are fine. I like that he called Dan and Emma, Mum and Dad.
Harry feels that he is a monster, but he isn’t… he done what had to be done to save Dan and Emma, and that doesn’t make him a monster, but a hero.
Dumbledore the fool; didn’t his time on the ceiling, and not being able to get down, show him that Harry is more powerful then him. And the ‘Brotherhood’ as done more, then his
Order has over the war. Dumbledore truly is a fool. And why send Harry to Snape for defense, they hate each other, and would kill each other.
How embarrassing to wake up like that, and being teased over it at breakfast.
So Argus is dead, will a lot of children will be happy about that.
What did Harry do to have so many howlers sent to him?? I like it, Harry had snapped the wands of ten students, wandlessey… not many can do that.
...ok so I didn't make it before falling asleep, which I did while sitting at the computer 0_o....
I've just re-read a few of my reviews and you guys are really going to think Im crazy or something...its all very strange.
So Arthur is now being used for evil deeds, hm? and the plot thickens *cue creepy music*
overall this isn't one of my favorite chapters, not that its bad or anything like that, I just don't care for it.
So whats going to happen to our favorite WonWon? (can you believe a teenager actually used that word in reference to this boyfriend? *shudders* if my name was Ron I'd have cursed someone if they
called me that.)
Hermione and Harry have some real issues going on don't they? LoL
Poor Snape, he's going to be killed for that giving them all that info only to have Harry kill everyone...tut tut he should've thought out his plan better.
Harry, Harry, Harry. How many wands will you break before the end of the fic? I think people are starting to get mad at you...
"The butt hole is a poor source of inspiration."
This should be on a bumper sticker.
Oh, the story part was good, too, as usual. ;)
Filchy dead. Me so happy. XD
It would appear we meet again on these winding roads known as fanfiction. You probably don't remember me, and it isn't a big deal. I go to FF.net and I am mostly a talentless hack in the field of
serious fanfiction and stick to weird humor fanfiction to appeal to people. I followed your stories (this and the other two) for a long time on there and was a very big fan of both. However when
yours and Quest of Light (a fanfiction that I beta'd for) were removed I lost interest in HP fanfiction because I was convinced that the HP community was soulless bastards.
And they are. At least on ff.net in general.
But enough about my winding road, I was linked to this site and decided to register, and boy am I glad I did. It has my favorite HP author (Ruskbyte) along with a host of other excellent fanfiction
writers, yourselves included.
As for this chapter, I have read it before and it is most excellent. I just re-read it to get caught up with the story that I had forgotten a great deal about.
Excellent work as always; your pet peeves section delivers as always.
Until next time,
Chris
Bummer.
gunny
I know you have a plan for Snape from Voldemort, but I hope it includes the wrath of Harry.
Nott Jr should be interesting as he becomes cannon fodder for the next Harry-does-it-again.
Poor Mr. Weasley.
Great writing.
Ah, this is no good. Arthur under Imperius is no good at all. Well, I hope someone fixs that soon!
hate to get this out in the open but
I AM IGNORING HBP!!!
ahem
this was a pointless review
i believe that might have been one of your pet peeves
sry
daeshie the boring and sugar-high
Even though I've read the whole story, I still itch for Harry to just vaporize every Death Nibbler (as you call them) when I read this chapter. Just kill the bastards. =)
*****Bizarre plot twists. Here I was, reading this story of an angry Harry. A veritable cornucopia of Ron/Hermione bashing and the author pulls stupid idea #567 out of his/her butt and decides
that Ron is going to be pissed off with Draco for making friends with Harry. Then Ron says, the only way you can prove you’re not a death eater is if you swim the lake. EXCUSE ME? HELLO? I
swear I must be the only person reading that story that found that particular chapter to be borderline moronic. The reviews thought it was the greatest thing since sliced French bread. *****
Tell me about it.
Fortunatly, most of the worse stories I read have either no reviews, or very few with at least two willing to point out mistakes.
The worst I have read was in the Lord of the Rings fandom. (I am taking a wild guess that you have heard of it. If not, ignore the rest of this review.)
Aptly pen-named 'just another stupid idiot', tried to write a HP/LotR crossover. It plummeted into the abyss by having a smoking cauldren in the middle of the path of Caradhras acting as a portkey to
where Hagrid is holding a CoMC class in the forbidden forest.
Here the author acknowledges that Westron is not English, but solves the problem by having Gandalf knowing english on account of having visited Earth millennia ago.
They are taken to Dumbledore who asks no questions and gives the translation rings, then offers to let them join Hogwarts as students.
The rest of the story consists of mangled names, grammar, canonical plot and languages (English and Elvish) and a series of events that flows as smoothly as Niagra Falls and are as unlikly as
Voldemort wearing a pink tutu and declaring Harry his best friend.
These events include Legolas being able to kill dementors by his mere presense, everyone becoming animagi with multiple forms in a single lesson, people being arrested for accidental transfiguration
and references to very unlikely childhood excapades.
Just when I thought it couldn't get worse, Sam is accidentally portkeyed to Voldemort's lair, where Harry and others promptly go to rescue him. Harry and Voldemort engage in a verbal catfight where
Voldemort seems to have reverted to childhood, as his end of the conversation generally consists of 'you can't do that!', 'Shut up you brat!' and 'You will die/I'm going to kill you!' and Harry
manages to tell Voldemort just about all the potentially useful information he has, also claiming that his mother is decended from elves. Ron then creates a portkey and they all escape from a room
packed with death eaters and return to Hogwarts, as Snape yells that they have lost several hundred points for being out of bed.
We thank whatever we hold sacred as the story winds to a close with a visit to Grimmauld Place, Hermione as the Queen's niece, tea and a sleepover at Buckingham Palace and a portkey that lands them
outside the woods of Lothlorien.
Much to my shock, there was boundless (and mindless) praise for this piece of skrewet droppings, and only a few authors smart enough to point out the flaws.
Awww, I *liked* "Deather-Eater-gram". :-)
My bad on the last review, I accidentally posted it on the wrong chapter, before I had read this one and seen your A/N.