Nyssa posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2006 6:35am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

I really love this story. I usually don't read stories that aren't complete, but I read the first one not knowing there was a sequel and I couldn't not read what was up of the sequel (i think it was up to chapter 13 at that point) I check my email inbox constantly to see if there are any updates. Keep up the good work.

And i'm glad Dumbledore died in this chapter, he was starting to get annoying!!

Lewis posted a comment on Wednesday 4th October 2006 1:47am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

How about crabbing a breast

Jeanas posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 5:51pm for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

I love Fuzz I love Fuzz I love Fuzz.
Ok, I said this so I better stoped right now.
Albus is dead? high time for him to bide the grass. Interesting fact you wrote about the Arch. I has divine power and ought not to be used lightly? Does that meant that Albus -mad- on- the-block would suffered in his afterlife?.Perhaps some kind of deity would be quite angrier that the one that ought to help Harry was the one helping him the least.
Voldy is acting like himself but Im intrigued but Snape pet, the woman he used as servant. I do hope that she would be able to come free even she would have problem to cope with the dealing of her imprissoment.
And poor Houseelves but they arent that poor compared to the muggles they have still magic and would fleed from the country.
Eh it meant that the muggle would be used as servant because the Deatheater would not spent their time cleaning and making food in the kitchen. And last where are the Hogwarts gohsts??. Will we see them again?.
Waiting for another update in two to 3 weeks,
May the muse be with you
Cheers

morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 11:26am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Bloody brilliant!
I've read "Sunset" and the first 21 chapters of "Sunrise" over the last three days. You are wonderful writers.
I will continue to follow this as new chapters are posted.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 10:13am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Ding Dong Dumbles is dead. I have a feeling that killing Dumbles is going to have some very ugly concenquences. Butthead Delion is going to cause a lot of trouble over that. I really like what you are doing with Arthur and Melinda.

I can't wait to see what you have happen next.
MPF

Riyan posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 7:22am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Hey guys. Excellent chapter... I love where the story is going.

Incidentally, Ive got a great blooper submission. This story is riddled with typos, but this one made me spit my wine out:

"I… so how do I accept?"

"Be aware…you may loose some things you hold dear." Draco gabbed his gentiles.

"Not that." They both chuckled.

I wasnt aware that Draco kept gentiles readily available to him.

Jake posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 6:08am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Great chapter, would I be going out on a limb by saying that Dumbledore's death was influenced by Monty Python and the Holy Grail? Because the Snorkack definately sounded somewhat similar to the killer rabbit with claws and teeth. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon!

-Jake

Zaxxon posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 1:39am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

I do love this fic... but I'm curious as to the aftermath. The Wizardry World, as whole and Britian, will wish to "return" to the old status quo. But too many are going to be demanding answers as to what has occurred in England, that I am not so sure that the Wizardry World can remain a secret afterwards.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 12:58am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Yeah!!! Dumbledore's dead! And the 'arch' is now in the hands of the good guys... wonder what use they might be able to put it to? Also wonder if they will be able to figure out the curse on it?

I certainly hope that you continue to ignore the suggestions that people may foist upon you for you to post your, as yet, unre-edited earlier stories... after all, if they want to read them that badly they can go to ff.net and do so!

I look forward to the next chapter very much... mainly because I want to see if Voldie's promised attack is made more dificult since Haven is already on high alert and the families of the town are already safely in their bunkers.

Am also very interested in what little plot our deranged slave girl is hatching to cause harm to our much hated evil guys... nice to see that being tortured and abused into insanity has not lessoned her obvious intelligence or need for vengeance.

Still loving you!

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Monday 2nd October 2006 10:16am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

"No, Dobby, your family and family helps each other."

But what about my family and family?

Hehehehehehe!

And Dumbledore got the Snorkack's kiss! OMFGBBQ!11

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 2nd October 2006 7:17am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Alas, how the mighty have fallen. Such good intentions in the beginning, and now look what has happened...

{Shakes head}

AGREEING to postpone your update to revise an earlier story? how dare you! ;-) Give your loyal reviewer the e-mail addresses of these interlopers and we will... Have a little 'Chat' with them.

{Evil Grin}

Excellent work on the chapter I am a little dissipointed that you cut it off here, but that is understandable as I am usually dissipointed when your chapters are done... not because of content or action mind you, but because I want to know what happens next. I do Assume that Somebody is going to retreive the arch of soloman? Also (And I'm probably making a large assumption here) what kind of curse could the arch bestow that would last beyond life? You wouldn't have brought the curse up so often if it wasn't somthing that would play a part in the story somewhere...

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
Manatheron.

