Sunset Over Britain

Liked the staffs. That's pretty original.

Also liked the Jurassic Park coffee ripples.

I liked the description of a totalitarian takeover. It was quite realistic.

Well you also have to think that yes you gave him all thought gifts but you also took away the one thing we was really good at and what kept him alive through all the stories and that is his speed with a bum leg he wont be able to move like he used to. Plus what good is being buff and can lift a car if your bum leg can't handle it.

Super Harry is fine, it's when they start to make every one supper that they go astray. If I have to read one more story were Harry has just enough super power to kill moldywart, but the Weaslett is a super nova wrapped in a fission bomb with Vela good looks and a nasty temper it'll be too soon. One other pet peve. Yes, the Bat boggie is a nasty little trick she has, but honestly people, it's not the end of the world. Full grown wizards should not cringe in terror and flee before her. Especialy not her brothers. Ron, yes, Fred and George, nope, Charlee? ( the man gets off on working with fire breathing flying lizards) nope, not scared, and Bill the guy who taught it to her. Would he be scared? Hell no. It's a nasty child's curse, but not nearly as bad as what Draco, or Greengrass would use.

How could you kill off Madame Pompfrey bad form bad form

So - just out of curiosity - am I the only person who thinks that Azkaban sounds a lot like Camp X-Ray at Guantanamo Bay? And that the authors might well be attempting to make a subtle political point by having Voldemort and the USA form the same type of prison camp?

derka derka derka boom

Still reading. Still intrigued.

It’s not necessary folks, really. Super Powered stories are hard enough to write and make believable without giving Harry laser beams for eyes, retractable claws and cat fur .

cat fur ? explain the super power in cat fur. (hairballs don't count)

Same here:

When Harry or others get extra power(s) or thangs it would be nice if the auther used what EXTRA were taklked about in the story.


I mean Harry or people get Houses, money, extra powers, etc., USE THEM in the story.

You had other stories pleas add a link so we can find them?

Thanks for the story.

This is more than a little nit picky but after the giant throws the girl to the ground when harry summons her I dont think she move perpendicular to the ground. If she moved perpendicular it would mean she'd zoom back to the giant. I think you meant parallel to the ground. Perpendicular means a 90 degree angle inbetween the line and compared surface. For example if I have a flat straight line another line that is perpendicular to the first line would point straight up into the air. So other than being nit picky an more than a little nerdy I've really enjoyed your stories. Keep up the good work

I really like your story. I find it humourus(dont know if that is spelled right)that you had to point out to people about the quibbler line,I am no goin to give you some random set of letters to tell you how funny it was but I will just just say i read it twice and laughed both times.I agree with you own super harry stories though he is gonna half to be a pretty bad dude to take out voldie.I ramble to much here but it has been a very well written(and enjoyed), story so far
thanks
CD

To address your comment "what took you so long?" (to find the story), I live in the age of instant gratification and HATE waiting for updates, so of which never happen.

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Christmassy regards,
Dadscooking

What a sad end to the chapter, it's a shame that Poppy is dead.

'if you think . . . you’ve got another thing coming' -- the saying is actually, you've got another think coming; I realize that, because of the similarity in sound, it has been corrupted in common parlance.
'I should have talked to about it first.' -- incomplete thought -- talked to whom?
So sad for Pomfey.
Too bady Harry didn't let the Giant drop on the Shrieking Shack (I know, bad idea; but funny; I can just see Snivellus crawling out of the wreckage; 'Potter, you ruined my potion; I know you did that on purpose . . .') -- but Snape's and Dumbly's absence is probably an indication they weren't home; unless they're just evil gits who'll stay hiding and let other people suffer.

Draco comforts with logic. Excellent. Snape and Dumbledore as roommates...good I hope they drive each other even crazier.

You killed Poppy! How could you? (I know...I know...you are the authors and no one is safe.)

If you guys are going to use something that exists in real life, you should research it first. Voodoo dolls aren't used in 'voodoo'. They're from a completely different religion that has come to be associated with Voodoo because American's are stupid, and incapable of doing so much correctly (I am American, so I'm ok with me saying that."

Alyx here. I don't think we actually mentioned anything about voodoo "dolls".

As for us using things from real life, we do that quite a bit in this story and if you're complaining about something we didn't even do, you're really going to hate what we've actually done. We twist myths into reality, and resurrect structures long destroyed. At this point, my friend, you have two options: sit on your fingers, or stop reading. In this work of fiction, we, the authors, retain the right to twist, tug, yank and stretch reality until it fits our needs, no matter who it may offend. You've been warned! *Grin*

On the other hand, there are plenty of other stories out there for you to read, including some excellent works by the other authors of this site. We're sure that you will find something to keep you entertained.

Things are starting to get bad, with Amelia and Arthur on a wanted list.

I wonder what Harry done to the Dementors??

Cool, Hermione is also going to have a staff too, that is a great idea.

Oh boy, Giants attacking Hogsmeade, not good. :_( Poppy Pomfrey dead, she was one of Harry’s favorite people.

What took so long for me to find the story here? ff.net. nuff said. My son told me about your new site -- and I'm quickly making my way through it.

...Mindspeakers, beastspeakers, stereospeakers...

wonderful!
i actually fell off the chair.

keep up the good work!

I've been enjoying this story greatly since I started reading it, but there has been one thing that's been bothering me. I hate to be niggly, but if Voldemort could replace Wortail's entire hand, then why can noone replace the few mucsles in Harry's leg that prevent him from the full range of motion in his leg. Other then that, this has been an entirely enjoyable experience. Please keep writing! Far too few good authors are.