Sunset Over Britain
By Bobmin
CH14 "...who gave up his rights as a human a long time ago."
THANK YOU FOR THIS!!!
So many fan authors, hell even JKR, falls into this trap. They have everyone angsting over the ethics of executing murderers. It's been bugging the crap out of me ever since I started reading HP
fanfic.
The way I look at it, if you willfully violate fundamental human rights, you are rejecting your own rights. At that point, execution is no more than putting down a rabid animal.
Loving the story so far, which is unsurprising considering the quality of your other works.
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story
Thank you
PS The UK don't have an Embassy in Canada, it has a High Commission, and the 'Ambassador' would be the High Commissioner. The same holds true for all members of the Commonwealth... - just one minor
detail ....
For the record…..I love this story, I love the writing, and I love the interaction. FINALY!!! For once a decent wizard wasn’t totally incapacitated by a body bind! You’d think it’d be standard practice to learn how to wordlessly dispel one of those, but it’ isn’t. Oh, another thing, if the head boy snuck into the head girl’s rooms, tied her up and used a silencing charm……..well, charges would be pressed.
Hey Mighty Goddess Alex
I have to say this... you missed a spot! You must have been busy torturing Alan somewhere when you by passed this mistake. Or was it possibly Bob?
Oh the mistake I'm referring to is the part where Molly sent that owl to Lavender's mum. Where the owl leaves? I never heard of a 'flying birth' even in Potterverse! That's a new one to me.
Nice cliffy btw. Since I'm reading this as a 'complete' story it doesn't affect me as much as others who waited. (That's a thing I like to do allot, read mostly 'complete' stories.)
Well, I'm reading this story quite a while after you've finished it, and I've only not read the latest chapter of "Power of the Press," so as to finish this. It seems almost ridiculous to leave a
reply on a story you're only part-way done with, but I've found that I've always enjoyed them myself, so I figured that you might feel the same way.
Great story so far. I've never been much of a fan of the Super!Harry story genre, as I felt it was too much of a wish-fulfillment, blunt-force method of fixing the HP-verse's problems, but you've
really done a good job of turning that on its head here. Harry might be super-powered, but he's not invulnerable and he's having to use his mind and his friends as much as he's using his powerful
magic. He's having to lead, rather than just doing what he wants. Public opinion matters to him. He's not supremely confident, he just has a lot of power. In other words, he's still Harry. I'm a
fan.
Now turning to the next chapter.
Molly Weasley is a wench in this story. Very brilliantly written.
Birth Controll for Voldemort :D
Sorry, that's perfect!
Thanks!
Harry's characterization is just a little too uneven for me to follow completely at times. He is far too emotionally fragile to be the person you have him at times and there is no reasonable
predictive factor to what will set him off at one moment to the next.
Now seeing as how I've read the rest of this and the sequel already, I do admit Harry does even out some as we progress, but the beginning of this story suffers as a result.
Yes he is abused and has had his trust taken advantage of, but on the flip side he forgives far too easily (Arthur) and is way to amicable despite everything that happened to him. Poor Harry and the
idealic characterizations authors force upon him (JKR included).
Thanks for writing,
Matt
Hey, sorry I havent replied untill now, but I just wanted to say that I love this story very much, and you two are both highly gifted writters. I have no doubt that if you wish to persue a
professional career, you will have many devoted readers, me being one of them.
I noticed in this chapter however a typo
"The birth then sprang aloft and flew back out the window."
Surely this is meant to say bird?
'now days' - nowadays
'The birth then sprang aloft' - the bird
'wizarding version of Kevlar body armor' - didn't you say you weren't going to be doing such plot devices?
A star will burn? what is that a code word for a Nuke ^_~
Wowie! A fantalicious fic that is keeping me hooked! Keep on with the good work guys!
Just a couple of things to be clarified:
1)How can it be possible that The Grangers go to work at a place that is not protected with even the simplest of wards??? I mean its rather unbelievable that Harry would put them in such danger when
he knows how much they mean to Hermione, yet he allows them to go to work like sitting ducks?
2)Well Harry apparates to save the Grangers silently in an invisibility cloak. Yet he does not cast the Lucerna judico spell when it could singlehandedly decapacitate all the death munchers in the
room. And that too figuring he had cast it at a random attack on St.Mungo's whereas this time he knew for a fact what he was getting into...
Anyways like I said before, this fic is awesome, you two authors rock! Cheers!
Wow! I'm actually glad I found this late. That way I won't have to wait in suspense very long.
Nice story guys!
I just want to know how is it that molly is able to send harry howlers but in one scene tonks says that she doesnt want him to know that there are more than x00 howlers comin every day in the
ministry, and even 24 people or so got arrested for sending him poisened/cursed mail.
gz blackphoenix
wow, you really know a story is well written when you start to get pissed off about the way some of the characters treat each other lol, great work
Another great chapter;
I love the idea of the ‘The Light of Judgement’ spell. Harry is right about the Light and Dark spells, there isn’t any, but for the Crucio spell… the only thing that matters
is intent.
I think the Weasleys are right, Harry is probably the only person to succeed in pranking Dumbledore. Hermione and a circumcision spell, I wouldn’t want to piss her off. :D Harry truly is a
panckster.
I know what the know prophecy means, and that is when Hogwarts fall, it’s time for Harry to put his plan into action.
Will at least Harry and friends as warned the Prime Minister of the British Isles, about what is going to happen.
And how could you end it with a cilff hanger like that.
Anyway just wanted to say, I laugh every time V-v-voldemort cackles evilly. Really, is that part of the evil gene villains carry, or did he read too many comic books when he was younger?
-XXX- Malou