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katrina posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:35pm

What a story you really are on a roll and what a twist. Can we have his final thought Harry would like Sirius back (and I'd like another story).

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:23pm

An amusing pair of one shots, and it is always good to read new stories from you.

I look forward to your next efforts.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

Hagrid posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:43pm

We at the Phoenix Animagus Foundation (PAF) find your story to be most amusing. However we find fault that at no time in said amusing story was a Phoneix Animagus mention once. Some of our members also happen to be on the Names ending in US board (NEUSB) and noticed that no characters were introduced with names that actually ended in US. You could have supported our efforts by naming the new Minister MortimUS, but no, you chose Mortimer. Other than these few issues of non-compliance those who live in my head found this story a great way to start the day while awaiting our daily medications.

Renzo7 posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:41pm

Awesome! A nice surprise to find this in the recently updated section, since I didn't get an email about it. Great work, fun to read with a new way to go about fourth year.

Keep up the awesome work, guys!

Faith1 posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:37pm

Wonderful! I especially loved the centaur bit, and how it was Aberforth who set everything in motion.

James Barber posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:33pm

'ees too beeg! That was funnier than all get out... great story by the way, saw some references to other people ideals, oh my god! plagarism! or at least that is what the sheep out there will say, but I dont see any thing wrong with taking someone's ideal and going with it in your own fashion in your own story, just as long as you dont copy word for word etc... but the sheep see you using someone ideal and immediately go crazy! what's funny though is they are guilty of what they are screaming about like in taking rowlings ideals and using them in thier own stories...hahahaha

Now since your doing all the cliche ideals, how about doing a harry harem story next!

Panaka posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:25pm

ROFL at Abe out manipulating the master manipulator.

Very cool one shot and something I haven't come across before. Very well done.

saint posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 9:45pm

Great story, as always. Wanted loonger since its been slow season with fanfics.
A minor detail: Igor Karparov should be Igor Karkaroff.

Cheers and hope to read from you soon.

Saint

redjacobson posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 9:35pm

So, it's actually Abe that's the MOB? LOL!!!!!!!!!! Nice little one shot

red

Ramos posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 9:32pm

Wonderfully devious, as always.
PS - be sure to get a tetanus shot for those bite marks.

Frederick Herriot posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 9:07pm

Interesting.

KenF posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 8:32pm

I love the smell of Dumbledore bashing in the morning.

sparrowphoenix posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 7:40pm

Absolutely wonderful.

I like these little rabid plot bunnies.

I look forward to the next installment of Mutant Storm.

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 6:44pm

I've seen this concept a few times before, that of Abe being the smarter Dumbledore and is ready to defy his brother to help Harry. Being written as in retrospect makes it somewhat different. I also think some of the acts of vengeance of Harry were fairly original. However, in the end, there was nothing overwhelmingly unique or new about this story.

Don't get me wrong. There was nothing wrong with this story. It is good enough to keep you reading to the end. It is just that it doesn't really do anything particularly unique that would bring a reader back for a second time.

Overall, this was an average. Worth a read but not up to this writing team's usual superlative standards.

BenRG's Rating: 6.5/10