omegar posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2006 7:35am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Wow.

Just caught up, took me awhile, mainly due to having to go to work (never a good idea on less tahn four hours sleep) to make sure i got caught up i took tomorrow off work.

Now then. I loved Sunset. i will just say that you produced one of the best year six stories i have read. Espically when you consider that this is a "super" Harry story, which usally resloves the whole MoldieVort thing by the end of year six.

To really produce an uplifting story, you need to chuck your heroes down a hole, with no way back. with the DE takeover of the British Mainland you did just that.

Now then, onto Sunrise which i am lovign for many reasons. Well written, good characters all is good :)

Of course you have not done one thing that so many authors do. You produced realistic Irish characters. As an Irish man, i often get quite insulted by the impression that People get from stories set in Ireland and the "Oirish".

I must say i loved the taking of people from Azhkaban to St. Patricks in Dublin to be brilliant. St Pats is in fact a mental hospital (St Pats Hospital), and so is the perfect place to hide a Wizarding hospital, who beleives the mental patients :)

Anyway, now i have a problem, after reading through the fic in the last few days i go used to it, now i am reduced to a one a month fix, damn it.

Thank you for a great story that i have enjoyed.

pnthrgrl343 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2006 4:46am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

I have refrained from reviewing until I read all of Sunset and what's up of Sunrise. I discovered these stories three days ago. Needless to say, I've done little else. :)

Onto the review. For lack of a better word, these works are outstanding! This is the first work I've read in which the H/Hr ship is believable and well written. Most of the time it makes little sense as the stories seem to pick up wherever the latest book left and in 30 words or less try to turn it around. This normally leaves me with a headache and a desire to read no further.

I love your portrayal of all of the characters, especially Luna. In canon she's one of my favorites because she's so quirky and so misunderstood. It's nice to see people write her with some focus while still retaining her lovable quirks. :)

Ah yes, and I must thank you for giving Oliver Wood some much needed pentime. He and Charlie are generally overlooked characters in fanfic and even a passing mention makes me smile. What can I say, I have a soft spot for all ruthlessly devoted sports fans.

Keep up the good work and I can't WAIT for the next update!

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 11:54pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

I love your story, but re-check you facts.

The "Royal Regiment of Scotland" is only recently created, and absorbed the Black Watch as it's 3rd Batallion at that time.

At the time this story is laid, the Black Watch would still have been a Regiment in it's own right, and not part of the not-yet-existent Royal Regiment of Scotland.

Otherwise, keep on keepin on!

Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 2:27pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

I loved the bit with Moody. This is really coming together, I'm addicted to your writing so I hope that you two keep on churning out more fics and stories.

The Goblins coming was great. I was looking forward to reading that bit. The Wizengamot reforming, if that turns into a mess for Harry he should visit the King (I'm assuming that's Charles now) and ask him to abolish it. That would be hilarious to see people like Amhar Coeur de Lion react to that bit of news.

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 4:33am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

good chapter update soon

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 3:32am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

bravo!

Robert1 posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 11:57am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

I kinda hope Amhar tries to lead a coup against Amelia and Harry, so Harry can smack that racist idiot around. We just met the guy, and already he bugs me! About my previous review, I realized I was reading too much into it as soon as I posted the review. It was a case of it’s-2AM-I’ve-been-up-24-hours-but-I-must-finish-this-chapter!

And, of course us Bobs are a gifted lot! All hail the mighty Bob, in all his myriad incarnations!

Rob9 posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 8:29am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

This chapter expands on your genius and shows what especially gifted writers can do. It also shows that you have thoroughly thought out where you want this story to go and I applaud you on that. Please continue with this story that is easily the most enjoyable fanfic I have ever had the pleasure to read.

(Bob please stop torturing poor Alan, I don't like him as well but please give the poor man a break. <Feel free to torture Snape though.>)

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 5:28am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Really very good!
Epic even! I agree that your characters are far to realistic how dare you do this!! lol!

Keep writing I love the way so many things tie in now to make this a truly epic masterpiece of literature!

Monkey

ctao posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 3:06pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

woah good chapter, cant wait til the next one is up. keep up the good work.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 10:31am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Another great chapter guys, Keep up with this update time frame. I can see great battles comming soon. And Harry thought that he was going to stay out of the politcal side, I knew that he was going to have to get involved sometime and now is the time.

Thanks for writing
MPF

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 8:34am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Some good news with the goblins (and tidbits of goblin society to boot), nailing down a future cash-flow source, watching AD sink further into madness, introducing another potential headache in the reforming Wizengamot, organizing the surviving guerilla groups in England . . . Lots of stuff in here.

Ahhh. Nippers is male. So much for romantic possibilities with Dobby (unless this is an elf-slash fic ;)

Katherine Summers posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 6:57am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

yay! love this story!

BTW, just curious...i was wondering if u were gonna do anything special for HP's Birthday?

either way, can't wait till next month rolls around with the next installment!

Peter Clark posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 4:10am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

You know, if you left an address you actually would get pizza and donuts? Internet orders to your door, even from here in England ^_^

thewisesirivanthes posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 2:37am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

I can't wait until you start up the Wizengomet and shock those arrogant purebloods when Harry and his crew take their seats and the purebloods become the minority!

ilovekc posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 1:35am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Wow! Dumbledore is an evil little git...I can't wait for that to come to a head. I love Mad-Eye, always have, you write him so well also. Your military terms seem spot on, adds such a grand scale of realism to your work. I can't wait for more! Thanks for addrssing my question...I knew you still cared for the little people. :P

MichelleG posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 1:34am for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Another great update. Yeah! I love the position you've given Moody and how everything is coming together. The Wizengamot worries me...I sense trouble. :-) I wonder what Harry's answer will be to Amelia's proposition. Please update soon???? I'm curious as to what happens next. Thanks for this update.

Taloruyas posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2006 11:37pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Hm... Stargate?


A great chapter once more I'm afraid... We need more of 'em. Now. Please?

Aaron2 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2006 5:38pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Another great chapter you guys, you never disappoint, i love the Harry/Harmione converstations, and they so complement each other, Harry thinks about the war, Harmione thinks of the small stuff. and i do like the small things. and Moody gets into the war, love to see what happens when all the underground groups get together. I'll say this you're Draco/Luna pairing is the most unusual 'ship in HP fanfiction since Jeconis Harry/Pansy WK,GQ story, and take that as a complement, because it just unusual enough to work, and that's because the way you write your story. (love the joke Luna played on Harry)

Why do i have the feeling that the Wizgomat (sp)will be a bit of a thorn. and great seeing the Harry t-shirts again, love to see them more


Seems another part of the war is going, love to see what happens next. and Harry is slowly becoming what he really doesn't want a person in power, the old saying that ends with 'some have greatness thrust upon them' definately pertains to Harry this is good you guys. keep it up

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2006 12:09pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

A most enlivening installment; fortunately, one without bloodshed (which will grow more unlikely as the war progresses). I'm not sure which vignette in this chapter was the most enjoyable but I'd call it a toss up 'tween the dinner party and the scene at the very end of the chapter.

Hotel Sierra, you two.