John Pinkston posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 9:15pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

I knew it. The AK enema was such a sick, and twisted idea that it makes us all shudder and think of the possibilities. The only thing worse is Snape in a thong, it makes me want to claw my eyes out. Anyway, don't make us wait to long for the next chapter, and keep up the good work.

rippergirl posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 11:05am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Yay you answered my question(and I'm sure others)about Hagrid and where he was. Wow awesome chapter(as usual). Nice to see that Charlie is getting back on the right side of things. Was hoping he wouldn't go completely bad. Good to see that Dumbhead is out of Haven as well. Bad that he hurt Harry when it happened but good that he is gone. Can't wait to see the handfasting ceremony occur. Can't wait for the next chapter to arrive period. Yay your chappie made my day. I saw that it was updated yesterday and was seriously debating staying up past my bedtime to read it but held off. I ended up thinking about it all day at work though. It just made the chapter even better though. Until next time.

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 10:17am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

^.^

I'm a tad suprised that dumb-bumble actually decided to fight... and what was it that Ginny detected? was it just dumbledor's presence? or had he cast somthing on the bar to help himself?

noylj posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 8:41am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Wish Ginny could join Harry/Hermione. It wouldnt' be realistis, but it would give suppport and xtrenth h'll need

igotbannedfroma2k posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 7:53am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Great job on this chapter. It took me about an hour to read it. I love stories like that!
Lol.
Please update as soon as possible!
And I hope you feel better Alyx!
~Banned

Jimbocous posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 7:45am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Just because I get the opportunity so seldom with you guys, a minor errata (as in sentence mess:)

"The economy in Haven are really starting to take off, Harry. I know that normally Bill Weasley gives this report, but since he's busy this morning, and as I have some other good news, he asked me to pass along," Remus said in a neutral tone.

Lurk posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 7:07am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Great chapter! w00! and Charlie is SAVED!!!! ...I hope. Not QUITE sure how Harry's gonna react. Stupid Ass Dumbledore. So close, but so far! A perfect way to taunt us all.

Keep it up!

Patrick3 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 6:30am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

I love your stories!!!! The first story I read from you is "Sunset Over Britan" But I had some technical difficulties with my PC and by the time I came back to read the story it was deleted from the facfiction website. I did search for your fic in some other websites but I couldn't find it anywhere and that was when I started reading some of Kinsfire's fics and came to this website and found the fic here. (FINALLY!!!!) :) But in a twisted way it was good for me to loose track of this story and find it now, b/c I don't think I could've taken all the suspense in the first story when you left the readers hanging with your cliffies(I hate them, and think they should be made illegal) So now I got to read your whole story from the begining to keep up with the rest. Anyway, I got some stories for your The UPDATELESS LIST!!! if you want. The stories are very well written, and has good plot line, but the authors didn't update the stories for a long time and I kinda lost track of where to find them.
anyway here's one
1)Harry Potter and the Black Grimoire by Erunantala
2)Harry Potter and Ancardia (don't remember the author name) Very Good story, one of the best i've read in that website. But the problem is that the author for this story had a bad habit of abandoning his/her(don't remeber that either) fics in the middle and all of his/her fics were very good. And they were long too. Very long. I think that fanfiction removed this story from the website like they removed all of the other good stories.
Well thats all I have for now! Please update soon!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter
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P.S..........um...sorry for the long review, I didn't mean to ramble on like that.

AJ4 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 6:01am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Another great chapter! I really hope you can update soon to find out what happens next! And those shirts of Harry's happen to be my favorite part of each chapter! --AJ : )

sugarbear68 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 2:22am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Just a quick note to say how much I enjoy this story series. I'm not usually a H/Hr-shipper, but this works. Right after Chap 7 and the note about "Harry Potter and the Mind Mage" by James Milamber, I was notified that there was an update. Basically, the update said the the story was being moved to www. wizardtales. net. Keep up the good work!

~sb68~

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 1:54am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

And the games continue. Good chapter that advances several threads. Well worth the wait.

Prodipan Sengupta posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 12:25am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

i like these long updates,but i will much prefer shorter updates with shorter delay in between.
of course,long updates with short delays are much better...

TheBlackPearl posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 11:31pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Wow, this was the most exciting chapter yet!

Loved the connection with the Brotherhood when Ginny 'called out' during her session with Eocho and Remus.

Harry and Hermione got some nice fluffy moments there.

And the dementor/DE attack was fantabulous. Loved how Luna got rid of them, with Harry's help.

Finally, Charlie knows the truth and a confrontation with Dumbledore.

I hope the next update is soon.

Pam

Renzo7 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 11:20pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

nice work, keep it up!

question: do you guys dislike this kind of reviews where people don't really say anything? if so let us know so we stop reviewing unless we have something we'd particularly want to point out or state.

patrik svensson posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 9:27pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

darkslifer posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:35pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

what ever became of molly, is she dead or not.....great chapter by the way, as always

Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:18pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Well, this one was very exciting! I can't wait for the next one. I never want them to end. You guys have taken it to a height that I believe will make JK have to put in overtime. All this and my favorite character Ron Weasley is dead and was a prat! So obviously the story must be great!

Roary posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 2:11pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Hey guys
Brilliant chapter as usual. Wish you would do away with Dumbledore once and for all. I mean here Harry is all powerful, and one pesky old man is giving him so much grief.
You know that it is strange to hate Dumbledore so much, because I do love him in canon.
Anyway, keep up the good work.
In fact, some of your disclaimers are almost better than the story.
Cheers mate
roary

anonymous5 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 12:24pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

This is the most exasperating combination of resolution and cliffhanger I have ever read. EVER. That is meant as a compliment, except inasmuch as I want to throttle you. :) Update fast, please!!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 8:52am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Another wonderful chapter after a long and painful wait. I am very glad that Alyx is feeling better - and am certain that my wife would be happy to loan you her husband swatter (also spelled baseball bat) if you need it to keep Bob from giving damaging bites. {She actually likes the gentle nibbles}.

Thanks for resolving the Charlie arc - can't wait to see how DD tries to explain away the burns on 40% of his body.

Warmest Regards and best wishes