jlar posted a comment on Friday 14th October 2011 12:51am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I have greatly enjoyed this series, reading it back to back and staying up much to late to read it all. Thank you.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Wednesday 24th August 2011 3:14pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Weren't Harry and Hermione supposed to name their daughter after the female soldier that saved Harry and died in the process?

Great story set.

ninjastars posted a comment on Monday 4th July 2011 11:37am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

WOW!!! Once again I am amazed by your writing abilities (both of you since, I'm guessing, you write every chapter together..?). I am so happy that I found Dumbledore's Army all those weeks ago. I am also glad to see a very well written Harry/Hermione story. The way the characters are portrayed shows much more of their true character then J.K shows in her books. And while you did veer extremely hard away from the actual HP books, I think your portrayal of the characters is much more realistic. I loved that you turned Dan and Emma magical. I also loved how you showed the couples being intimate. Too many stories are filled with excessive smut that takes over the actual plot of the story. The way you faded out once the reader had the general idea was brilliant. It was neither 'in your face' obvious nor was it too vague satisfying (hopefully) all readers.
In short both Sunset and Sunrise were wonderfully well written stories. I am so glad that I had the chance to read them. You both are amazing authors.

~NS

ray74656 posted a comment on Friday 6th May 2011 8:15pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Great story. I was very impressed with the way you showed the love between Harry and Hermione. Says a lot about the authors.

willboon posted a comment on Monday 21st March 2011 9:48pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

i loved this story

Starman800 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th February 2011 7:23am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Wow. Is all i can really say about this story, well both of them really. Wow. This story was great 1 of the best i have ever read, it took me like a week or so to read them but what a read. I loved it.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Sunday 16th January 2011 3:35pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Wow. You two wrote a masterpiece. I laughed, a lot, teared up a little, but most of all, this series made me think. My way of judging whether a story is good is how much it stays in yours thoughts after you finish it, and I can honestly say this one will be in my thoughts for a very long time. In one of my first reviews of Sunset, I said this might be one of my top 5 favorite fics. It's not. It IS my favorite. Well done.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 6:45pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

OMG....All I can say is "What a GREAT Run!!!" I just finished reading SoB and SoB (lol) over the last week almost to the point of not sleeping...Thanks both of you for all of your hard work and sleepless nights...and now on to the next!!!!!! Tcl7189

missindy posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 3:14pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I started reading this story when you originally published it. I eagerly awaited each chapter, but work and school got in the way, and I got behind. I have now finally been able to reread the entire thing, and I think I like it even better now than I did before. I kinda want to read it again already. Thanks for writing it. You guys are awesome! :)

h4hr posted a comment on Friday 17th December 2010 7:59pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I loved this series. Your "standard disclaimer" was a hoot. I ussually only read H/Hr stories but I may read something of yours that is not strickly h/hr. I always wondered why JKR didn't include more of dobby when h/hr were looking for the horcrux's since Dobby could have gotten food and stuff for them. Anyway, I loved the militarized elfs in your story. I hope you continue to write stories and a few of h/hr. I liked how you got rid of the "dead weight/git" of one Ron Weasley as I never thought he was really a friend to Harry at all. Snape bashing is always fun and yes Dumbles got what he deserved.

I wrote one story and found the writing to be fun but difficult to maintain "in character" with different characters. I never got around to publishing it even though those few who read it liked it. Maybe someday I'll take the plunge.

Keep writing as you are getting better with each story, so that means your best story is yet to be written.

Steve, a Harry/Hermione fan.

have-a-little-priest posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 9:49pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I loved it! Long as it was (between the two SoBs 2,213pages at size8font) it was wonderful! Thank you for the humor alongside all the hardships!

Songbird posted a comment on Monday 1st November 2010 11:35am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

This is my second time through this story and I found even more to love than the first time I read it. Thank you for all that you put into your stories, the hard work shows. Please continue to write as it would be a sad day when you stop!

Songbird posted a comment on Monday 1st November 2010 11:34am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

THis is my second time through this story and I found even more to love than the first time I read it. Thank you for all that you put into your stories, the hard work shows. Please continue to write as it would be a sad day when you stop!

cmcbride799 posted a comment on Sunday 31st October 2010 8:33am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

This was really really Good

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 12:38pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Dear Bob and Alyx,
I love all your stories and so far I think I have them all printed out. I just reread the Sun Series and I was please at how much detail I had forgotten. Don't be sorry about that. It gives me the ability to be surprised and enjoy the story again like I did the first time. I went back to read the stories again while I wait for the next installment of Mutant Storm. I understand that you are writing away while all your rabid readers are waiting. I think in my weak mind I remember you saying you wanted to complete a certain amount of the story before you continue to post. Thanks for all the writing you have done. I look forward to reading whatever you wish to write. Thanks so much for your contribution to the Potterverse. pms

NuitTombee posted a comment on Wednesday 6th October 2010 12:42am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

I feel sad now too. But as they say...

"...all good things must come to an end."
- Q to Picard.

sfjoellen posted a comment on Monday 27th September 2010 7:21pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

really excellent..

Magic8888 posted a comment on Sunday 15th August 2010 8:14am for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Wow. I have been looking forward to a "new" H/Hr story for quite a while when I can across this and "Sunset". Both were excellent! THANKS!!!

guamja posted a comment on Friday 30th July 2010 3:13pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

Great set of stories...Thank you.

loretta537 posted a comment on Monday 19th July 2010 11:59pm for Chapter 33 - Of Endings and Beginnings

this was great! yes i took longer to read sunrise than i did sunset, but stopped once or twice to read other things instead of reading this straight through