Sunset Over Britain
By Bobmin
That's an impressive DE attack.
Did Harry get a case of gangrene from the spider bite? That would explain some of the symptoms.
I know this story was posted quite some time ago, but I thought it might make you feel all warm and fuzzy to know that people are still reading (and loving!), your stories. I cant imagine the amount of creativity it would take to write something so interesting and extensive. I appreciate your efforts deeply.
About the online Sobriety Test what does a person do if they have a Mouse that uses a Laser instead of a ball. I love your stories and this is about the fourth time i have read this story i wait with baited breath for new stories.
LOL nice test; doesn't work if you are on a lappy though
I love this story
A minor note - I saw at least two places this chapter where 'prophecy' was spelt 'prophesy'. I had a bit of a poke around, thinking that it might have been due to you being in America and me being
in New Zealand (or whatever), but I don't think this is the case. Just thought I'd point it out, as I like to know when I'm regularly misspelling words.
I'm still enjoying the story, which is vaguely surprising to me - as I said in a previous review, a Harry/Hermione pairing is generally enough to stop me reading a story, no matter how good it is
otherwise. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to reading more.
Oh, forgot to add "Cheeky, cool shirts..?" to that list : D
A really great plot..?
Drug-addicts..?
An (at times) real grumpy but clever guy..?
A cane..?
Sex-oriented jokes..?
Dear god, do I see a bit of Dr House in this fanfiction? ; )
Of course, we already know why Harry won't get a phoenix.
Grey aura and all that, remember?
Pheonixes are purely light ceatures.
Give Harry a badass animagus like a thunderbird... of course, being that this story has been out for ages, that probably won't happen.
This is my 3rd read of this story, and I just noticed something. You say that the last time that Harry got to go to his vault was before 2nd year. But before 3rd year, he was living in Diagon Alley after the Aunt Marge incident, with Gringotts access.
I just want to start by saying I think this is the third time I've read this story and it captivates me every time. I sometimes wonder what J.K would think if she read it.
Please keep writing more stories and dont take any notice of the picky canon obsessed people.
Hoping to hear more soon.
This one read: Everyone Is Entitled To Be Stupid But Voldemort Is Abusing The Privilege.
LOL! I love Harry's shirts.
heh, i can't do the test because i am on a laptop. Do i fail?
How do I do the Online Sobriety Test if I have an optical mouse???
Pet Peeve of my own.
People who bomb Luna.
Some people over do her "imagination"
She doesn't have a new magical creature ever sentence like just about ever fan fic here has her doing.
In fact through all 7 books I think she comes up with less than 6 magic creatures no has heard of.
I understand that the damage to Harry's leg is too extensive to be healed completely, but he is going to need all the advantages he can find when he fights Voldemort, so maybe if his leg doesn't get all the way better, he should think about amputating and replacing it if a artificial one, like what Voldemort did to Wormtail when he was resurrected.
Thought I should take a minute... 1 only... to write a review.
I LOVE IT!!!!!
sorry can't stop reading for longer... need to read next chapter!
lol
once again, great story. don't mind a bit of ron bashing, he always irritated me. think H/Hr stories only natural, and this one rocks!
anyway, on with the reading!
hey! i love the story so far, great ideas with the Matura! I also noticed a little mistake that i thought i'd point out. When Harry is revealing his story to the Outcasts, the line reads:
"You all know that I watched Sirius go through the veil. What you do know is, an hour after watching him die, the old bastard, Dumbledore, e"
What you don't know instead of what you do know.
I love the story and can't wait to press Next!
"watched Harry with large, wounded eyes"
Exactly why are Ginny's eyes wounded...as it is her family was the one doing the damage...and I'm sure Ginny benefited from it at least a little bit.
Thanks for writing,
Matt