Alorkin posted a comment on Monday 2nd October 2006 1:54am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Another excellent chapter. Harry's disconcertion at both Amilia's joke with King Charles, and Charles' personal recognition of his titles, was a very warm touch.
It's nice to see Mc Hardy again. I assume you'll try to kill him off again? Really 30% casualties is appalling. Unfortunately most officers don't think that way. The ones I've served with would consider anything under 99% to be acceptable, just so long as they, themselves aren't placed in hazard.
I hope you will find a way to rescue te house-elves. They need an advocate. (Preferably one that isn't as vehement as Hermione.)
Christmas at the Johanson's was fun. It reminded me of the few pleasant ones my siblings and I had as children. The gift exchange between Dilly and Melinda was nothing less than precious. I was originally surprised at the May/September romance between Arthur and Melinda, but you've drawn it with such feeling, that it seems natural.
Dumbledore's attack, while expected, was well played out. Who would have ever expected him to be killed by a Snorkack?
As always,i eagerly await the next chapter of 'Sunrise'. Alorkin

Crys posted a comment on Monday 2nd October 2006 1:48am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

I knew I'd forget something.

Two somethings.

Sir Basil? Been reading Clancy, or did you come up with this independently? That description doesn't sound right, but I don't have my Clancy novels handy.

Oh, and I think I see a potential problem with AD dying on the battlefield, more or less at Harry's hand. Without a trial, he'll be a martyr to some. If you could put him on trial, you'd reveal his real self and prevent someone (Amhar) from using him as a weapon against you later.

Crys posted a comment on Monday 2nd October 2006 1:39am for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

> She now warmed his bed at night, allowing him to indulge in one of his more twisted fantasies.
Okay, that is just sick. And exactly how a DE would think. Well done on such an "inconsequential" detail, even though it seriously squicks nearly everyone.

> "From here on, kill every house elf we run across. Start with those here in the castle."
Oh, that was a BIG mistake. Now you're going to have to devote a LOT of resources to doing the things that the house-elves did for you. This will be demeaning to those doing it (or overseeing those who are, more likely) and cause resentment and fighting.

> "You're planning a landing at Inverness!"
I hope that scene was for the benefit of informing the readers that a landing is planned, rather than this poor guy getting captured and said landing becoming a nightmare.

I liked that scene with the fairies at Melinda's house. Nice, fluffy addition.

LV can't learn wandless magic and his wand is fried. Therefore, he can't cast magic right now. Yeah, that's kinda important to know.

*blink* Well, she may be in the good guys side, but she doesn't sound all that sane anymore, either.

*laugh* A snorkack. You really gave Luna a snorkack for Christmas. You're crazy. You know that, right?

> Luigi Flimflamari
Okay, now you're just having fun making up names :)

> "Death to the invaders! For Allah and Lord Potter!"
Now there's something you don't hear every day.

Huh. You killed AD. If I weren't scared of Alyx's FPIA, I'd suggest resurrecting him just so you could kill him again.

> looking ashamed and, oddly, a bit sheepish.
*eyeroll* That was awful, Bob.

Interesting choice that you had Dan, the one on the battlefield who knew him least, be the one to close AD's eyes.

> Killing Curses being thrown at him and all of the furry behind each of them.
I'm very tempted to mention Kinsfire's "Fur-Haven", but I won't.

Awesome story, you two.

john2 posted a comment on Sunday 1st October 2006 11:51pm for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

A comment and a question.

V-mort is getting allies - always a good thing if you are an evil overlord.

You write: >>Not to be outdone, Mehi stepped forward. He placed his hand over his heart and bowed. "Honored Leader. We of the Blood Jihad welcome the opportunity to join your crusade. Gladly will we live and fight for the greater glory."

In the Islamic world, crusade is a curse word, which is why "Campus Crusade for Christ" is such a problematic name, but that's another issue. Jihad is not equivalent to crusade in the Islamic world view. For the Islamic mind, the Crusades were a horrible event similar in scope to the Jewish Holocaust (which they often deny, but again, that's another story).

Now, on to the question - the Iron Wand and Blood Jihad folks have landed in the UK - how are they going to get out? Won't the dark-mark ward zap them too as they try to get out of the UK?

J

Tabraiz Rasul posted a comment on Sunday 1st October 2006 8:43pm for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

another great chapter. can't wait for the next one.

scott2 posted a comment on Sunday 1st October 2006 3:05pm for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

great chapter, wondering if we have seen the last of the arch, was it a plot device for setting up the battle or will it be used agian? in any case hope for more soon :)

JDD posted a comment on Sunday 1st October 2006 2:53pm for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

sweet chappie, i knew you'd get blood and gore in there somehow

aengus posted a comment on Sunday 1st October 2006 1:30pm for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

You killed the bastard! you killed him!
May the world rejoice and make merry. The drinks are on me!

Now... are you going to kill Moldieshorts? And what about your other stories that are still trapped on ff.net? Are you going to bring those here?

Aengus

rippergirl posted a comment on Sunday 1st October 2006 1:02pm for Chapter 21 - Christmas in Haven

Yay I was just thinking about how great it would be to get a new chapter update in the email and what happens? It comes true! Yay! Let's see, Dumbledore is finally gone, Snape's slave is up to something, Christmas was celebrated by all and snorkack's are real(and named Fuzz). Can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work.