Sunset Over Britain

Good. I take it by what I read here that there will be no alcohol used as a plot device.

Nice, nasty trick on the Dursleys, except that the lawyer is now, himself, guilty of passing counterfeit money.

If Harry can take extra OWLs like that, one wonders why he bothers coming back to Hogwarts, rather than taking NEWTs the same way.

Oh, blast. I was hoping that Susan might at least give Hermione a run for her money. Someone always should.

Dobby and Winky being paid? When did that happen? Not a bad thing, mind you.

With the charm bracelet - does that mean Harry can apparate at Hogwarts?

toenail in a pencil sharpener? WHAT have you been sniffing lately, hmmmmmm? also, loved the tee-shirt bit. how 'bout "i killed a frecking dark lord and all i got was this snarky tee-shirt?" once again, GOOD JOB

toenail in a pencil sharpener? WHAT have you been sniffing lately, hmmmmmm?

I’ve read this before but I don’t recall if I actually finished it. I got pretty far in, though. In reading this again, my thoughts are that the story is very solid and there are few typing mistakes, especially considering the impressive length of the chapters, but the consistent error in attempting to make family names plural is rather irritating. You write “Dursley’s” instead of “Dursleys” and “Weasley’s” instead of “Weasleys” and so on.

OMG!love the story.I think it's dolores umbridge. but pay no mind to spelling!
I love the jump from canon and love how slow the relationships are evolving. most stories just go," hey I love you mua mua mua!, lets do it! hump hump hump."
your approach is much...kinder to the mind
LL

Very curious! Very curious!

This is one of the more interesting stories I have read. It comes in second. I am only through the first 3 chapters and yet I cannot wait to know what happens next.

I agree completely with your pet peeves. The things so far I have also found to be completely annoying in stories, and usually I stop reading the story.

I am interested in the plot line and cannot wait until I finish it.

Empie

so, dumbledore. i see your schwartz isw is big as..... wait a minute.
its not!
well jeez, that totally destroys that bit of fun. stupid meddling bastards and their inadequate schwartzes.

Standard Disclaimer:

Harry: “HEY! You guys don’t own me!”
Bob: “They know that Harry, but we’re going to torment you anyway!”
Harry: “B-B-But that’s unfair! I won’t allow it! Only JK Rowling owns me!”
Bob: “Silly teenage wizard! Here, let me stick your toe in this pencil sharpener!”
Harry: “Nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!”
NOPE WE DON’T OWN THIS STUFF

LMAO if only all disclaimers where this random.....
Praise be to bob and his S&M pencil sharpener

So far, I think I liked the two I read over on FF.net a little better than this--most likely, because I'm on the Harry/Ginny bandwagon. Not to say I'm not enjoying this. I am, very much.

Oh, and because you'll probably never see the reviews on FF, I loved Jack and the military aspects of the stories. I'm writing a book right now that centers around the Navy, and enjoy reading anything military. It was a great addition.

You have created a monster. Now my mind is overrun with ideas about writing a story about a Brotherhood of Druidic Knights, young apprentices, medieval England...

Curse you! May you find your socks only when you don't need them!

(Not a particularly bad curse, but then again I'm not all that angry ;-))

So far this is a good story. I always love evil-Dumbledore stories. By the way, I think Wormtail could replace Wormtongue nicely. Personally, I think that was JKR's inspiration for Pettigrew's nickname.

for your pet peeves - i ABSOLUTELY agree. actually, your pet peeve from the last chapter was spot on as well.

thanks for not being idiots =P.

PS: love the writing

The Brotherhood cracks me up. Awesome job.

I may b e old but Harry and Hermione have always been the perfect couple to me. I wish you would use madeye in your stories more, as i get quite a kick out of him. thanks for your story though. you take me where I would never think of going! best regards Larry

:O
Nothing more then being stunned.
Whoa, this is bloody good :)
Thanks :)

i love this story so far! as a harry/hermione shipper i would like to thank you for your open minds and not dismissing this ship because it is not your favorite or acurate to cannon.

Another great chapter, without knowing it Hermione hurt Harry's feelings.

Oh I like how Hermione’s eyes lit up, when she heard that the library contains a shelf that works like the Room of Requirement.

Shame Harry got those kind of nightmares...

I like that Amelia is trying to help Harry...

I'm happy that Emma’s idea of a dream journal is helping Harry.

So Vernon and his family finally got what's coming to them.

I like the gift that Harry give Hermione.

I love Harry's neon shirts! Fantastic idea, I hope he wears them in public ;)! OMG, I'm still laughing from it!

Wow this story is turnig out great and i have no problems understanding it. But there is one thing that has me woundering...the brotherhood...what if the real brotherhood comes out or something?