Wizards Fall: The Truth is Out There
By Bobmin
So many days without a Bobmin update. Hope all health issues are going well and the blabbering herds of fanfic readers aren't starting to form mobs for more stories (and chapters for stories
already started)
Why is Hermione stopping Harry and the gang from destroying Bumbles, the ICW, and all the rest of the brownshirts and their Kristallnacht supporters.
At this point exactly how were things worse under Moldie?
So, I'm a bit unclear. Was this part 3 1/2?
Fun stuff regardless
So, quick question. IS this IV in the series... or is the new story 'down the rabbit hole'? Or is this more like III.V?
BTW, I really enjoy your stories and how well written they are (especially when compared to the majority of whats out there...)
I like it.. well done.. :)
I really enjoyed the Wizard's Fall series, and the (for now) leads me to hope that you have more planned for it. It would be fun to read a story about the time between this and the original
Wizard's Fall story takes place, or one that takes place after the Avalon Equations wear off. Perhaps both? :-)
Your H/Hr stories are pretty much the pinnacle of this ship in fan fiction, please come back to it when you're done with Mutant Storm!
I went ahead and read all the stories in this prior to reviewing. They were all quite good, but I'm uncertain if it was better to cover a summary in the first, and then details in the others,
since some of the suspense may have been lost. Additionally, some of the actions Harry did in the first made less sense, without the backstory in the others. Regardless, this series was excellent
work. Thanks for sharing it.
Poor Luna. I definitely think your Luna is in character, and that is why she is my favorite character.
This also reminds me of a little one shot I read, in which there is an unwritten law that Lovegoods can do whatever they want, because bad things happen when you interfere with them.
You know what's better than a donut by itself? A glazed donut with hot chocolat or a glass of milk.
Well, I hope my review is as good as a chocolate cake donut then, *grins.
There are very few authors who pull of H/Hr that I like-and you are top of those few. L/H/Hr is quite favorable though and Im interested in seeing how you put them together... Also, the Fred/George
quartet i really like.
next cahpter please :D
less llamas ( cos they smell like... well they smell)
some aardvarks would be nice cos they are cool like us welsh
enjoyed this yarn how long till next addition
Harry seems to have the right idea and it might save innocent lives. Will Luna find her soul mate in Harry/Herms? It can't be Zabini or else she would have known at Hoggy.
Need more Victoria, Puff, and Gabby.
The Wizards Fall series was highly entertaining. How do we bribe you for more? It seems that I am dead curious about what you would have the Norman's Cay colony doing during their slowed-down down
time. And how you would have them repopulate the Wizarding World - er - as in the reintegration of Wizards outside of Norman's Cay or any other little bubbles of magic that might have also have been
hiding when Luna's Revenge swept the through the world.
So, how do we get you to write a final installation or two?
hi i'm just a lowly reader BEGGING for the next installment of wizards fall.... maby when herm's preggers and luna wants to get preg..
lol
luv al
I love your Wizards Fall series, and am looking forward to more as you flesh out all the wonderful characters on the island (and have a few more luaus!) You've been intriguingly vague so far about
the relationship between Luna, Hermione and Harry, a little (but not enough for me!) more explicit about the twins, Alicia and Angelina. I'd really like to know more about Amos and Angie and their
antipathy towards each other - more scenes with them would be a bonus! You could do so much with these characters, and I look forward to reading more about them as time goes by.
Thanks!
Okeey! Now that was a real trip!Bye the way, Llamas spit more than they fart - and that's the last time I'll say it!!!!
WOW. I'm really looking forward to the 'rest of the story'. I couldn't put Wizards Fall down, or stop reading. Excellent story.
I like this series.
Definately looking forward to the next installments to see how you develop the Harry/Hermione/Luna relationship and what whacky things they do to put a thorn in the side of the ICW.
I know we got the general outline in the first installment, but there are a bunch of little things that you could have them do. And with minds like yours, I look forward to the madness.
Keep this series coming.
2 dozen fat-free, sugar-free, donuts for the authors! (No, they really aren't cardboard, although there might be some slight similarity...)
Ok now, so I guess this was number 3. That seems to fit with the plot line. Although there is quite a gap between 3 and 1 - err... 4.
Anyway, I definitely enjoyed them all, whichever order they were supposed to go in.
As usual, thanks, and when are you going to start publishing your own original stories?
Keep writing!
excellent series. The scenes beginning where the schoolbus entered the island brought me to tears. I love the jumps in chronological order. very pulp fiction. I look forward to reading about what happens after the island is lost to the mists, and when it comes back... Anyway, I really enjoy the way you have written dumbledore in the few stories i have ready. I never did like him. He's evil, even in cannon. Just my opinion. The Weasleys have always been pretty questionable, as well. Bravo!


is there going to be amother part in the wizard's fall universe?