la13 posted a comment on Sunday 25th March 2007 1:52am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

So, I've been following this story for a bit, but I haven't been very good about keeping up or reviewing. I just wanted to tell you how much I've enjoyed this story so far! It's such well-thought out and thorough adventure. I feel like you put so much time and effort into this story, and it really shows in how complete it is. It has a nice balance of seriousness and humor, and I've just really enjoyed getting to see your version of how Harry Potter might've been.

Ok, so more specifically for this chapter...the battle definitely did not disappoint! Sometimes all the build up just doesn't payoff, but I thought you did a really great job of keeping it interesting and tense. The way Harry finished off Voldemort definitely intrigued me. The idea of cutting him off from his magic just seems like the perfect punishment even if he hadn't died from it. I can't believe that he's finally gone though!

Anyway, I'm enjoying the story lots and I'm glad everything's getting resolved now, but it makes me sad that the story's almost over! I'm excited to see what happens next...

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Saturday 24th March 2007 11:47pm for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

good chapters update soon

silvie posted a comment on Friday 23rd March 2007 6:14am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Please, please, please use Peeves and his 'brothers' in one of your last disclaimers! The result can only be mayhem.

Lady Melina Hites posted a comment on Friday 23rd March 2007 2:43am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

wow... three letters and 1 word...wow....


Best(and logest) chapter yet..... I am still awstruck and i read it on the 20th.... wow... good job... wow.... I am so happy that voldys dead JOY JOY!!!!!!!!!!!!



wow.....

melina

Elizabeth3 posted a comment on Thursday 22nd March 2007 3:58pm for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

I have been waiting for this day for a long time! I have always loved your writing, and sunset and sunrise are great. Yay! Voldies dead! Finally.....!

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Thursday 22nd March 2007 11:58am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Awesome final battle! This is such an amazing fic!

Wyes posted a comment on Thursday 22nd March 2007 4:14am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

I'd just like to say that the both of you are brilliant authors. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to more.

Keep writing!

kelvin posted a comment on Wednesday 21st March 2007 6:13pm for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

hey guys,

woohoo voldie is dead. and all is good in the world.

hey, isnt a outhouse an outdoor toilet?

Badger-dude posted a comment on Wednesday 21st March 2007 4:19am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

woop great chapter! A bit of a..... short battle though. I would have thought the reclaimation of Britain would hae taken longer. And also, what of the Tongs?

KateL posted a comment on Wednesday 21st March 2007 3:14am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

OOOPS, I asked in previous review about Snape...I re-read the last 6 chapters, yeah I must have been tired when I read that Cho killed him..my mistake.

Ding-dong the witch is dead...hi-ho the derry-o...yay! Voldie is pushing up daisies, interesting way to go. So it looks like Harry absorbed some of his power???

Great chapter, here is a plate of virtual cookies (chocolate nut caramel) for you success!

Srikanth posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 10:45pm for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Hmm.... what can i say? i am rendered speechless. This is cool way to end a story. I cannot help but compare this finale to the battle chapter from Spritus crystallus. You guys have come a long way from a '!' loving exclamators( for fun once just check the number of sentencs in the DA starting chapters) to great authors in your own right.

Coool. Looking forward to how you guys are gonna wrap it up.

Adam posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 2:39pm for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

A very well done chapter, you do seem to write the battles well, but the I would guess comes down to having a plan on how things go :).

Anyway this has been a great story, and I have enjoyed every chapter, so I am looking forward to seeing how things get wrapped up.

After all, all good things must come to an end at some point. But thanks for putting it off for so long.

blind-phoenix posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 2:35pm for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

it almost seems like the end of an era. I've followed this story from go to woe and I must say I'm impressed. there are very few writers that peak my interest these days but you two have kept me hooked all the way through.
can't wait to see what you do to wind things up.
thank you both for a great story. it's helped to take my mind of things when things get a bit hard around here.

DaZZa posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 11:13am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

You guys rock. I hadda wait a couple of days after getting the notice of this being posted before I could find time to read it - but it was worth the wait.

I'll be saddened to see the end of this particular plenum of "the HP universe as defined by fans" end - but I guess all good things come to an end.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 10:46am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Brilliant!!! Very well done.

gunny

Chem Prof posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 9:20am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Wow! That was incredible. Probably the best large scale extended final battle scene I've ever read. I wish I could have you write the final battle for my story!

Completely riveting chapter. I particularly enjoyed reading about all the battle coordination and planning, and how it all came together. But even so, things never go strictly according to plan and the outcome is heavily influenced by who improvises better. And the 'fog of war' where not everyone knows exactly what the others on their side are doing, and what's going on with the wounded they lose track of.

Very well done, and I'm looking forward to the wrap up and to reading the short stories you've been saving for us.

Chem Prof

patrik svensson posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 8:52am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Great story,
keep up the good work.

heart_bloodline posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 7:36am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Thank you.

jdcox61 posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 4:13am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

YES! that was awesome. i liked that you snuffed the Dark Tosser in a way that I've never read about, it seems to be hard to come up with ways to kill him. I thought it was funny how he just stood there and stared at the plane as it flew by, like what the hell is that? It was a great chapter, and Fuzz rocks! Meep Whirr!

jackstraw posted a comment on Tuesday 20th March 2007 3:35am for Chapter 30 - Sunrise Over Britain

Long time reader, first time reviewer.

I have mixed feelings about this epic finally coming to an end. You surely have done a greater job than we could ever hope for from JKR. Is Sunset and Sunrise now longer than all 5 canon books? There are only a couple fanfics that I have ever followed and few were consistently as reliable as the Sunset/Sunrise series- in terms of both quality and regular updates. I don't know what I'll read without a new installment every few weeks. Hopefully, Full Pensieve will step up and start writing some more. But, it's been a great ride and Congratulations to you both on an amazing accomplishment!! I know that you are planning two post-Vol chapters, which I will look forward to, but it's really been smashing fun to read for the past couple years.