Alex00 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 8:12am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Awsome chapter

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 7:46am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

I am relieved Charlie came around without getting hurt. That is yet, I have to remember.

The dementor attack was different, and Luna's part was totally inventive and unique.

The memorial for those who've died was finely done.

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 6:37am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

I'm not even wearing my knickers and they're in a twist!

Small favors, eh? :)

Ariyana posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 6:35am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Nice work. I really liked the chapter.

goddessa39 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 6:29am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Love it! Can't wait till you continue. I do love Harry's shirts. Luna should get together with Hagrid and introduce him to her 'angels.' That would be a nice little touch. Bringing the Squib to Haven? Sounds nice, but maybe you should widen the waterhole and make it a mini zoo with maybe some kinda of magickal hippo and the mermaids or something. CONTINUE SOON!

cyberpurple posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 6:27am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

As always well written and a plot that grabs you and leaves you wanting more. I love this story.

Yojo posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:49am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Excellent chapter, I love that the Dumbledore manipulation situation of the Weasleys is finally resolved. I am curious about how many uses each chaos cauldron have (in other words how powerful Voldie's inner circle can become): are they like any cauldron and he could make everyone more powerful or do the potions corrode it so you only get a certain number of uses? Anyway, excellent job, and I look forward to your next update.

beauty01021 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:32am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

yeah great chapter can't wait for more.

Kristina posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 3:07am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

really good chapter, you guys. i can't wait to see what happened next!

James16 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 2:24am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Nah, the other story just takes a damned long time to update. I have been following it for some time. We might see an update by the end of April, if not, then it is definitly abandoned.

vertru posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 1:45am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Hi guys, another great chapter. Lots of great action toward the end there. DD is sure a putz in this one, can see the logical progression of getting him to this point, well done. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, no excuse, but I'm working on my own story at this url: http://www.ficwad.com/viewuser.php?uid=10035
if you're interested in reading a seventh year story with a twist. :-) Keep up the good work, I always look forward to your updates. Vern

Nicole Kirner posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 1:38am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

hello there, i love your story and hope that u forgive me my mistakes, i am from germany.
i hope that u will write soon again.
bye nicki

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 1:19am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Another cliffy, things are starting to come around. I cant wait for the next update. I cant beleve you let Dumbasadoor get away. But I know that you two are evil and like to keep us readers hanging from the rafters. Keep up the great writing Bob and Alyx.

MPF

PS when are you going to transfer DA and SC to this site.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 1:12am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Giving us mental wedgies? You rascals.

Keep up the great work, and don't let the discomfort of the masses distract you, ok?

Cheers, Michelle

merf425 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 1:00am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

You know what's a bit freaky? Yesterday I was at the main site looking for something to read and wishing you would update! I'll have to try that more often, LOL.

Thanks for posting this! It was awesome as usual. Do we get the weddings next time?

Kyle Bissett posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 12:21am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

It's been a long time since you did anything with Susan and Terry. Since they are barely mentioned in canon, apart from the fact that they exist, there's pretty much a blank slate to work with there. Perhaps you can give them some development?

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 12:10am for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

I really like the memorial idea... it has a bit of Japanese flair to it and also reminds me of the Arizona memorial in Pearl Harbor...

You should let Alyx write more of the disclaimers Bob... but please don't play with your marbles while she's doing it...

I'm still a firm believer that Hugh Jackman should have played Sirius in the movies... now HIM I would like to see in a thong... too bad we can't have Sirius back some how... perhaps a portal to the veil that drops him directly into the center of Haven... Oh never mind, I will just use that for my own work...

Take care to you both...

As Always,
Muirnin

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 11:30pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

I'm really enjoying reading your story.

AK posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 11:08pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

Hum Dumbledore was ratted out! poor poor ol' man!
How come they became so lax in their security thow? they had been warned of the dementors coming (and btw how come the dementors can cross the boundies?).
Is Harry gona face an internal struggle for power in Haven?

Bobmin356 replied:

Dementors do not have a dark mark so there is no reason why they shouldn't be able to cross the boundary.

Kevin Hendricks posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 10:40pm for Chapter 9 - The Pain of Birth

This is the first of your "updateless list" entries that I hope never gets updated. The writing/plot/dialogue is simply horrible. Poor choice - did you run out of good candidates?