Sunset Over Britain
By Bobmin
ireally really like your story! i love the angle your working from, making the characters a bit different than in cannon characters. i think its neat that you tried a different aproch to the story line of harry potter. thinking outside the box is deffeniatly a major plus in this story. the plot line of the story keeps you guessing about what happens next (weather or not your right). i think that this is the most incredibly unique story i've read so far please keep up the good work!
“Oh, Merlin! The last time I saw a look like that was the night before James, Sirius, Remus and Peter put a Fidelis charm on every bathroom in the school, then sold the locations to
people for a galleon per bathroom,” exclaimed Minerva.
*laughter* Entreprenurial spirit aliv and well...
Just recently re-discovered your works hiding in my favorites. The both of you truly manage to write believable tales in which I don't like they way certain characters are portrayed ( Ron &
Arthur ), but they still have believable reasons behind their actions. I mean, if you look at Ron's actions & attitudes, they are remarkably bigoted and closeminded, yet in cannon Harry forgives
or excuses him.
By the way that is the BEST Marauder era prank I've ever read or heard of. Fidelus-ing all th washrooms? Unbelievably hilarious!!
I love the way you both manage to write such excellent stories. I realise that you have finished this tale, but I am loving what I have read so far. Looking forward to your other works. Keep up the
Excellent work both of you, it keeps me coming back.
Mark
“Er… Dan? I don’t own enough money to pay you what she’s worth. You’ll have to find another way to earn your cows,” he said.
Absolutely brilliant... and that line made me swoon and laugh all at the same time... Great work!
AJ
Evil :)
Prof McGon married?
Hu? that's something interessting...
I can't imagine, if I am honest :)
Thanks!
Dumbledore and Snape are fools to make Ron focus on defense, as he could become the next Dark Lord.
I love the duel between Hermione and Pansy. I like how Harry stopped Pansy’s spell. And how Hermione reacted when she thought Harry interfered in the duel.
I like the Board Meeting for Ron, I like how Esther Hampton reacted about a few things. I like how Molly reacted when she heard that Harry was going to kill Ron if it wasn't for Hermione. Shame he
wasn't explied.
“Oh, Merlin! The last time I saw a look like that was the night before James, Sirius, Remus and Peter put a Fidelis charm on every bathroom in the school, then sold the locations to people
for a galleon per bathroom,” exclaimed Minerva.
your fantasy is... i dunno how to describe it, but its GOOOOOOD.. really good :D i liked that.. btw i like the improvment in h/h sexual relationships :}
Ha, started reading this chapter and thought Harry was having a wet dream...turned out it was your disclaimer. Damn!
I'll surprise and leave just a brief comment: great story
I am impressed by this story. This is my first time reading this set of stories, and I like it so far. I like the DADA Professor, Romany. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more of this story, and the sequal, Sunrise over Brittain.
I LOVE YOU PEOPLE!!!!
I would swear you're channeling my fanfic pet peeves. Thank God this isn't divination class.
G
Damn straight on the Peeve... though I am a beta for one, and it is killer trying to figure out what this next line says.
Naruto as fight he smashes face of Sasuke, blowing face and brusing cheek.
Needless to say, I've had it for about half a day and I'm still about 5000/8000 words left to go. Oh how I weep.
Great chapter, and I find it steadaly harder and harder to ever read an acuall Harry Potter book, seeing as I only have PS and HBP... though I do enjoy reading the former, and I suddenly hate the
latter... hn
Who has Dumbledore and Snape redirected?
"Harry was a mystery, wrapped in an enigma, surrounded by a headache!" That about sums it up...plus it's my favorite line of the chapter.
Did the alligators get a snap at Snape?
What another great chapter;
Poor Harry, there’s a war going on with his name on it, and there isn’t a thing that Harry can do to stop it. And he feels terrible that he can do anything, but stand by and let it
happen.
There a few things that you shouldn’t do in front of Harry, the most important is never attack or hurt Hermione in front of him. And Pansy cross that line, and found out what would happen. The
fool!
Luna really is a strange person; I don’t know why Rolling added her. But people do have fun writing her, and does it will.
I like how everyone reacted when they find out that Tonks is Harry’s guardian. And the Board meeting was good, where a few truths come out. As much as I like what happen to Ron, it was a lot,
he devises more. And What Molly did after was uncalled for; she should feel lucky that Harry and Dan or Emma didn’t do anything to her. I said this once and I say it again; Dumbledore’s
world is falling around him.
I wonder what Harry is planning.
I do like this new Malfoy…
I'm almost going to stop reviewing! I thought the suspence was killing me before but now we've really gotten into the story and I want to read more...lol....0_o
anyways really good, I liked the trail, when are they getting their new rooms? When are you going to cut Ron into little piece and feed him to a grim-er I mean when are you going to make Ron fade
into lala land? ...on to the rest of the story...
...did that seem rushed to you? yeah me too...my shortest review for you yet!
As a total Dumbledore fan, I don't usually like fics where he's evil, but you guys have managed to write something so engaging that I can look past that. LOVE the Fidelius on the bathrooms
prank--brilliant!
(I know how you feel about the canon nazis. Considering none of us are JKR, I don't understand the anal retentive view on canon. Technically, ALL fanfic is uncanon!)
Cackling my head off at Snape's private swamp. Great chapter.
I haven't reviewed yet, so I thought it was about time.
First of all your author's notes are hilarious.
Of course I also really like the story.
I guess I'm stating the obvious, but Ron is really a git.
But this sure is a fun story.
There is the matter of apostrophe use in your stories. Apostrophes are used in making a contraction or a possessive, they are NOT used to indicate plurals. Also a possessive of a word ending in the letter "s" is marked by an apostrophe after the s (Sirius' house) rather than an extra apostrophe and s (Sirius's house) .