Sunset Over Britain

"Ragnok said with a toothless smile." Did I miss something? Did you beat all goblins teeth out of them somewhere in a disclaimer I oversaw? ANOTHER toothless goblin? :D You don´t like them all that much, do you? ;)

"The goblin smiled toothlessly. “Follow me.”" Why are all your goblin toothless? Goblins have sharp pointy teeth of cruel wild bloodthirsty beasts, as much as I know. Besides, have you ever seen a ruthless banker without some sharp fangs? :P

Every sentence with a goblin has the goblin without their teeth. Their smiles are always toothless. Please, don´t torture them anymore, give the goblins back their teeth, I´m sure the will behave. ;) (as much as they can, anyway.)

I just got why you don't have Harry charge in and kill and the DEs and Voldiemort. I like how you made a belevable super Harry but make it so he needs to what for the Dark Lord to get up to his level. It Works Keep it up

NICE!!!!

What did Abraxan and Old Crow say, when they read you were using them as potions ingredients?

while a cigar is sometimes just a cigar, it can also be a joint. or a grenade. or a lighter that just looks like a cigar. or a magic wand.
i think you get the picture.

Where are you shopping?!?! Cause I really need to get some of those donut spewing buttons!! haha

OK, please tell me there won't be a 200 foot tall stay puffed marshmellow man in this story!

I hope all the elfs are told, and all the other animals, and some muggles.

I'm so proud of Arthur. ;_; That was some great writing with his scenes. :)

nuclear submarines.
You are definitly a bit crazy, aren't you?
:)
Great! Thanks!

Probably the only little writing habit I've found in the reread of this story are how often eyes widen with pleasure or some similar facial expression involving pleasure...

How does one's eyes widen with pleasure exactly....eyes widening with surprise I can understand...but pleasure...well you lost me.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

i have red this story before it is a grate story and i allways love a good Dumbledore/ron\molly bashing story there so much fun

hay you cut off Old Crow’s feet, thats just rude. besides that i must say that this was a great chapter, had me laughing so hard i could not breath.

A redeemed Arthur, not sure about that. But Molly will surely regret this, won't she? She'll lose access to the Weasley vault, won't she?
I just love drunk Harry. I hope there weren't any antiques in the study.
How could Harry not help to use magic while cooking? would Blacks have Muggle appliances?
Harry in a stocking; that is too much.
Isn't giving Winky the cookbook a bit sexist?
'DARK LOARD' -- Dark Lord, isn't it?
This is getting quite interesting (alright its been interesting all along -- getting more interesting, that probably doesn't help either -- oh well, I give up).

"Abraxan kidney" "Old Crows feet" Oh, you're funny. I got it! Only the best ingredients for sure.

i really really really want those trousers you described in your A/N any idea where i can buy a pair????

I'm glad Arthur is not totally unredeemable. Just hen-pecked. The way I see Arthur...I figure when he finally loses his temper I want to be far, far away.

Is there any way I could get a "personal shelf of requirement in a box"?

Another great chapter;

Before I say anything about your story, I have to say that I love your Standard Disclaimer, and they I like them as they get weirder.

I forgot to say that I like what Harry did to Snape and Dumbledore, hopeful that’ll teach them not to cross Harry, but I wouldn’t bet on it. They’ll do anything to control Harry.

:D Hermione really doesn’t know how much money Harry has, does she? If she does she wouldn’t think twice about it.

Hopefully, Arthur can get forgiveness from his family and Harry.

I do love Harry’s plan.

""Hermione shook her head at him and vowed to have a serious talk with him about money one of these days.

Harry chuckled to himself and promised he’d have a talk with her about money one of these days."" *raises brow* <thats all i have to say.

You guys never fail to amuse me with your Pet Peeves.

Poor Snape. Now not only is he ugly and greasy but he now has another part of his nose broken!!!!

I really feel for Harry. I mean to *know* that all those people you see in the street today are going to be dead in four months has got to be heartbreaking. And I know some people probably look at Hermione like she's cold or doesn't have a heart b/c she isn't as...visially? upset over all this as Harry is. But I think its more that she looks at it logically. She's upset that it would have to come to this but she also knows that there *is* no way they can save all those people and its better to save what you *can* then try to save everyone and end up saving no one.

I like the book boxes. Can I use it in my story if I find a way?

...on to more story.