The fall of the House of Potter
This is a magnificent story, i hope there will be many more like it to come.
I love Harry gets a clue and minions learn there are consequences for betrayal and disloyalty.
Yummy, but too short. I would have wanted the torture of Dumpy to continue. I am quite proud of the fact I despise the old wanker.
ps. How soon till we see chapter 1 of Dragon Storm? I have read 90 % of your stories so far, and the DRoP crossover is, in my opinion, your best work. But then I love DRoP more than WoT so take that into account, eh?
WOW, you two are good. Really good. You have gotten me to the point that I almost want to read the books, almost, lol.
Hmmmm, ineresting! TAKE THAT, DUMBLEDORK!!
Oh, and good for Hermione writing that booklet!! :-P
My favorite HP one-shot and my top 2 overall i think for one-shots. Great story.
I never tire of this one. Incredibly cinic, yet appealing. A classic.
Ooooohhh! I do like a bit of revenge in my reading selection.
Tastefully portrayed, but merciless in action. ~ S hivers! ~
One of the best Harry/Daphne stories I have ever read.
I really liked this story! I'm just sad it took me so long to discover it... Thanks for sharing!
I loved it i can't think of anything else to say.
I both hate and love this story. I hate it because it degrades the wonderful idea of a parents sacrice for their child even though it was poorly written in the books. I love the story because its mostly human and has a primary theme that says that we are responsible for our decisions and that the prices we pay for them can endure forever. I hate this story because it is mostly sad and I want to feel joy (don't we all?). I disagree with the idea of unforgivables and side with them being unforgetables. Its kind of like 'once you start down the dark path...forever will it dominate your destiny'. I like to think that we are all humans and fallable and parents are no different. I like this story because it has depth and good writing. Sometimes we need to feel sad but I think I will look for a happy story to restore the balance.
Good Story! I couldn't stop reading until the end!
I love this story! Thanks so much for writing,
Very good use of the Potter world. Imaginative & compelling. An entertaining read with well rounded characters. The plot was impressive. Thankyou
I just recently found your works with the wonderful Mutant Storm. I'm working my way through your other works, and this one stood out from the rest (that I've had the opportunity to read). I really enjoyed a smart Harry and the twist you put on the living Potters. Thank you for some excellent stories.
Hi BOB, Oh and your pretty little psyco, Alyx. I love your writing mate but for gosh darn sake will you grow a pair, Oh, please get out from under the table, Now then, I am currently rereading your, "Stuff", Cos its very good, but I wondered if you had any plans to update your, "Stuff". I would like to sugest a possible Husband for dear little Alye, Lets see, she is a blood thirsty psycotic who loves inflicting pain, the pefect bloke for her is,,,,,,,Alan Rickman.
Very interesting story. It's so different from all others - including your own.
I don't agree with your treatment of Hermione. She was a true friend to Harry who made minor mistakes. He wouldn't have lived without her help and support through each and every book. I see her as someone with a crippling lack of self esteem. The only people she respected were teachers (all her life). She used academia as it was all she felt she had. Hogwarts reinforced that as she felt taken down another peg as a 'mudblood' as the only way she could prove herself worthy. Dumbledore helped her feel useful and respected (yes, I hate him in canon and fanfic). She realized her mistakes but was punished too harshly, IMO. Daphne was a little too hostile. How else was she to have made people aware without her book? Harry should have reconnected with her considering their past in it's entirety.
Love, love how you treated the Weasleys and James and Lily. They had no excuse for how their actions affected Sirius, Harry, etc.
One thing I didn't get is how Voldy 'died' the first time. The plan was not to have him killed but to be used as bait. Why was he left alone then? I would have thought Dumby would be there waiting for him while minding Harry. That didn't make sense to me.
Thanks for writing this and I hope you continue your wonderful stories!
10 out of 10!
I really, REALLY[u][/u] enjoyed this story.
Thank you for writing it.
I espescially enjoyed the revenge on ALL[u][/u] those who harmed Harry...so many authors gloss over it---but your descriptions of the punishments satisfied my wildest dreams of revenge! Congratulations on a GREAT story.