kelvin posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 2:31pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Wow, I just want to say that after 2 years (if my files are correct you start around aug 05) and a 1M words later, It has been a great journey for me. This is some of the best fics I have read. I will see you again next time you post your next fic.

cyz later

Darke Gray posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 1:48pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Well I have to say that these two stories are some of the greatest fanfiction I have ever read. I honestly loved Sunset and Sunrise kept me hooked and wanting more after every knew chapter. I really enjoyed the ending, I like how you didn't follow it up until their deaths like a lot of stories do, you gave enough of their time afterwards to let us know they are finally happy and you left it so that the Brotherhoods story does not end here (even though it technically does since you aren't continuing them). Anyways, it was a great story and I hope to read more of them from you guys.

detoj posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 1:20pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

great series. I look forward to whatever's next for you guys.

Nyssa posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 12:36pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

So it took me this long to review. I'm not really one to review a story until it's done. I absolutely loved this story and I'm so sad taht it's finished, but happy at the same time. Kinda confusing, eh? It was so well written that I checked my inbox everyday hoping that a new chapter would be posted. I look forward to anything else that you write

n4zhg posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 12:15pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Great job, you two.

Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 10:59am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Awesome work.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 10:50am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Awesome Ending!!!! I can't wait to see what you guys do next. To be honest I would love to see your take on a Harry Potter Xmen Crossover that would be cool. All of your other ideas you listed off also sound very cool and I can't wait to see what other gems of fanfiction you two come up with.

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 10:05am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

As to the question: 'How many pages?' If you take our the witty A/N's and just live the text, you have about 1,204 pages (using .5 inches on all the margins).

As to the story its self, what can I do but tip by hat to two of the true masters of fanfiction.

It's just too bad this story will only be play in the movie screens of our minds. I would love to see a 'Lord of the Rings' type movie made up of these two stories.

Please let us all know when your next work is ready.

rdg2000

Sarah Hunt posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 9:49am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I don't usually review. I don't feel that I have the right to say what is right or wrong with a story, when I have never tried myself. I will simply say: Thank you.

strings posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 9:41am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I just wanted to say that I truly enjoyed the many hours I spent reading your stories. I look forward to your future work. You two make a great team.

Strings

Kari Becker posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 9:25am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

omg, it's over. i'm really going to miss this story. i can't imagine how hard it is for you both to let go. it's been such a big part of my life, almost as much as the real harry potter books. you did an amazing job and i'm going to miss waiting patiently for the next chapter to come out. i will for sure be with you when you decide to go on your next writing adventure. thank you so much for the months of fun, tears, adventures, and love. thank you for a story i will always remember. good luck on everything else you do!! :)

Blaithin posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 8:13am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Wanted to add my appreciation for your work to the others you have been receiving. The two of you are among a handful of Fan Fiction writers who respect the characters as presented by their "birth mother", but then also see the importance of character development, continuity, and logical plot development. And a respect for the english language. Too many of those who aspire to write get ahead of themselves in their excitement and ignore the nuances. While your storyline has not always been pleasant or easy to read, the total experience has been an excellent read. I have eagerly anticipated each new chapter of the Sun works, and I look forward to your new endeavors. Thank you again for your efforts and best wishes to you both.

alkeria7089 posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 7:54am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Thank you very much for the story.

ShadeHawk posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 6:26am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Nice chapter. I liked the T-shirt writings very much.

mcfeedfest posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 6:18am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Very nicely done, probably the last hp story i'll ever read but i would like to wish you the best of luck for both of you. Take care, sides who knows i may stumble across one of ur stories on a recomendation from another author =).

uberwald posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 5:25am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Bravo. :)

Ekaterin posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 4:22am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Great stories.Thank you very much

lordblack posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 3:44am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I, of course, LOVE IT!!!!!!

goofie posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 2:20am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

First of all, I must say thanks you for the good time you 2 provide us. This is my firts review even if I follow your storie since Dumbledore's Army on ff.net . I was always looking forward to the next update. Since english isn't my fisrt language and I was able to follow the whole way, then your writting must be pretty good.

Thanks you again and see you on your next storie.

By the way, in Arial 15 the whole storie take 2102 pages and got a little over 627 000 words.

Liska posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 1:57am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

First of all, I would like to say that even though I didn't start reading until a few chapters ago (yes it took me a long time to catch up) I loved this story and the prequel. I love the characterizations. And just so you know, while I didn't print it out, I did move both this story and Sunset over to word so I could read off line. Sunset ended up 814 pages and Sunrise ended up... (drum roll please) 1665 pages. Congratulations. I've written novels that are barely a fraction of that.