Rahxe posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 11:47am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

i was on my mission of reading all fanfiction that i can when i stumbled on this blooper

"The man had stopped and asked, "How did you do that?" I replied, "Wewl, I
take deh dir’ and make a rose." He was socked, with wide eyes, and was silent. He finally said,
"Could you do that again?" I did"

just thought you might enjoy this. ^_^

Chipotle posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 11:45am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

If I review, but don't mention the above mentioned things, can I still die a horrible death in your fanfiction? I always wanted a cameo appearance in a story. I loved the chapter, hated the cliffie, and Love Harry in full uniform. The picture in my head is very indecent. LOL, oh well. Great story.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 11:02am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

I have an Airstrike called on your computer for the cliffy that you left us with. By the way it was still a great chapter, I hope you are not going to kill off Minerva, I hope you have Harry save her or maybe Ginny will come to the rescue. Harry a Colonel of the British Army, wow!.

MPF
P.S. I called off the airstrike this time.

minervakitty posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 10:01am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

It would be very amusing to have either or both Voldie and Lucius in pig tales and sundress. Serves Amhar right for thinking that his family background have any sway over the King of England. Will Harry find out about Peeves? Does this mean that Harry would be able to fight Voldie who has a new wand/scepter thing? You know, there's a lot of rude comments about wands and scepters around. I do hope that he comes back. Why are you offing McGonagall? This is one fight that she should win. Would this attack expose the one who's using the dementor blade? Korwin should also show up in the next disclaimer as a target for whoever is doing it. *Throws a virtual banana cream pie at Bob* for stabbing and possible offing of McGonagall. If she lives, *boxes of virtual Chocolate Crispy Kreme Doughnuts and Roast Beef sandwich and beer*

Jujuberry posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 9:51am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Oohhh! Evil cliffie, but perhaps deserved. Good job shaming the people into reviewing (can you tell it worked?).

Great chapter as always. But why Minerva? Why? And who is this killer? So confused...

EricThorsen posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 9:34am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Loved the method of dealing with Amhar... destroy his delusions of grandure with the real thing. I am interested in seeing who it is who has been killing people in Haven.

Jake posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 5:14am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Excellent chapter! I love what you did with the king, that was brilliant! Keep up the wonderful work and update soon!


-Jake

Janeth posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 3:34am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

I am not a pod person! I really have enjoyed your story and have nothing to say for construtive critism, so what do you want out of me?

Tracey1 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 1:31am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

GROWL HISS!!! How can you leave such a cruel cliffy like that?!!? You just can't kill off Minerva. Hopefully her Animagus form will save her (you know, the whole cats have 9 lives thing). It's hard enough waiting for the next chapter, but it's even worse waiting to see if a good character is going to get offed or not!
Hurry up with the next chapter. Oh, and by the way, Bob - CRUCIO!!

Insufferable Git posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 1:03am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

re: Bloopers-
Jug not least ye be Jugged!
;-)

light fan posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:51am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

O.K., so you want comments. I'm not a great writer, nor particularly creative, so I don't usually send feedback. Saying "I like your story" just doesn't seem as if it would make an author want to read his or her reviews .
Since the original HP author doesn't put out books very often, we fans depend on good fanfiction to feed our appetites. I read a lot of it. There aren't that many lengthy stories worth the loyalty required to follow them through to the end. I always assumed the good writers would know from the sheer volume of readers that their story is loved and appreciated. But you want it in print. Flawed though it may be, here's a comment from a reader who has been fed and watered until "my cup runneth over".
Your stories are some of my all-time favorites. I love your irreverent attitude (at least Bob's) in your disclaimers and the authors' notes as well. I assume most of us reading fanfiction are adults or nearly so, and perhaps feeling as I do--somewhat silly about reading and enjoying Harry Potter. A little well-placed sarcasm goes a long way in helping me not feel so guilty and childish. H/HR has always been my favorite ship and I also really like superHarry. We all need heroes, and I don't mind that one of mine is a fictitious character. I don't enjoy waiting so long for updates, but considering the length and quality of your chapters, it's understandable. If Sunrise is the last in this series, I hope you'll begin another soon. Please keep up the wonderful work!

