Grace Cole posted a comment on Wednesday 7th July 2010 4:07pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Are you purposely writing Dumbledore STUPID?
"Despite all that had happened, he just couldn't believe that Harry might reject the wizarding world. After all, the wizards had given him a life away from the Dursleys for most of the year. Wouldn't he see that as worthwhile?"

Dumbledore is the one that put him with the Dursleys in the first place!!!! Mutants saved him! Dumbledore is just has huge blinders on.

Graup posted a comment on Wednesday 7th July 2010 6:27am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Thanks for the new chapter.

crazyjim87 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th July 2010 1:17pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

i wanted to ask how soon can we expect an update? I love this story and i would like to see it to the end of it. Keep up the good work.
This is one of the best stories that i have ever read

patrik svensson posted a comment on Tuesday 6th July 2010 6:31am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Jonez227 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th July 2010 12:00am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

so you definitely have some of the best stories on here. i love your disclaimers most of all. i've never seen a more original idea then what you come up with. i was...hesitant to read a harry potter/x-men crossover, but i'm glad i did. it is an amazing story and i can't wait for the next chapter. i'll be one of the first to read it.

Kailblade posted a comment on Monday 5th July 2010 2:50am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Fun story. One of the few mutant!Harry stories I've read that DOESN'T give him Logan's healing factor.

corwalch posted a comment on Sunday 4th July 2010 9:51am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I loved how Harry and Logan got to do what they wanted and they way they got around Xavier, by the choice of words used in the warning. I doubt that there are too many regular people would know what an exothermic reaction was, if they weren't into sci-fi or fantasy

n4zhg posted a comment on Wednesday 30th June 2010 6:01pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Ahh, been rereading Heinlein, have we? ;)

"I'm a 30-second bomb! I'm a 30-second bomb! 29! 28! 27! ... "

peruvianprincess posted a comment on Tuesday 29th June 2010 12:28pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Loved it. Keep 'em coming! You guys are great with your logic vs. magic skirmishes, and trying to keep your (good guy) characters to some kind of ethic.

Vukk posted a comment on Tuesday 29th June 2010 10:22am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

That is just funny. None of them would see it coming.

Rahim jiwani posted a comment on Tuesday 29th June 2010 5:12am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

gr8 ending for the chapter... love it..... your ideas are good too.
only problem is that your updates don't come fast enough.

svella posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 11:05pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Hi Bobmin,

WOW the long awaited chapter has arrived & it was pretty damn good to!

I must say this fic has kept me coming back and encouraged me to write an X-Men/HP fic as well (Don't worry different plot and premise). Please have another chapter uploaded at once of face my wrath.

cheerio

steve

IamNotawriter posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 8:27pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Isn't English a wonderful language? So many different ways to say the same thing. Thank you for yet another original, well written and entertaining story.

P.S. Thanks also for the homage (intentional or not,)paid to the late Robert A. Heinlein's "Starship Troopers" (Great book, lousy movie adaptation.) with the talking bomb.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 8:12pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Freakin Sweet!! I LOVED that ending.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 12:41pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I love it! I really and truely do love it. Your are without any doubt the most devious and inventive writers in the HP universe and I simply and very easily pant with eagerness for the next installment.
Carol>clayva10@yahoo.com

ToriCat posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 12:32pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I love how you're intermingling the mutants and wizards in this and the way they affect both Harry and Jean. Another thing I love is how you make all the technical expository simple enough for us uneducated people to understand. Keep up the great work!

P.S. I adore how specific you made that bomb! "I am a exothermic reaction device!" AWESOME!!!!

Zeta_One posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 11:37am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Enjoying this story more and more with every chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Kortir posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 9:04am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Haha, another wonderful chapter and I love the ending there. Serves the DE's right to get a warning they can't really understand. Funny thought about that, my common sense seems to think that any countdown during wartime should signify 'bad things approaching'. Buuuuuuut, that's probably muggle thought there as well. Or maybe I watch too much 'Burn Notice'. :D

Also, I love a lot of the thought about the NRO surveillance and Harry's economic theories. You really put a lot of thought into the plot. I'll be looking forward to seeing what comes of it!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 28th June 2010 2:02am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

In response to Kara's accusing the FDA of being protectionist, perhaps you might have heard of aspirin, acetominophen, and penicillin? None of those was discovered by an American, or even in the United States. (If you are thinking in terms of Bayer, the best-known of the aspirin brands, it is a *German* phamaceutical outfit!) Most of the big pharmaceutical outfits, whether based in the US or not, have US manufacturing, if not distribution, arms (mostly located along either Interstate 95 or US route 40 in either Delaware or Pennsylvania). Also, Harry *specifically* stated that his cover firm is US-based. (Again, not a thing odd about that; pharmaceutical research is *global* in nature, and has been for longer than even Dumbledore has been alive. Unlike even farming, there is generally little resistance to research formulae crossing national borders; the real resistance comes in manufacture and distribution.) Lastly, a point about the globality of Big Pharma and the FDA's rather irksome forbidding of importation from Canada - the issues with the FDA roadblocks of Canadian pharmceutical imports are twofold (one of product safety, with which I have no beef; however, the other is purely protectionist, with which I have MUCH beef). However, the problem with most protectionist legislation (regardless of nation) is separating it from truly sensible legislation (it's not exactly easy to get inside the head of a *domestic* politician; would it be any easier with a foreign one?).

Colpinky posted a comment on Sunday 27th June 2010 12:43pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Good chapter. I think I like the end the most. "I'm an exothermic reaction device 30." Keep up the good work.