Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 10:47am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Excellent chapter (Seems that I have said that a couple of dozen times, but it is still true) I enjoyed this section of the plot arch greatly. I like that you had Narcissa take Hermione aside and educate her on what will be important in life after their troubles are over, or at least their major ones. That was bery astute of you to not have Narcissa talk down about Hermione's house elf ideas. That made Hermione much more receptive to her teachings.

Also, thank you for not over describing each dress, wreath and ceremony. You gave us just the right amount.

Mike.
Musings of Apathy.

avram posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 10:13am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Glad to see you back. Hope you both feel better soon. Being sick is no fun at all.

I am enjoying your stories. Go HHr!

unperfectwolf posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 9:53am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

So, I was thinking about another story on this site and wanted to find a section in it and then I was like "hummm, I haven't gotten an email about bob and alyx yet, I wonder if I signed up for their update list?" and I hadn't but thats okay cause I caught the update on the day it went up. It was lovely! And OMG THEY FINALLY GOT MARRIED (sorry, I was waiting for that part!).

Davideg posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 8:44am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

that was a great chapter keep up the great work

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 7:19am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Loved the wedding scene, it did ring true. From what you've written, I do fear for Terry & Susan's honeymoon at the very least; albeit any assaults directed at them would either be contract hits or acts of the death eaters who stayed in France.

My sympathies on the illnesses, my lady and I have been there way too much of late ourselves.

callasandivy posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 7:07am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

I've been lurking on your story for a while now, enjoying it, and figured I have nothing constructive to say, and can't mimic a fangirlish squeal of excitement and gush of 'bestest fic ever'. That said, this is an engaging work and I am impressed that you, as husband and wife, collaborate so successfully and seamlessly on it. It is something my husband and I have never agreed on and I envy you. It is great that you can work together on such a thing and hope that it is as positive to your relationship as it is entertaining to read. Well done.

Oh, I suppose I can manage this just once....*flips back perfectly blonde hair*
squeeeeeeeee, yay, great fic keep going.

*shudders*

callas

gummihu posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 6:54am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

"Before you go commenting on how your daughter acted during her wedding, I'll remind you that you forgot to fuel the car for ours and you had to push us three kilometers to a petrol station," she said archly.

This sounds even too stubit to be fiction, sooo.... is it a true story?? :D

Good chapter by the way

James Baseman posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 5:26am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Excellent Chapter! Although the title of one for the sub sections got the theme to the Newlywed game stuck in my head.

Mark11 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 4:49am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

good chapter as usual..and i love your intro's. By the way..Olafr's 'The Time of Change' hasn't been updated since 21-Feb-2004 not 2006 as you wrote in your notes. Or at least that's what it said when i went through that link. So something tells me that our nudges won't get much done. Sorry

Lurk posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 4:10am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Eep! Woah! Rereading my review, I see a glaring mistake!

"Heeheehee. Dumbledore bald. Hopefully that will succeed in silencing all the disrupting murmurs."

THAT was not referring to Bald!Dumbledore, but to the showdown between Harry and Dumbledore! Though it would be funny for the Light to see him hair-less. And know that it was him.

With that corrected,

Keep it up!

Lurk posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 4:06am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Great chapter guys! Technically, I'm supposed to be working on a Chaucer research paper right now...but I'm delaying as much as possible! (including rereading several online comics that have been around for years.) I loved this chapter, and great job on working with Charlie! Honestly, the Weasley's can't really just BLAME him, I mean, they have to put themselves in his place! Geez.

Draco and Luna. For some reason, I've always loved that pairing. Reminds me of the song with the lyrics "I hate everything about you. Why do I love you? You hate everything about me. Why do you love me?"

It's a nice song.

Heeheehee. Dumbledore bald. Hopefully that will succeed in silencing all the disrupting murmurs.

Ah, us Americans get the job done! With explosions and implosions! ...That....actually seems very American-ish, if you go by the stereotype. Boom! Heeheehee.

Eeep. Terry and Susan in danger! Not good. Noooo, not good at all. Well, hopefully they'll kick DE booty. ^-^ Maybe they'll give 'em AK enemas! (Still waiting for that!)

Keep it up!

Gardengirl posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 3:29am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

I hope you're both feeling better! This was fun. I love weddings. Thanks for sharing!

Meg posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 3:09am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

I've no comments on how the story is going, exactly, except to say....

I finally realized, with this chapter, why I'm so obsessed with it, and why I've reread it so many times between updates.

Bob, Alyx, the two of you have a gift that pulls me into the story. My phone rang while I was in the middle of the Johansen farmhouse scene and I felt like I was being ripped out of a controled dream. Your style of writing and the amount of detail and character building you've done allows me to feel like I'm part of the story, like I'm standing just inside the circle of what's happening, much like we see Harry in the pensive in canon. Rather than just seeing what the characters are seeing or seeing them like in a movie, I almost feel that I could turn around and see everything they're not seeing.

Disruptions and when the Author's Notes come up are like a bucket of ice water. lol And while I have so many questions for you (like what the the hell are you getting poor Terry and Susan into and why aren't Dumbledork's elves detected), I trust that they will be answered in time. :)

Thanks again for an amazing story.

Meg

Brandon West posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 12:40am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

As always Bob and Alyx, great chapter.

And like you two, I hate Draco. But this redeemed Draco is much more interesting than the normal 'Oh my god, I'm a good little boy now. Let me bend over to prove it.' Ever notice how most redeemed draco fics are slash as well?

If you guys don't update for that long of a period, can we put you on the updateless list?

sanghamitra posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 12:30am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Get Well Soon !!

ThunderGod posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 12:05am for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Loved the Story, the ancient HandFasting Ceremony was quite good:}

as to the update list..hehehe..should we mention the owner of FFA? This Means War!..and someone else on here?..hmmmmm

oh well back to boredom..till the next chapter

ThunderGod

mattb posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 11:18pm for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Excellent chapter. And I'm a great fan of Olafr's writing and would like to see an update to "The Time of Change" also.

Janax posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 10:51pm for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

First and most importantly, please let me extend my empathies for your recent health problems!

I really have loved this and your last story and am always happy to see a new chapter 'pop up'. I'll probably go back and read your other stories too when I get a chance.

I noticed a couple of small errors in here, but definitely nothing major. Once I think I saw 'for' instead of 'of', for example, but I see word confusion like that not only in fanfiction, but in published books as well. Hey - we're all human! It doesn't detract from the art of your story for me at all. I just point things like this out in case you want to know...

Best of luck feeling better, and see you on the next release!

kelvin posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 10:47pm for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

Hello, another great chapter.

3 question, does charlie still have that diary?
does he know what it does?
does he still use that diary?

David Thacker posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 9:48pm for Chapter 10 - Angels and Weddings

I hope you both feel better soon so you can have fun {you pick the tpe}.Great chapter by the way.