Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 2:28pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

That was brilliant! What a great end to this chapter, it was a laugh.

Keep up the awesome work, I hope you update soon.

NeilDingley posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 2:27pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Excellent, Love the ending, I wander if Voldie will be taken out by the explosion, that would make an interesting Power the Darklord knows not. Can't wait for more!

potterfrkintx posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 2:00pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

I am an exothermic reaction device! Priceless!! Keep up the good work Bob, Alyx! Ya'll kick ass!!

Shy1guy72227 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 12:50pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

This is fantastic! Please keep up the good work.

Jeremy Silver posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 12:40pm for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

mutojbe' tlhIngan HolqoqlIj.

jorbogh jan jIH! wejmaH. jorbogh jan jIH! cha'maH Hut. jorbogh jan jIH! cha'maH chorgh...

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 10:00am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Thanks for supplying my latest fix of "Mutant Storm". I see that things are rapidly approaching the boiling point on several fronts in Hogwarts and the British Wizarding world. I'm a little surprised that Pansy would get tapped as a concubine for Tom, but then I suppose that any Pureblood family willing to accept daughters would be less likely to hop on the merry Death Eater bandwagon in the first place, so the pickings would be a bit slim. Loved the substitute that arrived in her place, and I have to wonder just how much credit Draco's got left in-House after he returned to Slytherin from that little stunt.

I see that you've given us a glimpse of Harry's long-term plans, and I think that's one slick method of dealing with mundane/wizard integration. Getting control over medically useful potions would give them a decent leverage to keep the general populace from freaking out, though I do have to wonder if there won't be some elements in the government that will push to have formulas of that sort snapped up under some variation of eminent domain. Granted, that is why you have the fleets of high-paid lawyers on your side, but it could still get ugly.

And Jean's kidnapping is just classic indications of how little knowledge any Pureblood has about the muggle world. (Although, I suppose they could have been working on the assumption that her Muggle toys wouldn't work inside a magical residence with wards, so her "hardened" cell phone would have been an unexpected ploy in that case.) My hat's off to whichever one of you came up with the talking bomb idea, it just fits so well with Logan's thought processes.

Looking forward to the next installment, whenever your Muse decides to get it laid out for you.

blackninjaphoenix posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 9:54am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

this story is very good i only just started reading these kind of cross overs and was wondering which X-Men universe this is AU to (comic, cartoon, or movie)

Jeremy Silver posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 9:31am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Qapla'! majQa'!
mu'mey yajbe' jagh 'e' vItIv

...

um... guess you may want a fed standard translation...
Success! Well done!
I enjoyed that the enemy did not understand the words.

David Shadel posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 9:22am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Great chapter!! Im glad to see you still going with this it is by far my fav. story ever

00_Knight posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 9:06am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Muwuahahahaha! That last bit was just gravy!


Another great chapter in this epic tale, and more than worth the wait.

-sigh- I find myself torn about any Harry/Ginny ships, but only because of other stories bashing Ginny... Nothing to do with your writing, just mostly stories bashing her! Again my favorite pairing is HP/DG because it's interesting and not over done! -hint hint- 8D

Still though anything you guys write, as long as it has to do with stuff I read (e.g. Harry Potter), I'll probably enjoy it.

Thanks again you two!

jabanks007 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 8:54am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Loved it! I'm think I found a new acronym to use. I can just hear the voice of the self destruct announcer from Spaceball One counting down before detonation. Ah, what a perfect ending of a chapter.

Cynrom posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 7:35am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Another great chapter!

All thats missing is some lime jello and a llama, but maybe that's just me. ;)

Chris :)

vila posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 7:17am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Hi, I have liked this fic right from the start but the last chapter and the current one are definitely my fvourites. I like Harry's characterisation in your fic; almost the same as in cannon, just a little bit more assertive, a little more cunning and a lot more attractive (lol). Kudos, way to go...

