Mutant Storm
Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
By Bobmin
Reviews
pug54321 posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 6:10pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
great story have you thought about making this a harry-ginny-daphane-tracey story, you don't do many of those and his early life was so shitty that he should get a small harem, why not have voldie allies himself with sinstero or appocalipes since magnetos not into mass killing , it would give harry a bigger fight also why not get voldie more allies from europe or africa and dark creatures.
irishdaddy0204 posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 6:03pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Awesome as ever. Can't wait to see the next installment. When are we going to see what Harry's friends planned for Snape?
dorodrigo posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 4:46pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Loved the chapter man! I can't tell you how much I loved it. Keep up the great work and update it soon.
Cheers!
marb_66854 posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 4:11pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
I have read this several times and like what you are doing with it keep up the good work.
delrusant posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 2:05pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
damn dumbledore and his path to hell, damn the death eater that can't see that what happens to one familly can happen to another and no one in his right mind would follow such a killing-his-own-people bastard. But the revolution is needed and the only way ofr their world to be ready to face discovery. Without it at least non integrated britain will simply be deleted of the map by the preemptive or reactive muggle defense.
Magic can't protect against everything that is the biggest plot hole in Harry Potter : A bomb sent on a seemlingly ruined castle will still destroy it.
NWL posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 9:54am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Just a note: you might want to be careful with the terms you use. With the fake 'course' that Harry mentally attended, the name used for it is incorrect. What you described sounds more like a "Ethics and Technology" course, rather than an "Ethics and Engineering" course. That may sound like a nitpick, but there's a huge difference between the ethical decisions engineers face and the decisions their employers face. Engineers, depending on discipline, have codes of ethics that they must follow - and almost none of the code deals with whether or not building or creating something is in itself ethically proper. Most engineers have very little decision making power in what is designed; where they have control is in how it is designed and constructed.
Blackstone4005 posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 6:11am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Another fabulous read. Thanks for the gift of your wit, humor and delicious cunning. I adore the Slytherin girls' revenge on Malfoy. I hope Parkinson gets her due by their hand. I did notice her vow lacked the time limit release as of the end of Voldemort issues. That could be an interesting starting point for her pennance....brood mare for House Elves or powder room matron for Moaning Myrtle ??? MWAHAHAHA doesn't cover the joy that will bring to the victims of Pansy & Draco. BTW...where can I get the UFD? I have some lesser mortals who need some WMD's upside the head.
Rifty posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 4:54am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Good stuff, as always.
Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 11:39pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Another great chapter to a brilliant story.
Dumbledore seems to be loosing his supporters (as well as his mind..) in everything he does. Fancy triing to get the ones responsible for tattooing Malfoy BUT not the ones attacking the muggle-borns and half- bloods. Then, attempting to get answers from one of Harry's main supporters, Hermione. He is definately loosing his hold on reality and everything else.
Is there going to be any more romance between Harry and Ginny (fluff) as there seems to have been quite awhile since there was any??
Anyway, great chapter and awaiting the next update. :)
Snag posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 11:20pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Oh dear. Confusing Death Eaters with chemistry/physics terminology. Naughty X-Men! But fun, just the same.
An editorial note or two - The following paragraph could use a bit more clarification via proper nouns:
"Harry turned and looked directly at Hermione. Ginny winced and accepted the fact that he'd turn to her first. There was a love between them that transcended mere friendship, but lacked any erotic element. He came to her for advice on many subjects, but when in a group, he'd look to her first as a guide to his moral compass."
In the last sentence, using either Ginny or Hermione's name in an appropriate place would make that sentence much less grammatically confusing to the casual reader. My personal recommendation, since the paragraph is being told from Ginny's POV, would be, "He came to her for advice on many subjects, but when in a group, he'd look to Hermione first as a guide to his moral compass."
There's also a sentence somewhere around that paragraph, (I think after it), that is missing a word. Embarrassingly enough, I can't seem to find it. But so long as you know it's there, I feel like a responsible reader!
dunedain714 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 10:20pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Bravo! This continues to be one of the most engaging, humorous, clever, edgy and enjoyable HP stories I've read. Thanks for keeping up with it.
Stick97 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 10:17pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
"The excrement made physical contact with a hydro-electric powered oscillating air current distribution device".
I can feel it coming....
Stupid Wizards! Bombs blow you up!
http://www.randompics.net/?paged=502
Sorry, too much randompics.net.
As always, great chapter, and I love the development of the characters, and the plot.
Keep up the great work!
Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 8:51pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
- As usual, a wonderful chapter of a wonderful story.
joeBob posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 8:33pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.
Bob Officer posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 8:15pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Wonder device, I think I 1st read of such a device in 1970, Starship Trooper, by Robert A Heinlein.
You did add the wonderful line "It wasn't their fault that a wizard wouldn't understand the chemical term for an explosion."
All humor aside this has been a good read, funny at places and still making be see how badly JKR abused her characters.
anonymous5 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 5:28pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Oh, I do so like the shoutout to the bomb used on the Skinnies. Bravo to you!
Chorenth posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 4:15pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
BWAHAHAHA love the exothermic reaction device! another wholly enjoyable chapter. harry's plan is a brilliant way to begin bringing the worlds to gether even if it doesn't go as smooth as he hopes... love the Star Trek referenced disclaimer,
Chorenth
P.S.
you guys play Star Trek Online? The 23rd Fleet is recruiting and we
might just be your kind of crazy =) Contact Zekren@zekren if your interested..*cough* err sorry force of habit...
Chiyo posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 3:07pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
Fun chapter. Ginny still seems forced but hey I'm enjoying the crossover so I'll hold my tounge.
Great work though.
lety77_7 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 2:50pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand
I love to read your stories in general, but MS is above the cut. I look foward to the next chapter (when ever that might be).
Kara posted a comment on Sunday 27th June 2010 9:54am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand