Sunset Over Britain
By Bobmin
Okay. This is a fantastic story as are DA and SC. So...what in the name of all that's magical could you have done to be kicked of FanFiction.net? Unbe-freakin-lievable!
I'm guessing Ron doesn't have anything to do with the attacks, but he might know who actually is behind it all. And who's our Gryffindor commie pinko? Hmmm...
This thing has its share of plot-twists, but they're GOOD plot-twists as opposed to really dumb ones. I'm thoroughly enjoying all the chapter headers and your A/Ns. Keep it up!
lol @ fanfiction.net.
epic failz thar.
I'm not up on the politics of fan fiction sites, and I would imagine, by now, that whatever happened is long past. I am glad, however, that you didn't let it discourage you. I was able to find you here through a link on FF.net, so that, at least, is a good thing.
Thank goodness I finally found this fic I have been looking for it forever it seems. It really is an awesome fic
Well getting rid of percy and distancing Molly & Ron is ok for now. I really like your use of lesser characters here, plus the integraton of the Real life elements of the Muggles is sure to
take thing up a level!
dennisud
:)
Thanks!
Nice one with Trelawney! How much is Dumbly going to interfere with Harry's plans now that he has some info? Well, I'll just go read on and see.
Whoa right there...I'm sorry, I love this story to pieces but how can Hermione not trust Harry's love after their talk in the Room of Requirements? It seems like she is not as grown up as she thinks she is and I would think Harry would be heart broken after telling her how much she means to him and then she thinks he's wanting Luna? Trust is the basis of all relationships, how can you truly love someone with everything you have but not trust them...you can't. If I were Harry I would lock myself up in the COS and throw away the key. Okay, rant is over, I'm back to reading...stupid Hermione!
Favorite lines: "I'll peel your skin and use it as a rug." "I'd assumed they were going to have sex." Strange they both came from Draco.
Loved your Irma Pince--the consummate librarian. Look after the patrons, but always look after the books.
What another great chapter;
So Luna got herself and Draco effectively married, against Draco will, (against his will as he was out cold) whilst she was keeping Draco from dieing.
I don’t thinks it’ll take years for Harry to come up with a properly romantic proposal, a while yes, but not years.
Poor Terry, who attacked him
Oh boy, Dumbledore knows about the Prophecy that Hermione made, I hope he doesn’t work it out in time.
Trelawney truly gone mad.
I do love Harry’s shirts.
Mmmmmm are you possibly upset with the FF.net administrators? Just a guess mind you.
Super powered Harry is not my cup of tea but you have an intersting take on it.
NTP
I've read far beyond this chapter by now, but I'd like to help out with the acronyms for those of you who don't read my third-favorite SF author Tom Clancy.
CINCLANT = Commander In Chief, Atlantic Fleet
STU = Secure Telephone Unit, a hyperencrypted telephone used by senior government drones, though these days anyone using Skype or GPGPhone has better security on their conversations
NCA = National Command Authority (The President)
Outstanding, time for some serious butt kicking.
gunny
The bit with Trelawney rearranging the colors, and furniture to the original positions, was a bit of inspired madness.
Bravo!
Please Harry hurt some people.
Well I've caught up at last - I'm just one of the slow ones obviously. I had idly wondered where you were for a bit but got distracted - I use alerts rather than checking. I only looked yesterday and I have to just say that on re-read I like this as much as I did before. I'm really glad to be back. Cheers Pam
damn it..eveb after rereading this chapter..I still don't get what the peeve is:{
prolly was on your group...and its way too late to do anything..oh well
anyway..enjoyinmg myself rereading it..
back to it
ThunderGod
Guess whoever attacked Terry is going to have his ass very well kicked...

