DrT posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 9:43am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I wish I could scold you for presenting an unrealistic Dumbledore, but I can't. This Dumbles is not far from canon, and certainly in fairly character for this story. (well, except for the threat to expel students, even those who mistreated a Puree like Malfoy. I'm sure Dumbles would instead merely have them serve a few weeks detention with Snape)

As for Harry's plan for the cure for the common cold et al -- excellent. I hope the Muggle patent lawyers have a double check, not just Gringotts!

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 9:42am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

A great chapter and a nice ending. Keep it up.

Sarah5 posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 9:40am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Thank you for the update an entertaining chapter!

OlorinBlack posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 9:34am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I love it!

I'm an exothermic reaction device!

I can't wait to see what Harry would do with a Howler. I can see it now. An owl drops off a package attached to a Howler. The package, however, is a pair of metal hemispheres, and he can't get to the Howler...So it explodes, and the metal turns out to be Uranium encased in a paper-thin sheet of lead that's torn apart by the Howler exploding...Right in Riddle's face.

Or something similar.

loism1275 posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 9:22am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Great chapter, I hope you update soon.

Junky posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 9:12am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Haha, that was awesome. :)

Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 9:02am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

It appears to me that both Dumbledore and Xavier both appear to be types who do nothing and hope for the best sort of like something a appeaser or coward would do.

Love ending, talking bomb. lol bet that would ruin any death eaters day especially when they get sent straight to hell.

Love the update, was not really expecting it due to figuring you all were having problems in your area with the current BP oil spill in the Gulf. (I think it was done on purpose in order to create fear and paranoia giving Federal Govt more powers in taking away our freedoms).

Laters... looking forward to more chapters....

KaemonManzo posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:52am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

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I think I love you.
God this story is absolutely wonderful to read and I keep on getting a kick out of it. There are new and original ideas all over and I love the humor (for instance the whole "I'm a exothermic reaction device! 30. I'm a exothermic reaction device! 29...").
I can't wait to read more of it and I just wanted to say that your writing is definitely very appreciated.

mjbrown268 posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:49am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I laughed my butt off at the bomb warning bit at the end.

Looking forward to seeing Harry deal more with the Muggle end of things and maybe even the muggle government (US or UK).

Update again soon!

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:41am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

OK. Another great chapter. Kudos for making Ginny a great non-canon character. I am intrigued, though, by how well you've written the Slytherin duo (in addition to my usual plaint about how well you write Hermione, even when she is not paired with Harry). Perhaps your next story?

hjdevnull posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:35am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Hahaha, exothermic reaction device. Nice. =)

Glad to see another chapter of this come up, I really enjoy reading this story. Hope all's well with you guys.

Lady_Readwolf posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:21am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

You have some of the best Harry-screws-over-the-world-that-screwed-him-first fics. I just get this warm, tingly feeling all over when I see you've posted a new fic or chapter--and oh, so delicious in length they are, too. I can't think of a story of yours that I haven't liked emensely, and Mutant Storm is just another shining example. Thank you for finding the time to write and update! ~AR

Steven Anderson posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:16am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I love the talking bomb. It is one of my favorite tricks. Schlock Mercenary? <G>

OrionHR posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:14am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

"I'm an exothermic reaction device! 30. I'm an exothermic reaction device! 29..."

Really you two, read much of Starship Troopers lately? That aside, I love it.

Things definitely are heating up and I eagerly await the next chapter. But, take your time and do it right.

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 8:00am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Again with the Harry and no real fighting....But a great chapter none the less.

Yanagi posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 7:59am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Yes! Another chapter. Thank you.

I do think that Xaver and the X-men are going to have to go to war.

Exothermic reaction device? Yeah, next time yell, 'Bomb!' and see what happens. They'd, the DE's, still just stand there with their thumbs up their ____. Yeah. *snicker*

LeprechaunJV posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 7:50am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Ha! Excellent Chapter.....
EXOTHERMIC REACTION DEVICE!
Wonder what The Wizards' reactions would be to the Kaboom at the end of this chapter......
So Update soon.

phantom1s posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 7:47am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

You two are crazy? You know that? Anyway, I love the chapter, Harry is an X-Man and Hermione told Dumbledore to screw himself. I love it.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 7:45am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

absolutely lovely
the scene where dumbles goes bananas about the ferret getting tattooed and the student reaction was such a wonderful depiction of the reality of british wizarding society. I do not think that i have seen it put so elegantly in 7 years of reading fanfics.

thanks for this and the other wonderful stories you have shared.

Kate5 posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 7:40am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

cha-cha-ching! woohoo, loved this chapter...Harry makes a great point, just where do we draw the line for justice? hurt me or mine and you will find your world all tied up and around your ankles. Thanks so much for such an entertaining read! great job!