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Tai Lee posted a comment on Friday 16th October 2009 11:02pm for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

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louisjventer posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd September 2009 9:24pm for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

awsome hope for a sequel

Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 7:26pm for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Love rereading this story again. Just remembered something, In some cultures and languages the term/name of Warlock means OATHBREAKER.

Dumbles calls himself a Warlock and yet those sheep morons do not realize he called himself a OATHBREAKER. Now I think it is both ironic and funny as hell. :)

Lientjuhh posted a comment on Sunday 31st May 2009 4:17am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

I Like it.. Well done.. :)

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 4th November 2008 11:22am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

The only good thing is that the WW appears to want to leave the muggle world alone. That won't last. Too many muggles, too much danger. Must eliminate muggles, mudbloods, half bloods, partial humans, non-humans, all of 'them,' Do not see the madness stopping at just isolation.
Too bad Harry is still feeling bad about what has to be done. He should have done more with and to the tracker to find out what he is. Also, going to need a much larger island.
Gabby no longer has the hots for Harry?
You have Harry and Herms dinning (making a loud unpleasant and prolonged noise) instead of dining. I know she can be loud...at least, I think you used the wrong word.
Harry needs more than what Herms can offer.

Fidelia posted a comment on Sunday 2nd November 2008 5:13am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

I do enjoy the stories that the two of you come up with. Percy really is a an imbecile. The possiblity of Harry being deranged is a bit frightening, however, it sort of seems like an act - though why he would bother with someone that will die rather quickly is curious. Or is it an outlet for all that rage inside of him? Does giggling at a doomed half-human bring on the nightmares?
Just enjoying the show and wishing that I were in the Bahamas as well.

Harold Clark posted a comment on Friday 11th July 2008 4:51am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Where can I send the crullers and cream-filled eclairs! Just don't stop writing!!!!!!

jalva200 posted a comment on Wednesday 4th June 2008 6:11am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Love it!

fyrecat posted a comment on Sunday 13th April 2008 12:11pm for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

YAAAY! On to chapter 4 - or is it three? I think I read the last one first... ah well, I am still enjoying them immensely!

Thanks!

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Monday 31st March 2008 12:20pm for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

I'd offer to make you more donuts for more of these stories, but hey, I can barely make a cold cut sandwich without burning something. I'd still love some Avalon time stories, maybe an "after the mist fades" story

Aelita posted a comment on Friday 29th February 2008 8:59am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Love this! It is so awesome, thanks for a great story!

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 10th February 2008 11:30am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

This is one fine series. This is another fine story and I am reading them again as they are sooooo good.

gunny

dennisud posted a comment on Saturday 22nd December 2007 10:44am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Damn good saga ya got here! And I hope it continues!

dennisud

ilchianti posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2007 6:12am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

I noticed an Error! Penelope Clearwater was a muggleborn to begin with as she was attacked in CoS. However the Series is great

Bobmin356 replied:

Wow! An error!

Do you honestly think we care much about canon when this story is so obviously AU?

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 20th November 2007 1:24am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Another outstanding addition to the story. I really like the fluff and the good times. I hate the bad guys being stronger and causing everyone soo much pain. It is nice to see a very powerful Harry that kicks ass when needed.

gunny

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2007 1:56am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

In a couple of weeks, you're going to marry Hermione and that will make you Victoria's uncle and our son-in-law.



Rhetorical question: If Hermione is Victoria's sister, and Harry is married to Hermione, wouldn't that make Harry Victoria's brother-in-law? "Uncle" may make more sense given the age difference, but it's not really correct, is it? That's about the only flaw I could find in this installment. Awesome work as usual!

Drifter950 posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd October 2007 4:27am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Interesting, kinda wonder where your going with this. A the end, you seem to indicate that Harry in not yet completely stable mentally.

Thank you for a good read and, as said, it will interesting to see where your going with this.


May the MUSE be with you!!!
^_^

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Monday 24th September 2007 11:17pm for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

I'd send donuts if I could!

I love the new series(?) it is wonderful. Part of me is glad that you included Tonks and Remus in the spirits of the Ritual ... but that begs to ask ... in this AU was Teddy born? I am guessing that he was. I also wonder if Victorie was born since she is Fleur and Bill's daughter.

Could Andormeda, Ted and Teddy be saved? I would hope so...

I love what you are doing with this universe!

Take care and All the virtual donuts that Bob can skarf! Alex, you can have all the virtual yummies you want as well! (Can I help it that your virtual yummies are probably in the male form? *GRIN* Mine tend to look like Hugh Jackman!)

*hugs to both* KEEP WRITING

As Always,
Muirnin - who cracks her leather whip and gets a wild gleam in her eye as she thinks about what SHE can do with the Potterverse!

koppe posted a comment on Tuesday 11th September 2007 8:39pm for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

Great story. Hope to see much more about this universe -- including Ginny's reincarnation.

The only thing I thought crashed with the first story (Wizard's Fall) was Dumbledore. In this story, Dumbledore seems much more ruthless and manipulative, than I would expect from reading about the repenting Dumbledore from the first story.

In the first he above all regretted his choices concerning Harry, and was admonished by the paintings. It just didn't seem like one who masterminded everything, and thought of muggleborns as a taint only good for cannonfodder. I would also expect that Charlie would eventually see through such a manipulative Dumbledore.

Keep up the great work.

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2007 9:23am for Wizards Fall:Puff and the Magic School Bus

A nice chapter. I hope that there is more to come.