Wizards Fall:Rescuing the Rescuer
By Bobmin
I like it.. Well done.. ;)
another master peice
This is third or fourth time i have this story the best. Part was when Fawkes puts the Randy Ram in the bath with Dumbledore i call it getting his just deserters very fitting.
Love the fic. Re-read it for the Nth time ('twas slow at work) and it just hit me while reading... Is it just me that finds it awkward when Harry, Hermione and other muggle-born/muggle-raised use
the "Thank/Praise Merlin", "mighty Merlin on a bike", "Merlin's Balls" and "for Merlin's sake" in everyday conversation?
Granted this fic is set years and years after they were introduced to the magical world and had those years to acclimate to the cultures but sometimes it just doesn't seem "them".
It's much more evident when it's in a fic where they're still in school but still... maybe I'm just nitpicking...
many parts of a Llama ARE edible.
Well done! Don't expect too much from me in the way of constructive criticism and nothing of negative criticism. I am always in awe of the writer's ability.
Heh, just had a thought when reading about the enchanted rubber chicken.
'A fetish is using a feather, perversion is using the whole chicken'
Hermione having sex with Ron, proves the point that smart women are often very stupid in their selection of men.
I tend to think it is often a defense mechanism for women to marry below their class just to feel superior to their husbands.
Hermione and Ron is such a case, even if Hermione was ugly it would still be the case that being with Ron is a massive trade down.
AS usual, this is another thoughtful, well written story. It would be nice if, on the title page, you numbered the stories in this arc in chronological order so others don't read them out of order
as I just did. Suddenly the beginning of what I thought was story 1 makes a bit more sense!
Thanks again for the wonderful story, I enjoyed it a great deal.
WOW! This was really good! I love it, thanks for a great story!
NOW you warn about the killer penguins! It's all fun and games until someone puts an eye out.
Hmm intersting fic, loved it all up to the last bit about Harry and Hermonie's sex life. Sorry call me old fashioned but if Harry had the nerve to still be a virgin I think he desrves a girl who
was. Sure it was dark times but Harry was fighting putting off his own life and his friends were dying and Ron and Hermonie were rutting like animals?
It sort explains the whole normal HP series to a T, Harry has no real life and takes every one's problems on. No one really cares about his home life long as he saves the world every school year.
While giving Harry a virgin love interest might be a nice fairy tale, this is the 21st century and the scenario isn't at all unrealistic.
It is, in my opinion, very in character that Harry would save himself and finally be bedded by someone more knowledgeable.
The actual events of the war are only seen in small snippets. It's more important to understand their current state and how it got there than to pick up on a minor point like this.
Of the hundreds of reviews concerning this tale, you're the only one to complain about this point.
Every time I read the bit about the Randy Rams, EVERY TIME, I end up chortling like a madman. Fortunately I live alone so there's no one to hear me and lock me up!
The good thing is, if I'm having a bad day and need cheering up, all I have to do is re-read this chapter. It's like a web-based cheering charm, and has helped me past more than a few gloomy days.
Thanks once again for writing it and sharing it with your readers!
Very good story, I really do enjoy this series. Nice to have some good times and now all that Moldyshorts junk. Very refreshing.
gunny
This story is good, interesting, and does a decent job of talking about Harry's personality after having to do something horrible, and dealing with his losses. This could be the definitive answer to the Potterverse evil that's built into their "system", which any psychologist can tell you is hostile and self-sustaining malady. The Ministry and the organization of the Hogwarts houses only makes villains and victims with not future and no chance of success. One can only wonder how the Founders would feel about how their hopes were perverted over 1000 years.
When are u going to contiune wizards fall?
I wish you had numbered this SA I read the last story of the series before this one!
oh well so goes it.
I hope you are as talented with the one chapter I haven't read, though I have the feeling that it will be just as good!
Oh and I hope we see more in the storyline soon!
dennisud
Well aside from the vomit inducing mental image of Ron Weasley having a sex life...and Hermione being idiotic enough to indulge him in it....a very enjoyable story.
Thanks for writing,
Matt
Outstanding story. This was sooooo gooood! Really like your stories.
gunny
I realize it was vital to the plot, but the idea that a brilliant, driven woman like Hermione would actually fall in love with and remain in love with a lazy, slovenly, ego ridden, jealousy driven, half a**ed schmuck like Ron is depicted in canon (and, obviously, is in the story, since no mention is made of the INCRDIBLE personality transplant he received) just turns my stomach.
It's easier to believe the standard explanation that Hermione settled for Ron 'cause she wasn't confident enough to go after Harry.
HOWEVER: Having gotten that off my chest, I must say that this is an excellent story of what may have happened after the fall of Voldemort; well done!