M. R. Moore posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 8:56am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Just now when Harry was talking about the Willie. I reminded me of a scene from the book "Grant Comes East" where President Lincoln sits with a Confederate Private while the boy dies.

shlager_5321 posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 8:55am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

great opening for the story!
but one thing just didnt seem right to me...
in SoB ( if i remember correctly) almost every time when someone was killed and Harry had anything to do with it he felt really guilty and needed the help of his Family to get out of it.
so how now all of a sudden when he tried to help save the Auror by pressing the bandade on the wound - he suddenly understands that he is not the main one to blame?
again great story
update soon!

MattD posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 7:54am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Yes! You're back. Thank fucking god! Hahaha...love the mood you created at the very end w/ Harry and Hermione...it invokes certain powerful imagery. I'm glad that Sunrise is turning out to be just as good or better than Sunset. Great chapter.

Kari posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 7:48am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

yay! you're back!

I've been checking every effing day I've had access to a computer, and I'd nearly gone batty, lol. Lovely start. Quite spiffing ;-)
Cant wait for the next installment!

Paul Ellison posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 7:36am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Yay, you're back, have loved the intervening stories but am glad that the sun has started to rise!
Paul

Thomas Light posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 7:33am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

SO far so good. Update soon, and what do you mean by a betrayel in the family? Tell us!!!!!!!

jenks posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 7:05am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

wonderful chap fish with lasers love it

Marina Jacobs posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 6:47am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

This is a absoloutly wonderful start to what I am sure will be yet another excellent story.

Darrell1 posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 6:38am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

all i can say is great start cant wait for Dumbledork to mess things up like always

Frank LeTanc posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 6:34am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

YAH!!!! you have absolutely no idea how happy I was when I saw that this had been posted. another excellent chapter by you two!

erin_colien posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 6:02am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

LOVED IT!!! keep it coming

patrik svensson posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 5:46am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Great story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Chthonius posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 5:33am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Dangit. I knew I should've opened this before going to sleep this morning.

What can I say about this, other than that it is a brilliant beginning.

This chapter had a lot of Harry-Hermione time, so I'm hoping that next chapter will include some Team Weasley, Draco/Luna, and, of course, the Dumbledore Update.

ichtys posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 5:18am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Great. The sun is shining once again.
Keep up the good work

~Ichtys

agent fisher posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 5:08am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Man, you guys are great. I nearly shed a tear over willie. Keep up the good, no, great work.

Carey posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 5:07am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Brillant start, and I really loved the parts with the Patil Family, and Lavender. Mighty embarassing to have my eyes get all teary in class, even more so as I wasn't supposed to even be on the computer...

WNabors posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 5:04am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Great start to the sequel. Loved the talk Harry had with snakelips.Looking forward to the next chapter.

Stephanie6 posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 5:01am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

this story is absolutely wonderful =)

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 4:59am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

What a great opening chapter. I cant wait to see Harry start kicking ass. Staring with the Death Eaters in Iraland. I think its time for Harry to ask Hermione to marry him. They are all but married now. Make it offical so if Harry dies she gets everything no quesitons asked.

emt101 posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 4:53am for Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Very nice. I especially liked Harry's message to Voldemort when the barrier was breached. Hope to see more soon.