Afiz posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 8:42pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Brilliant chapter as always.
I'm a bit worried that Harry's lack of mobility would make of a unbelievable win against me, not to mention my Master Lord Voldemort.
That didn't seem to work. I'm not above begging, can you please fix his leg to a reasonable degree that he can kick ass without having to rest for ten days. I mean I fought wars (the current one) and I don't even get to rest more than five hours on the relatively peaceful days. Its a taxing and tiring business, and I'd like to say for the record that, without Me (Not anyoneelse, but Me) we won't be kicking ass. Now unot other interesting things. I like the whole wizgarden-mott thing its absolutely brilliant. The Lion heart guy sounds just like some I would like to torture.. I mean interrogate. Being that he's a royal desendant(did I just mush that spelling?) won't the other royals feel for him a bit.
Now the rant his over, don't expect another review from me till, well whenever.
Again your story kickass for here to Tim-buck-two
P.S.
Thanks for all the fishes

DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 8:36pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

I still haven't seen any reason to think the wizarding government is 'democratic' in this story; it seems to be a pure oligarchy. Give Hermione a good biography of the Emperor Augustus and then have her ship those disruptive elements out of Haven to very different places of exile (as they should, under already established Haven rules) and with no real assets available, they can't get together. Why should Harry et al lug his own opposition around? Harry might not know any better, but those around him should.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 8:18pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Great chapter you two! I really dug how you handled the whole portal thing with hermione really stepping up and showing harry what the advantage to them is. Very good job also with the kids training at school, too funny. The wizengamot git is in for a few more shocks in the future, if not he might just disappear by coincidence. hahahah. Excellent job with another great chapter!

red jacobson1 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 8:05pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

As always; an excellent chapter. I have to admit; I was surprised to see it take this long for the "Yammerheads" (to quote RAH) to make an appearance, but I'll be looking forward to seeing what Hermione and Amelia have come up with.

Thanks for the update

red

vl100butch posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 7:00pm for Chapter 15 - Dinner Guests and Mad-Eye Madness

Oh what a tangled web you weave, LOL

Just one Brit pick. Group Captains in the RAF are always addressed as Group Captain.