taxzombie posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 6:26am

Excellent. Bravo on yet another quality piece of work. It is always a pleasure to read material by such an outstanding pair of writers. Thank you again for a most moving read.

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 4:50am

This is a wonderful story. Of course it includes some horrible experiences of Harry's but the right people got it in the end. Thank you for writing. I really like your writing style. pms

ED PLATT posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 4:17am

A truly well written and very moving story you both are excellent writers and i enjoy all your stories very much.

ED

Adrianne posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 4:08am

thas was really good
im sad that there wont be a sequel(oh well)
still great
keep the storys coming

~Adrianne

andy redfearn posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 3:37am

Excellent as always. Your stories alongside those of jeconais are without a doubt the best harry potter fanfictions available online. A MILLION COOKIES TO YOU!!! LOL

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 2:44am

Nice. Very manipulative Dumbledore. Glad Snape got Azkaban. Too bad Dumbledore didn't.

I normally don't like Harry/Ginny, but this was well done, and well done overcomes my dislike of that pairing every time.

Thanks for creating this.

Tom A.

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 2:37am

An ok story, keep writing.

FireRose posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 2:21am

Wow, I really enjoyed this story! It was a great departure from a lot of the Harry/Ginny work out there and took things in a really different and unique direction. Fantastic job!

anna posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 2:16am

I loved this story, in some places I just wanted to cry it was that good. I like stories like this and would love to hear more once Harry and Ron are working at Hogwarts.
Thanks for the great story..

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 1:55am

This was an interesting way to tell most of this story.

While I'm not really a H/G fan as I see too much of Canon Ginny being just another fangirl, I like the way you handled her character and her responses.

It was nice to see Ron portrayed as a true friend/brother in this story as well.

Thanks for an interesting and thought provoking story.

Jarrod posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 1:41am

Woooohoooo, and well done. I like how it nicely ties everything together and tries to provide an explanation on how the hell he didn't end up being a snarky ass. As always with the stuff from you two, it was excellent!

DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 1:23am

A very nice story, well thought out as most of your ideas are.

Maybe you'll finally do a Harry/Luna story next <g>

"T"

uthamm posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 1:17am

You can't have the disclaimer state 'no plans for a sequal' and the last line as 'Next stop, Hogwarts . . .' Just not fair!

Great story. I love how you portray DUMBledore. I like the HP stories, but the upbringing and (lack of) training for Harry is just unacceptable. I am sure that JKR has a very nice Deus Ex Machina to end the books. I am just worried about how cringe worthy it will be.

Great story . . . looking forward to the 'non-existent' sequal!

BTW - Happy belated B-day Bob!

lelila posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 12:53am

u know, i normally can't read ginny and harry stories. harry and ginny never seem to make sense to me but just cause it's u guys, i figured it was worth reading this one. it was definitely worth it. i still don't like ginny and harry but i really liked this story. and this was a plot bunny for u guys. honestly, i feel like i ought to be ashamed of myself for not getting anything done. anyway, great story. and i think it's perfect just the way it is. no need for a sequel.

harrysfriend posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 12:22am

Although this story is awsome and i can imagine so many directions for it to go. I understand and support your current thoughts for it to remain a one-shot. It is so good I am afraid you might ruin it with more.

Bob Joyce posted a comment on Monday 7th May 2007 10:49pm

Well done.

CRose posted a comment on Monday 7th May 2007 9:53pm

I had a question pop into my head as I read the part about the letter from Alastor. Why would he write a latter that anyone could read? I would be a security risk if it fell into the wrong hands.

Everything else looked quite good. Great job.

Shayne Rich posted a comment on Monday 7th May 2007 9:28pm

Hi, I read this last night and then spent all night and again this morning thinking about it. I think one of the marks of a good story is how much it makes me think.... this was exceptional.

Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

Shayne

Entilzah posted a comment on Monday 7th May 2007 9:21pm

And this was just a plot bunny you had to get out of your head?

Wow.

Exceedingly well done story. I was enthralled and could not look away while reading it.

loralee posted a comment on Monday 7th May 2007 9:03pm

Great story, i loved the dead letter idea. thanks for sharing :)