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:26am for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

That was a vicious and evil cliff hanger today... but it does befit the Duke and Duchess of Bobmin... *grin*

I like how you have pulled the Monarchy in even more... And having Dorothy there is inspired. She does fit the type to play spy/efficient secretary to the pompous arsehole.

Can't wait to hear more from the Garden Gnomes (K&D & the rest of the fanficauthors) and Snorkacks (Bob and Alyx)

Oh btw, having Fuzz protect Hermione was so cute. Probably matched her wardrobe for the day quite smashing as well.

Take care I'm off to go clean and work on NaNoWriMo - it's going slow but I think I will do it this time.

As Always,
Muirnin - Please, don't let Peeves be dead ... Thanks for using Voldy in the Disclaimer.

Manatheron posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:50pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

{Snicker}

First off I think I need to comment on your highly creative Disclaimer, I have read a countless number of HP fics, and I have to admit that I have Never seen Voldy kill in quite such an Inventive way...

Hmmm. I think you are setting up either millie or Deneb up for quite a fall... I'm wonder wich is going to get maimed or killed though.

... you stabbed MINNIE?!? We are going to have a long talk one of these first days about cliffies, Unresponsive readers, and tormenting the right people...

Oh, and just because you swore to immortalize the next person to bring it up... You should really cut off, and then magically re-grow harry's leg... And most of moody too.

-{Points and laughs and Bob and Alyx Tear out their collective hair... or rather as they both tear out Bob's hair}-

Excellent chapter By the way, I loved the appearence of the king, and it was fun watching Amhar get put in his place.

Matthew Terlich posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:45pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Oh no! Minerva is dead???

Love the story guys... I always look forward to your awesome updates!

matt

DrT posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:23pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

I really really really hate you guys. Now everyone will think the climax of my current story (Triwizard Redux) was stolen from you. That's what I get for not getting the last three chapters posted, but since I had never seen the Royal Prerogative used in a fic before, I thought I'd be the first.

Congrats.

"T"

Quizer posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:22pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Another entertaining chapter. I'm surprised how they still come out so quickly one after the other. I especially liked to see Amhar get served, even if we haven't seen the last of him yet. I also wonder about Peeves. Personally I think he's still alive. Even a maniac would show genuine shock if he was being killed for real.

By the way, here's something from your own story to poke fun at in your 'Bloopers' section:

"As pain and pleasure fought for dominance, her body went taunt."

I don't think it's kind to taunt the reader with this kind of thing. If you meant that her body went taut, which is the opposite of limp, you should say so. :P

anyway, until next chapter!

Quizer

exar posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:05pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Once again I really enjoyed your chapter. I am wondering why if they suspect someone in the school as the murderer, why didn't they gather everyone and go through there belongings. Would not be that hard even though it doesn't make for a good plot line. It is the one part of the story that I just don't enjoy that much (this murderer) but you have never disappointed and once the full plot is revealed you two will shine like usual.

Arthur and Melinda need to get married already :P

I loved Luna's scene in the last chapter..

Thanks again. keep up the updates!

ian mcfarland posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:02pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

keep up the good work i have printed all the chapters so far on all your storys

Eliew posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 8:59pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

I'm a little confused by the scene where Fred just made a floo call after Arthur was hurt. Was Fred the one to ask the question or George, and whose fault was it to forget locking the door?

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 8:33pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

I really liked the disclaimer. I liked the line about everyone being prepared to believe that the Americans are capable of creating and covering up supertechnology too. I really hope Peeves isn't dead. He didn't go out with enough of a bang if he did, but I somehow think you can't keep a poltergeist down. Thorntree is fun. I loved the Ghost Council. Winky proclaiming that she knows how to keep an insane house-elf mate happy made me grin too. Amhar's clearly going to come back with a nasty plan. Finally: why did you have to do an evil cliffie the same day as WhyDoYouNeedToKnow gives us an evil cliffie? Not even magic is going to be able to fix my thumbs unless you continue soon. So more please. Good chapter.