Sunset Over Britain
By Bobmin
Please, no soul bonds.
Love the Story.Where can I find the Fanfic entitled Air Hockey? that is a story right?
I am reading this again and I have to say, you are truly one of the best writing teams I have ever read in both fan fiction and professional authors.
I am very grateful for the gift you have given us by sharing your effluvient imagination.
on your pet peeves point id like to add the people that recap their own stories not the end off the last chapter but rehassing something that happened three or four chapters ago and then there was no point in it good story by way
That bit about Old Crow...
It was VERY funny and did make me laugh for a few mins. However, it did kind of ruin the story a bit. I'll admit to missing that joke the last few times I've read this, and what is even more annoying
is that I read Old Crows stories before I read any of your stories and have only now gotten the joke behind it.
Other than that, this is my 3/4+ read through of this story which I am now firmly fixated on (again) and have repetitively recommended as one of the best H/Hr I’ve read next to 'Always and
Forever'.
Anyways, Good Job and thanks for writing.
~Curlism
Well to answer your 'pet peeve' of this chapter...for someone who has NOT read any of the books as of yet (yes I'm a nut for not reading any) but Fanfictions DO help keep up where the storyline
has come up with. So for myself it does help.
As for the storyline, it's comming along very nicely. You continuously mention this is a AU and I for one understand that.
'care of Hogwarts' -- first time I've seen an owl addressed with other than a person's name?
Nice to see Dumbly get some -- even if only a little bit -- of what he deserves.
This was a really awesome chapter! Your writing keeps getting better and better :) I read your stories on fanfiction.net, and those ones are really good too.
I only have one question. Maybe I'm not reading carefully enough...but why would O'Dalley even consider the possibility that Remus was Lord Potter-Black? He knew that Harry is sixteen the the story,
and I doubt that Remus could be mistaken for a sixteen-year-old.
your disclaimer for this chapter cracked me up, it was hillarious, how on earth do you get away with calling them standard disclaimers? they're anything but standard. i would comment on the chapter but i haven't actualy read it yet, i just had to review your disclaimer :-)
Hm. I agree with you, Bobmin... mostly. (And yeah, I'm responding to your, as usual, highly amusing authors' notes.) If you're writing a post-OOtP story you don't need to recap. But if, like me,
you've taken off in the middle of book five, turned it on its head, but still had to include the prophecy, then yeah, maybe you need a bit of a recap in places.
I, too, am firmly in denial of HBP. There were a few little bits that I liked, but otherwise, well, let's say that I read it the weekend it came out and haven't had the desire to revisit it like I
have with the others.
What is a seneschal?
Arthur's fervent declaration was extremely well written.
Luna's protection for her diary was wonderfully thought out.
What another great chapter, I do love your Standard Disclaimer; I find them funnier with each chapter.
The fucking lying ass Dumbledore, saying that Arthur is going mad.
So Harry wants to barricade the United Kingdom, in turn keeping Voldemort and his forces inside, I do hope that it works.
So the Daily Prophet is destroyed, about time too, they never did paint the truth.
So the spells that Luna put on her diary, nicely done.
Oh, poor Luna! The wording of the warning in her journal is priceless, though, and the discussion about organ rejection was hysterical, especially Harry's unknowing contribution.
And I totally agree about the recaps! If I read another fic that insists on regurgitating verbatim any of the Sorting Hat's songs, I may blind myself with my keybord.
Poor, poor, poor Luna but at least this may bring things to a head at last. Totally agree regarding recaps. Wonderful story. This is so much fun & I rather like the increasing darkness.
Do you accept payment in Twinkies? XD
Bummer, time to put a serious hurtin' on DD and the other bad guys.
gunny
Oi RULE BRITANIA!!!!!! lol j/k. And Rowling does the same thing at the beggining of each HP book, sayin gHP is a wizard blah blah balh
For the end of the chapter and the mysterious person i would say our dear Ron.
Dumbledore is wearing out his invitation to existence on this plane.
Luna as a charms genius warms the cockles of my heart - nasty sounding things, heart cockles. I love what you've done with Luna. HBP marginalized her at best, completely discounted her
basically.
Just a FUN read.
That's all very well, but I'd estimate at least a 70% chance that Lucius will end up killing someone else before the story is over.