The Power of the Press
By Bobmin
That was so totally amazing! Even more amazing, it was only the first bloody chapter! I still have many more to go! Whee! :)
i am really finding my self liking this story thank you for writing it and for providing a link to this wonderful site.
uh quick question were any llamas harmed durimng the writing of the disclaimer for this chapter
Dear Alyx, dear Bob,
I've read this story several times by now and still, every few months I come back and read it again because it is just too good to be read only once. Which is something I have to say about most of
your work.
Thanks for sharing.
Ikke
nice start. like the premise, it's already better than what jk did. she is a good writer, but her plot went all to hell in the last two books
Magnificent! As always. Thank you.
Brilliant ! i don't know where that had come from, but please, keep on !
Thanks for writing !
Thanks for a satisfying ending. I appreciate an *intelligent* climax; it makes a nice change for Riddle to be taken down neatly and efficiently. It's especially great that the house-elfs were so
instrumental in the Final Defeat.
...And they all lived happily ever after.
The best way to finish!
What a refreshing twist! I really like this idea and will continue to read the remaining chapters.
Oh! I forgot my question. Is there going to be alot of military talk like there was in Sunrise? Let me know so I can brush up on my terms. (I had a hard time understanding so of it the first time around). God, now I feel like Hermione, reading to prepare myself for some pleasure reading. Kind of makes me sick as I'm sure it does you.
Nope, no Military terms for this story. Can't promise to hold to that for future stories.
Hey guys thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed this chapter. I thought the bit about the Dursley's was extremely brilliant although I would have enjoyed reading about them being thrown out on their fat/bony asses. Its a thrill that I can only now fantasize about unless you decide to do it later after they can no longer afford living expenses and make me an extremely happy girl. Oh, and Alex, I happen to love the way you do AN. Tell Bob that and to put a sock it it (or incert cruel punishment of choice). I think its hilarious and I give props to both of you.
Huh. This looks like an interesting story. I'm curious to see how it's going to turn out. I loved Sunset and Sunrise, so when I saw this, I was very excited. Thank you for continuing to write :D.
Hi,
Just read your story and I have to say that it is nicely written and well thought out. I like how you are building Harry and Hermionie's relationship slowly and not doing what most fan fiction
authors do; which is to make them immediately fall deep in love at the age of about 14.
But I have one question; did you intentionally put in that bit about Voldemort being killed y Nagini to ruin the whole plot point about Harry's magic in chapter 1? I am not trying to say that it was
a bad point. It was just something that gave it right away for me and I was wondering if that was you intention in that chapter to put small clues that might be caught by some readers.
Keep up the good work and have a great holiday
Love the story plot so far. Although you really hate Ron and Dumbledore don't you? I also see you have a thing with transporters (portals/doors). But that's ok, I like conistancy from my favorite authors. I also like your disclaimers, I see you've moved on to abusing Alex, Snape and Dumbledore were getting a tad bit messed up. ;)
Very good, though i dislike the whole comparison between harry and james. Not your faul anyway, it's just that i have seen it too much.
OMG I FREAKING LOVE IT!!! God i love yalls stroys so freakin much, i so cant wait to reead more and finish off the Sunrise sries, soon as i have more time i shalll! Anyway keep up your great beautiful work and if ya ever need ideas on what to write, i got so many damn storys idea that i want to use but just havent been able to and i know you two could make them great as freak!! Also one last comment... DOWN WITH DH!!!! JK sucks ass for writing that book.
nice story :)
it made me smile and I liked the idea with the globet and powerless harry for a while ?
write more nintschi
Now you've done it. I read another story where Hermione's parents appeared once and I wondered why their names weren't Dan and Emma...
Well now on to the important part of th review:
This is an interesting start and I liked it a lot.
I thought it was especially funny for Dumbledore to survive the "Lemon Drop incident" only to be hit by a bus and then run over by a lorry.
I like your style of writing, it is quite fun to read and I can't wait for more.
> forcing a bondage bind on a phoenix. Once the bind was broken,
> the bird had disappeared, leaving him behind.
Use of bind as a noun is rare, and only for certain technical areas. Usually bind is a verb. Either binding or bond would be an acceptable noun for that sentence.