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 6:57am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Pansy bails, but the DEs kidnap Jean. Huge (and fatal for them!) mistake. Harry rescues Jean, and leaves them a nice fuel-air-explosive device (with audible thirty-second countdown), compliments of Logan. In other events, Harry puts the rhinovirus (and a lot of other virii and bacteria) on the Endangered Species list - by marketing magical potions to muggles/Mundanes. Harry is proving that remaining ignorant not only is no longer an option, but can get you killed.

Kail posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 5:36am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Bravo Logan and Harry! It's all in the loopholes!

darthme1011 posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 4:15am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

LOL I love the last line.. Pure Awesomeness as always

KingDark posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 2:56am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

It's been a loooong time since you updated, but then the size of the chapter is a good reason to make me forget about that.

mawsel posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 1:47am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Very nice touch at the end. made me think of the book ( not the dud movies) of Heinlans "Starship Trooper" with the 30 second grenade. Might have been nice to have a "thermobaric bomb" as well being used.

94caddy posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 1:33am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Great chapter. I guess we will have to wait for the next chapter to hear about the devastation that the X Men have delivered to the Death Eaters.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 12:17am for Chapter 11 - Taking a Stand

Wow! Things are really heating up. That GPS unit finally opened Hermione's eyes to the fact that the muggle govenments or at least America was fully aware that there are holes in their information. That would definitely indicate that some people or someone is not who they seem to be. Neville is a really good example of someone who has no idea how advanced the muggles of the world are. Of course the fact that the wizards in America already work withing the government means that the Americans appreciate tallent of that kind. I hope America will also learn to appreciate that the Mutants have a lot to offer to society as well. The wizards are really vulnerable to that kind of power and organization. The mutants at least are aware of how powerful the muggles are. Harry solution is genius. Making the Mutants and Wizards valuable to the rest of the people of Earth is a very good way of protecting themselves and showing the people all over the world that letting them live their lives as people is to everyones benefit. Voldemort sending for Pansy was quite a surprise. Her reaction was more of a surprise. I'm glad that Daphne and Tracy made her make an unbreakable vow. Dumbledore is an idiot. He has no idea what his little speech did to him. Threatening to expel anyone who harms a Slytherin after all Slytherins have done to students in all the other houses was identity suicide. Harry and Ginny's prank on Slytherin was excellent. Of course the girls were affected too but a school prank shouldn't be cause for wanting someone dead like the Slytherin boys that are alligned with Voldemort are probably thinking. I'm so glad that Minerva is teaaching any student that wants to learn occlumency. Her reply to Dumbledore was great. He needed to be stopped from interferring in that case. I'm so glad that Hermione stood up to Dumbledore and refused to go to his office with him. He has no right to use Legilemency on anyone. Especially a student that has worked so hard to obey the rules of the school and the laws of the land as Hermione has. Snape is an idiot and I am sure he will end up badly in this story. His hatred of Harry is only going to make more trouble for him than he can imagine. The fact that Harry is probably right and that Dumbledore knows what Draco is doing with the vanishing cabinet and is doing nothing is really stupid on Dumbledore's part. By not being concerned he is allowing a potential risk to everyone in the castle. He is supposed to be responsible for everyone's safety and he has repeatedly put the Slytherins well being above everyone else's by protecting the non death eaters from the students who are death eaters. Hermione got a zing in at Dumbledore about how he protected Harry by sending him to an abusive household for 10 years and then continued to send him back every summer until Harry reached out in dispare for help just a few months ago. I think he just might be getting the idea that putting Harry with the Durseleys was a really bad idea on his part. It is scary how easily they captured Jean. They will have to be more protective of the people that are close to them. I think Harry and Logans' "talking bomb" will deffinitely send a message to the death eaters but will any of them survive to warn the ones who didn't hear that countdown? I guess we will find out when you post the next chapter. Thank you for writing such a great story. I appreciate all the thought and preparation you must do to write such an involved story. I have tried to write a short story but my mind just doesn't work that way. I really admire someone with your tallent. I will be happy to read anything you wish to write. Thanks again. PS I really love your disclaimers. They are a great introduction to each chapter. Thanks again. pms