Sunset Over Britain
By Bobmin
"Who peed in Voldemort's gene pool" - that's even better than U-No-Poo.
H/Hr a couple by Ch. 4 - and Bellatrix, my favorite evildoer, dead. Gotta see what's left for the rest.
Loving this more and more. I really like that Mimi is so pissed at Dumble, as well at Flintwick!!! BEG I can see so much of where this could go. Just have to continue to read and see if I am right (no, I'm not one of these who read the last chapter of a completed story first!!!!)
Awesome!
SPORK!!! You've been given a random, pointless review! Enjoy!
i hate do do this..... but its not an Ever Quotes Quill.
its a Quick Quotes Quill.
by the way, have you ever thought about how much Ginny looks like Harry's mum?
don't want to critisize your usual choice in pairings, but I just thought you ought to know that.
Hm. The end of this chapter reads like something meant to suck us in before you hit us with death, devastation, and total destruction. Where did I put my bullet-proof vest?
One question--and this is for all you fan fiction authors out there. WHY won't anyone let Neville kill Bellatrix? He's earned it. He deserves it. Please, somebody, give her to him.
Yes, I know this story has been out for a while, but I'm reviewing anyway. It's new to me.
OY! I'll have you know that I am a timpanist or the "kettle drums" to you and they are very musical. Know of any other instrument other than the keyboard that can play more than one note at once?
Didn't think so.
*Grins*
Okay, Ginny's kick to Ron's balls must have been very tough, because I'm pretty sure that he doesn't have any, after reading thus far in this fan fic.
*rereading what I still consider to be an excellent story*
So having said that, this chapter’s pet peeve is awarded to all those authors that make a super powered Harry, then load him up with more gear than an M1A2 Abrams Battle Tank.
I'm assuming that this includes any ability to shapechange into the magical equivalent of an M1A2 Abrams... *grin*
Why has Harry not started legal action on the people who have wronged him?
*puffs chest* I am proud to be a Percy fan. =3
Okay, one question. What, exactly does the tin whistle thinggy sound like? And another, what does it look like. When you describe it, be less... um... colorful because I'm blind. Hey, at least I
can see light.
Why din't I research it for myself? Well, I'm feeling lazy today, and plus, my internet connection is unstable today. (Stupid torrents...) I might research it tomorrow, depends if I remember to or
not.
Sorry for the spelling errors; spelling isn't one of my strongpoints.
I just love long, detailed, goodly written stories, don't you? Yes, I'm pretty sure goodly isn't a word. Neither is thinggy, but who cares?
I didn't review the last chapter because I couldn't delay reading this chapter to add some inane comment; however, having said that, your AN are almost as long as the chapters now.
Joyous regards,
Dadscooking
:)
Thanks
Fantastic work
When I read McGonagall threw her tea cup at the wall, I was like GO MCGONAGALL! She's totally awesome! In your A/N you said you thought about Harry playing the bagpipes, I must say that really brightened my bad day...Harry playing the bagpipes, LOL!
Random idea - if you and alyx both had different fonts (for a/ns and disclaimers ecetra) you could literally have conversations together!
I don't mean for the actual fanfiction though, that's different
Great story!
i've finished the story, and i just have a question, is it a coincidence that harry learns an IRISH instrument and escapes to IRELAND, or was that done intentionally?
Okay, I think I've had enough of rambling about estoric matters (light and dark, in case you have read the previous reviews; though I'm tempted to say something about tattooing being equivalent to
makeup). While I've already said I think this story is marvelous, let me reiterate that (oh, I guess I already have). I just love the plotting and counter-plotting you have going on.
About the ships, I find it odd that you've gotten any comments. I know people have their favorite ships. But if that's all they like to read, why are they here? Personally I have tended to favor H/G
(once upon a time I favored H/H, moving back that way some), but any well written story with a good plot is fun to read, not matter what the ship (I've even read some H/Bella). One thing I've noticed
that ought to silence the ship critics: no matter who Harry is placed with, the partner tends to be portrayed much the same, just a different name attached (granted there are limits to the
observation; just compare a light Harry with a dark Harry fic). Multiple ships can even be interesting -- this story looks destined for H/H; but it has the potential of Susan and Ginny to be added
in. And here I said I was done rambling. Sorry.
'she heard a popping sound as his blush bulb exploded and his face drained of all color' -- I know I shouldn't love that line as much as I do, but I do love it.
Ah, just when I thought Dumbledore was going to get some comeuppance, you mute it with that exclusive interview -- though I think that actually could make him come out looking worse; especially given
how he was represented in the press the previous year and lost so much of his standing in wizarding society (that still happened in you AU world didn't it?). Oh well, it did seem things were going
kind of easy (not that I minded that; its nice for things to work at for Harry for once -- after all, that's why you made him a super Harry, isn't it?
So with the bug (Skeeter) there, I suppose this will be reported as an attack on Snape not by Snape.
At least Ginny gave it to Ron. Is that going to backfire, too?
Well, time to read on and see how my questions get answered as the story unfolds.
