Asad posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 8:33pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

LOL! Nice chappie and evil cliffie. I absolutely love it when Amhar gets his ass kicked again and again and again.....

Srikanth posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 7:51pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

*Sigh* poor ol' minnie...

well thanks for churning out the chapter ahead of the schedule. great to read it.

Ok at the risk of my namesake dying a terrible death....i ask this question... is Peeves really dead? also the question about the Grangers becoming magical.. what explanation will harry give?

he cannot the actual reason for obvious reasons. so will have to see how harry deals with it.

Again thanks for the excellent chapter

Lionsgate posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 6:00pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Yep : we still want more !!!

JDD posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 4:56pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

awesome, finally you dealt with amhar. but of course, since his character is so deeply twisted, he'll be back and i can't wait. but go harry!

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 3:53pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Another great chapter. I love the solution, although not total, to the Wizengamott problem. When he left, I thought he was going to return with Murphy ready to make her full confession, but you did better.

Thw twins should install a locking charm, or even a muggle lock on the door that will normally be locked unless otherwise activated instead of the reverse. If it were muggle, the girls could activate it, and we all know that they are the more responsible twins.

Just a tiny Amy bit there, hardly a paragraph. I'd like to see her get a tiny measure of revenge on the twins. Something involving straps and her testing her inventions on them, for once. It could even end up in some admiration for her creativeness.

Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

agent fisher posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 3:41pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Flippin Awesome.

nurray posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 3:35pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Another excellent chapter. Your removal of the Wizengamot was well presaged by the idea of having the British royalty disband the Wizengamot and you dealt Amhar a blow by having his ancestry denied by the King himself.

Though the question that Amhar raised will cause questions to be asked as to how previously people listed as muggles did become magical. I think Harry may have needed to trace the Granger ancestral trees for both Mr and Mrs Granger.

Of my posing this question will probably mean that in the next major battle between Volemort's forces and Harry's there will be minor Death Eater with my name who dies horribly, somehow.

And no I am not a pod person. (I just look like one on weekends).

merf425 posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 3:16pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Ah, a cliffhanger! You can't kill McGonagall, because she just died in another story that I follow, and she's one of my favourite characters... Okay, I know that is a terrible reason, but seriously, please don't kill her.

MononWalker posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 3:13pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Bob & Alyx -- great chapter again. Ahmar certainly got his arse handed to him. Don't think he likes how it looks in his hands, though.

No much to say about this chapter. Everything seems to be moving along nicely (nicely?) towards the Final Battle now that Mouldie has something that can channel his new powers.

About the only thing I can see a "problem" with is in the Bloopers:

The first plain is the plain of spirits, that's where you go after you die to be jugged.

You may not jug the authors too harshly but it is plain to see that they are not seeking a higher plane of grammatical understanding.

Until next time -- Excelsior!

beauty0102 posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 3:06pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

yet another great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

JVTazz posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 2:53pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

...you know for a few moments before Harry appeared and he was at Gringotts, I was thinking something along the lines of him showing the Grangers to be the squib line of Merlin or some other powerful historical figure...but then again I think I'm glad you didn't do that, would have felt wrong :) Good Chapter :)

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 2:29pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Evil cliffhanger indeed. Great chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

I was very tempted to make some comment about magical prosthetics just in the hopes of getting to be the gruesome grisly dead one. But I assume plenty of other people will do that. :-)

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 2:21pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

I started going to church for the first time a few weeks ago (Baptist, if it makes any real difference) and even as a quasi-agnostic I can see why those who are religious have a hard time excepting that others have different beliefs. My girlfriend (well, ex- now, apparently she hadn't known I wasn't christian) doesn't like it when religion comes up and I champion that my own view that all the gods that are worshipped here on earth might be the same being simply wearing a different mask for each occasion. Ok, soapbox time is over.

France... What will they do with France? I had this image of the French trying to take Harry and then hordes of fire-breathing camels stampeding through the streets of Paris, and their riders whooping like banshees. It made me smile.

So long, farewell, Auf wiedersehn, good night!

Aliwaheed posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 2:00pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

That cliffy was not funny at all, not funny, it was eh so i dont know what to say. Now we have to wait a week or more to find out what happened i did not expect this from you people. For this Bob i would like to slam this monitor on your head, in fact i think i should do that. Picks up the monitor and slams it on Bob's head, there, you look better like that, laughs watching Bob's head poking from the monitor, dont you think Alyx he looks cute like that.

The story is good though getting more interesting, although i wish you have not really killed Peeves.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 1:50pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

My, my, such a cliffie you left. Then again, it has been a while since you left one, hasn't it? 'Twould appear that things are heating up all over the place, though the French government appears to be following its standard norms.

*smile* I will admit to being overjoyed at seeing Harry let his Slytherin side out to play more; he really should do that more often.

Julian Kozinski posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 1:36pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Love your guy's stories, even if I may have to trace your IP and in the middle of the night kill you in the most evil of ways.

Anyway on to pointing out why im making my first reply and that is because of your bloopers. Made me really laugh in the fact that,

The first plain is the plain of spirits, that's where you go after you die to be jugged.

You may have missed,

The first plain is the plain of spirits, that's where you go after you die to be jugged.

I dunno, I just wanted to post a reply but it had to have relevance :D well anyway keep up the great work.

Iain Neilson posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 1:06pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Heh, loved the part about the King disarming Amhar. Harry's travelling is quite a good solution, perhaps it could become more mainstream? The killer of Haven is an interesting plot device. Poor Peeves, he was finally hit with an avada. I hope he pulls through.

Here's a blooper for your next chapter: Irises that help no pupils, just swirling reds, settled on pitch black sclera's.

http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=31505
Queens of Darkness, Ladies of Light, by Thalarian.

When I told a friend about it, he thought I said: viruses that held no pupils, just swirling reds, settled on pitch black sclera's. Which do you think is better?

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:56pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

YOu can not kill off McGonagal. She is one of my favorites. Please don't kill her. Other then that, excellent story I am enjoying it very much

freakyfinger posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:54pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

Good chapter. hehe . . I love the way Amhar got his 'rightful justice'!

lilchuckie posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:44pm for Chapter 23 - Muddying the Waters

berger off!
flame on!
yeah, it's a good thing they got rid of the 5th member of the fantastic four... you know, the one who could control barbecue grills and talk to burgers.

yo bob and alyx! come closer so that i may give you a shiatzu ego massage.

story is great (and coming along nicely)
charcters ... shit, i love your charcters more then the ones in J.K.'s books.
and bob? thanx for the cliffie, you spaz.. i hate waiting.
and alyx? if that frying pan gets a lil' worn out i think my g/f has a chuck taylor all-star with +10 damage and + 4 waffleprint bruise you can use (size 9, but the smaller size cuts thru the air faster.. a frying pan is like swinging a fan)

got a question for you guys (if you dont mind me asking) where exactly are you guys located?
a state would be nice, but a city would be great.

if you want to reach me you can drop a line to "lilchuckie@hotmail.com"

thanks guys , keep up the good work (and all that trash)