Sunrise Over Britain
Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
By Bobmin
Reviews
avatar99 posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 9:58am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Hey crazy couple!
I love the story and would be glad to read another when this is done. Bob keep doing the crazy disclaimers they're hillarious. Alyx please keep Bob grounded and burst his ego from time to time otherwise your stories will get ridiculous.
With much love from Staten Island
Thomas
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 7:00am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
A good reminder that life goes on. Harry's dealt with the biggest item, but there are plenty more items requiring his and the Brotherhood's attentions. After some R&R, I don't think any of them will be bored for a long time to come. The opposite problem might apply, though.
Delfis posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 3:58am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Well, that little paragraph at the end of your author note got me. I never reviewed before, depite the fact that I faithfully checked the site for updates since "sunset over Britain". Needless to say, I loved your story. I felt the development of your characters totally believable. The plot was very well thought of and the relationship between your characters complex enough to keep one interested. What more to say that good job!... and that I really hope to read more fantastic sories from you in the future.... and sorry for not reviewing before!
Oskar Fuentes posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 3:56am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
*reads Alyx's note about those who don't review*... *feels ashamed of himself* Ok, Ok, I admit it, I'm a HUGE fan. I don't like reviewing because I don' actually think there's something important to say, you are REAlLY good and I love you humour, I also appreciate the fact that you made Harry more human (leg-wise) and, well... I don't know I just freaking love everything, specially the weird disclaimers you sometimes have, here's a donut! and.. pizza! *coughs* I mean... here's an e-donut and a slice of e-pizza! and... e-cookies with e-milk (eugh xD)... anyway I'm just filling some space. Kudos!!! *waves* Hope to read you soon.
devil_pm posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 12:03am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
well m writing a review for the first time and have to say that this has been one of the best HP FF work that i have read........though at times i found it too sentimental in places but well every person to his opinion........and one of the things i appreciated the most was ur regularity of updates and ur commitment towards this project....hoping to read more of ur amazing work.........
kelvin posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 8:42pm for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
you guys rocks
Alorkin posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 11:19am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
A nice wrap-up. There's still plenty of work to keep them all occupied for the next year or twenty, but that can be left out. Eocho's demise(?) was touching in the extreme. As a mentor of the brotherhood, he gave of himself, for the order. Very Jedi.
King Chuck is more personable than in RL, but that's to be expected, I guess.
I have thoroughly enjoyed the entirety of Sunrise and Sunset. Both are wonderful stories which I will introduce to my daughter as soon as I feel she is ready. Alorkin
Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 3:10pm for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Awesome story one of the best.
Tangerine posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 11:56am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Wow. I get back from my long internet hiatus, and I see not one, but two new chapters! I really have enjoyed them and the story is still as cracktastic as it has been!
tim fields posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 11:16am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Like it.....YES
Appreciate it....VERY MUCH SO
Understand how hard it it to writr something of substance and consistency....definetly
Reading it and your other stories....enjoyed every damn word
Opinions....agree with Bob....BOOK SIX SUCKED
THANKS
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 11:09am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Excellent chapter. I am glad to see an author who knows how to end a story. You won't see many puclished novels that just end ten seconds after the climax. You have to have the conclusion, but that is lacking in any substance on many fanfiction stories.
Thank you for writing. I look forward to the end of this and whatever catches your attention following.
Mike (MoA)
Rob Clark posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 9:57am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Awesome story. Gritty in places, but well plotted, great characterization, overall a fine job.
Rob
Katia posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 8:47am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
This story is the best long fanfiction i ever fortunaly read. it's awesome, and it feels really real.
i admire the creative! U ARE THE BEST Bob and Alyx
Kyle Bissett posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 6:12am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
What happened to the Blackwatch? You flat out stated that they'd be the point unit in retaking Muggle Britain, but now everything in the operation except the cleanup is over and they haven't been mentioned.
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 5:01am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Firstly I see absolutely nothing wrong with a hero having a disability, I mean Daredevil was blind thats a disability, Professor X was crippled again a disability and the list goes on. Secondly you doing all of the spells from now on in Klingon should be very interesting, but to be totally honest I didn't think you guys have done that bad of a job with the different languages you've used and I see no point to change something you do so well but if your going to stop using online translators then what are you going to use books? I don't see bob as the look up a word in a language dictionary kind of person no offense bob. Anyways I wait to see what happens in the end!!
beauty0102 posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 3:49am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.
Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 1:29am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
Just an additional thought.
The King may need to exercise the Royal Perogative to create some peerages here that will be inheritable.
Since Dukedoms are restricted to members of the Royal Family, what does "saving the Kingdom" earn Harry ... an Earldom? [That unique British title that would make him an Earl and Hermione a Countess.]
D.
Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 1:08am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
You continue to write a really convincing version of reality, often better than JKR's stuff.
Even though SoB(2) is coming to an end, I hope you will continue to write and post your works here.
Best wishes, always.
D.
lilskippy posted a comment on Friday 13th April 2007 12:23am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock
I don't think I have reviewed any of the stories I have read from you guys yet, but I have to say they have all been great. I am not a huge H/Hr person but this story as all the others was well written keep it up.
MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 16th April 2007 1:48am for Chapter 32 - Taking Stock