r00ney posted a comment on Thursday 23rd April 2015 8:38pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Excellent Story, many thanks for writing and sharing it!

Monki666 posted a comment on Tuesday 21st April 2015 10:28am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Hey guys love this series and all the rest of your books I've reade them all about 3-4 times each and I just can't get enough of them

jenny9010 posted a comment on Monday 27th October 2014 2:30pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Hi!

My name is jenny9010, and i checked it in my writer, this two fics are roughly 1950 pages long according to it.

So, as a girl thats barely managed a measly 20 pages unfinished, soon discharged one shot i think youre awsome.

sorry bout the spelling, enlglish is not my mothertounge, cheers!

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Thursday 31st July 2014 6:51pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

If you printed this story, it would be 869 pages long.

myrthe1203 posted a comment on Sunday 6th July 2014 1:02pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Standing, he smiled gently. "If your parents want a fight, they'll get it. I think you'll find that they back down very quickly, once they realize just whose standing beside you."

Whose should be who's or who is.

Thanks for posting.

sfjoellen posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2014 9:03pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

great story.. one of the classics of fanfiction. thanks for writing it!

anf600 posted a comment on Friday 14th March 2014 10:26pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Awesome pair of stories. Thank you for writing them.

atymer posted a comment on Wednesday 8th January 2014 1:17am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

First I wanted to comment on the disclaimers. I was giggling, laughing out loud, incredulous and irritated. They ran the gauntlet of humor and I wondered what recreational substances supported this effort or if the writers suffered from acute sleep deprivation over a period of months or years. lol

Very exciting is an understatement for this story. I was on the edge worried over who might die and really did a happy dance at the end. The humor appeared at just the right moments and had just the right tone, not over the top considering the circumstances but not gallows humor either. I want to thank the authors for Mr. Trenton Largo and Ms. McFerrson, because I enjoyed their reaction to those stupid interviews as much as the embarassment of the idiot attempting to undermine Harry and his friends. I nearly found myself under the table a few times.

I appreciated that as powerful as Harry was he kept an awareness that using that power could harm more than help if abused. I also was happy he wasn't whiny! And also Kudos for Hermione being so in character that I wanted to smack her sometimes. I did appreciate that she didn't just acknowledge her errors but actively pursued correcting her misconceptions and made attempts to cease jumping to conclusions. She came across as honest, brave and resourceful without being anything like a super woman.

Thanks for saving Draco in a credible manner and finding him with Luna delighted me. His future state of perpetual embarassment and bemusement will keep him breathing oxygen instead of helium for the rest of his life. No question Luna is my fav female character from the HP stories and I loved her here.

Over all this story and its prequel or keepers. I am sure I will be reading this again.

amaris8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th April 2013 8:35am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I've now managed to read this story twice in the past 6 months of my deployment, it's just that good and for that I thank you both!!! I've also read some of your other stories on both this site and ffn.com, I always enjoy your twist on things as well as your disclaimers. Thank you again for writing such awesome stories!!

Nytefyre posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2012 4:31pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Finally finished - this was a great series. I've enjoyed your well thought out characterizations and the fact that you didn't make anyone overpowered. Very well balanced and fun to read. Thanks, again, for posting!

crazylady posted a comment on Monday 12th November 2012 4:31am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

for crazy people you write very good stories, many thanks for helping to keep this crazy lady sane with the wonderful distraction from real life

THANK YOU

GBTtown posted a comment on Friday 17th August 2012 8:51pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Not exactly sure how I managed to miss Sunset and Sunrise. I have read and enjoyed other stories by Bobmin. I must say however, this/these rank in my all time favorites written in the HP universe.

ChiaraV posted a comment on Sunday 3rd June 2012 7:52am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Hi Bob & Alyx,

well what can I say that hundreds, no thousands of adoring fans have not already said? You have once again created a superbly engaging story that is creatively unique in the Pottersphere and I cannot thank you guys enough for your fabulous stories. Yes they are very sleep depriving but your collected worked here and on fan fiction.net are a testament to your storytelling skills. I agree with the other reviewers who have said that you guys should write your own stories because I think you would be amazing, however not if it means it will deprive us of seeing your wacky disclaimers and author notes here here :)

keep up the excellent work guys!!

mistys12 posted a comment on Thursday 17th May 2012 3:12pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Thank You...The worth of a true author is how they affect there readers, in your story you have covered it all!

ikbenik posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2012 10:56am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Hi! I just wanna say I've absolutely loved reading this story. Still can't believe I've just read a million words... Both the size and contents of the story are, in one word, BIG. And it's still sad the story has to end. Oh well, you've written other stories ;-). Thanks for the many hours of reading pleasure you've given me!

Jtc posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2012 1:18pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

This definitly qualifies as better late than never but since I finally got my real name removed from the site, I can leave a review. I enjoyed both of your Sunrise Universe stories.

I like how you developed Hr/H, and the other relationships and how you integrated your OCs into the stories. That takes skill, often OCs just kind of dangle awkwardly and don't fit in at all. I also like your understanding of war and battle planning. My husband is a retired LTC USAR so I couldn't escape knowing something about it. I prefer your version of the Monarchy to real life--and you are, after all, telling a story. I definiely think yours is better than Half Blood Prince and the books that came after it. What was JKR thinking, and in books marketed for children.

The only thing I did not like was Dumbledore, not that you turned him into a bad guy (I didn't thing much of him when he knowingly left Harry in an abusive home) but his motivation was a bit weak. This is a common failing in 'bad Dumbledore' stories. Maybe you should have shown him going looney tunes a bit earlier, that made more sense.

I have also enjoyed your other stories and will review as I can. I do challenge you to do another good Snape story. Your writing may have been more basic in your first two stories but I confess to enjoying that. And yes, I know Snape is not Alan Rickman but ff is for fun,.

amsev posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 3:52pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Excellent, excellent story! I spent all the time I could reading it (leaving only for work and the rest room -- meals I could eat in front of the computer)

I enjoy your writing so much that I'm going to have to force myself to go read one of your H/G stories. I'm really not into that ship because I've read so many Ginny-as-a-fangirl stories that it's hard to get past that. Knowing your compelling writing will help me get over that will make it easier to read...

Job well done!

FeNo posted a comment on Monday 19th March 2012 11:03am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Whow, simply whow!

all this words, all these pages, all this work. How could it end up as anything other than one of the most legendary fanfics in existance? It's far too much to comment in detail, but you've done a hell of a job with constructing your timeline, planning your progress and executing your devious ideas en large and en detail!

Thank you for your love and dedication to HP Fanfic that made this (and the prequel Sunset over Britain) possible. Five books worth of brilliant fanfic make it far more sufferable that there won't be any "official" books anymore (and Pottermore sucks ;))

AGirlCalledKadence posted a comment on Sunday 1st January 2012 3:20pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I've spent the last week busting through the two Sunset stories. My partner has given up bothering to try to get me to do dishes or laundry until I've finished. I'm incredibly happy to have found this fic, and really, this site, as well written fanfiction is awfully hard to come by.

I applaud the effort the two of you have put into this story, and I'm sure I'll be looking into more of your work.

Paco Weasley posted a comment on Wednesday 19th October 2011 7:31pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I can't believe it's over. I almost stopped part way through sunset because of the negativity, and now I'm soooo glad that I didn't. Both stories kept my attention. I couldn't leave my computer. I honestly don't have any tips for your writing. I loved both stories to death. The only thing I really skipped over was the disclaimers that made you both look completely insane.