The Power of the Press
By Bobmin
well reading that thing about the saving roll on a nuclear bomb being 22 on a d20 it more like 25 on that d20 so you better have the bonuses and armor to let you have a critical failure and still live or have sun block 5000, lmao
oh dear merlin...
*backs away slowly*
i'm sorry for giving you donuts, really i am!
*pops open packet of sprinkles*
these taste so much better and are alot cheaper. *rattles packets*
want some? =P
story is brilliant by the way, but you already knew that...right? i dont like generics either...so i mainly stick to the random things...
i am sooo taking over the world with my army of Spaghetti Penguins and Jelly Chickens...
*stares blankly at screen*
yeah...no more sugar for me...not tonight...
This was a great chapter. Really good dialogue, and excellent characterization throughout. I have just started reading this story, and was going to save my comments for the end, but I noticed a
very, very small mistake in either this chapter, or a couple chapters ago. In Hermione's letter to Harry, when she tells him Ron has started dating Hannah Abbot, Hermione describes Hannah as having
blonde hair in a single plait. In this Chapter, she is decribed with red hair.
Great Chapter over all. I can't wait to finish the rest!
SGT Nathan Swift
Baghdad, Iraq
After reading this to my husband over the phone he yells
"Damn"! I say what, whats wrong? (he's a trucker so if somethings wrong he usually run over something!) " I gotta pee" He says "and I just missed the rest area!"
Anyway thanks for the great story, and laughs so far. Wer're looking forward to finishing this and then starting another! If you two were writing this as your own I'd buy!
P.s.
NO cats were hurt in the writing of this review, but a mans bladder was pushed to its limit, from laughter.
I love the story, it's freaking hilarious. I want to know, are the Quibbler articles just comic relief or do they have deeper significance to the plot?
ROFLMAO to the Author's Note... I can't stop. Honestly, the two of you writing together are excellent writers and I'm really enjoying this story.
Also, I would really love to see what you two could do with some of my other favorite fanfiction categories (ie Sentinel, BtVS and crossovers. <WEG>) I am probably hoping in vain though .
I love to read your Author notes and the Quibbler stories after a hellish day, my roomates think me crazy!
Dear Alyx & Bob
I've read and loved
'Sunset over Britain'. I enjoy this story with a rampant passion that would get me arrested and/or kicked out of a library.
That being said, you have
a real talent for making
people feel like an idiot. I've just understood 'Dan & Emma' Granger. THAT MAKES ME SO HOT!
Dear Bob & Alyx,
I just wanted to say thank you for some truly fantastic stories. =)
Thanks,
WiredWizard out.
Outstanding chapter. I am really enjoying this story.
gunny
Nice job so far. Is there going to be a new head of Gryffindor soon?
A bomb a 22? Nope, depending on the system no roll or up to 35. Dragons have dc 25+.
Oh and nice chappy, loved the Lav bit
migi
I love your stories so much! I'm planning to get through as many as possible before the winter break ends for me. Hopefully I can get through another soon. I managed to finish this one last night and collapsed in bed because of all the reading! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Enjoyable as always. Now I'm curious to see what happens with the other characters when they find out Harry is back in their midst, and has his magic about him. Will Ginny drop whoever she's
seeing in an effort to get him to hook up with her again? Will Neville find another study partner who isn't so flighty? Will Ron suffer from foot in mouth disease again? All these questions and more
will be answered on the next episode of SOAP... er, that is to say, here's hoping I find out what happens in this line of thinking in your next chapter.
Steve
She admired the red haired witch for her ability to get Ron to grow up
Now, I could have SWORN Hannah Abbott had blonde hair? Are't the books always harping on about "a blonde plait"? Though I suppose I could be wrong. It's been know to happen from time to time!
Cheers!
ginnysohma
I have two possible answers for this.
1) It's totally AU and I could have made Hermione a blond if I wanted.
2) I believe you're confusing Susan Bones and Hannah Abbot. Susan is the one referred to as having a blond plait. Hannah is described as a strawberry blondish girl with pig tails in the early
books.
~The saving roll on a Nuclear bomb? Easy. It's 22 on a 1d20!~
Saving roll failed you needed a DC of 23. Your a level short. What save would that be Reflex, Will, or Fortitude.
As for the story it took me two days of doing nothing but reading. It's a fun read, and I really enjoyed what your have written so far.
OK, what are you two thinking.
now I have been very HP'ish in the last couple oe years but this story is only a "Harry" story. Now don't come after me with the meat cleaver. because I have enjoyed reading the story and DO NOT want
to pressure you in any form.
Found the pluses to your story, Oh and what a plus it is. Ginny is back on the market. WOW, could you write in a a date with me and Ginny, LOL.
Ok back to the review. GOOD, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
P.S. My boss wouold like a schedule for the days that I will be taking a two hour lunch to read the new chapters. you couldn't share that with us. lol
when r u going to put the HP/xman story up?
Hmm I've always wondered how you determine a generic reader from a loyal follower of your amazing fanfiction.
Is there a scale? Some sort of measuring device or ritual you perform on your readers? Maybe a test of courage or wits?
Bob if you could get back to me I would very much appreciate it. No offense Alyx, I just don't trust you with the authors notes. *Gives Bob a Donut and a pat on the head while smirking at an enraged
Alyx*

